Intro: dung va nhanh
The maps give information about future changes that are proposed to a road system to improve driver
safety.
Overview: thay doi de thay nhat
Overall, the proposed changes will include the restructuring of the city road and the construction of
traffic solutions, such as new traffic lights and a roundabout.
Body 1: gom theo khu vuc
North: phia nam (khac biet nho la neu north dung chi nuoc khac, northern dung chi huong
nao trong 1 nuoc)
Northern: huong nam , vung huong khu vuc
Widen: mo rong cho duong/// expand: danh cho toa nha mo rong 4 huong
t-junction : nga 3
bottleneck:
intend:
intersection (n): nga tu => intersect (v): giao nhau
access to sth: tiep can cho nao do
branch off:
fork
Ta vi tri
Ta thay doi
Looking first at the northwestern side, the intersection between city road and low land where accidents
happen frequently, will be controlled by traffic lights, intended to make access to the school safer.
Furthermore, city road will be straightened to eliminate its shape bends. At the south end of low lane,
the current bottleneck is expected to widened to increase safety of residents living on both side of the
lane.
Regarding the remaining areas of the road system, a roundabout will be contructed where city road and
forest road intersect to better regulate the flow of traffic. Finally, shoppers in thw future will be able to
access the supermarket from a new road branching off the roundabout, instead of the current accident-
prone route from city road
Be Prone to sth /// adj +prone
The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by
selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps give information about the layout of a school as it was in 1985 and how it has
been changed now.
Overall, the most significant changes include the restructuring of the layout and the
construction of new facilities, such as a pool and a fitness centre.
The diagram below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now
The maps give information about the changes in the village in 1995 and how it has changed
since then
Overall, the significant changes include the removal of the fishing port and the construction
of entertainment facilities, along with an increase in housing units.
Looking first at the southern side of the village, the fishing port has been eliminated, while
the fish markets along the shore have been turned into many apartments. In addition, many
shops situated to the north of the fish markets have been replaced by many restaurants.
The café located to the east side of the fish market has remained unchanged, while the
hotel situated to the north side of the café has been equipped with an additional car park.
Regarding the remaining areas of the village, in the northeastern side, the farmland and the
forest park have been made smaller and converted into a golf course and a tennis court.
The number of housing units on both sides of the main road has been increased and there
are many housing units along a road branching off the main road.
1. "The maps give information about the changes in the village in 1995 and how it has
changed since then."
🔹 Gợi ý: "The maps illustrate how the village has changed since 1995."
→ Câu này gọn hơn và tự nhiên hơn.
2. "Overall, the significant changes include the removal of the fishing port and the
construction of entertainment facilities, along with an increase in housing units."
🔹 Gợi ý: "Overall, the village has undergone significant transformations, including
the removal of the fishing port, the development of entertainment facilities, and an
expansion of housing."
→ "Undergo transformations" nghe tự nhiên hơn, "expansion of housing" thay cho
"increase in housing units" để mượt hơn.
3. "Looking first at the southern side of the village, the fishing port has been
eliminated, while the fish markets along the shore have been turned into many
apartments."
🔹 Gợi ý: "Starting with the southern part of the village, the fishing port has been
removed, and the fish markets along the shore have been converted into several
apartment buildings."
→ "Converted into" nghe hay hơn "turned into".
4. "In addition, many shops situated to the north of the fish markets have been
replaced by many restaurants."
🔹 Gợi ý: "Additionally, the shops previously located north of the fish markets have
been replaced by a series of restaurants."
→ Tránh lặp "many", thay bằng "a series of".
5. "The café located to the east side of the fish market has remained unchanged, while
the hotel situated to the north side of the café has been equipped with an additional
car park."
🔹 Gợi ý: "The café to the east of the fish market remains unchanged, whereas a car
park has been added to the hotel to the north of the café."
→ "Remains unchanged" (hiện tại đơn) tốt hơn "has remained unchanged" vì đây là một
trạng thái ổn định.
6. "The number of housing units on both sides of the main road has been increased
and there are many housing units along a road branching off the main road."
🔹 Gợi ý: "The number of houses on both sides of the main road has grown, and
additional housing units have been built along a newly constructed road branching
off from the main road."
→ "Has grown" tự nhiên hơn "has been increased", và "newly constructed road" làm rõ
rằng con đường này mới được xây.
