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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also
be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world
Advantage-reputation-many tourists-cultures/traditions/history/popular/taj-mahal -India
Advantage-global hospitability-interaction between
locals-foreigner/culture-lifestyle/understanding/cultural awareness/friendship/rasicm
Disadvantage
INTRODUCTION
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Tourism is often considered as way to boost economy in many parts of the world, despite its potential
for some issues.
Position
While tourism will contribute several benefits,such as increased popularity of a counrty and global
hospitability, it bring some drawbacks, including environmental problems and overcrowding in some
cities
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Tourism has some advantages over the world, one of which is the global fame a country can [Link]
visiting a place,tourists are likely to learn about values,cultural traditions,history and even lifestyle of
that [Link] means that they serve as a way of making a country well-known over the world by
sharing their experiences with others after their travel. Their awareness of people about that places
may increase ,thus growing popularity of a country. For example,many individuals have interest in
visiting India-a country which is famous with its Tajmahal visited by millions of tourists every
[Link] possible positive side of tourism can be strong international [Link] is because tourists
might make interactions with locals during their visits,resulting in learning about their
culture,[Link] awareness can increase undertanding and toleration toward others values,reducing
racism over the [Link],in turn,can can establish a close friendship among people regardless of their
nation,religion or language.
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Despite these benefits,tourism may lead to several issues…
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