Bài viết mẫu 1:
Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think
that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of both places. - yêu cầu dưa ra cả hai mặt lợi và hại - không cần nêu ý
kiến
Sample:
Some individuals believe that raising children in the country is an ideal option, while
others think that cities provide a much better living opportunity. In this essay, the
advantages and disadvantages of both places will be discussed.
Firstly, the countryside allows children to be in touch with nature, taking care of
animals and helping with gardening. As a result, children can learn to protect the
environment and live without modern conveniences. Additionally, they are able to
play outside without being concerned about their safety as when they are in the city,
where they are kept inside and driven towards using smartphones and computers. On
the contrary, schools in the city typically offer lower-quality education and it can be
challenging to find extracurricular activities. Children can encounter many challenges
when participating in extracurricular activities outside of the classroom.
However, schools in metropolitan areas tend to have better quality and offer all kinds
of activities. It is still feasible to find a sport or art course in the city. As a result, it can
be much simpler for all kids to discover their abilities and hobbies at an early age. On
the other hand, parents constantly have to be conscious of the security, pollution, and
lack of access to nature. Therefore, a city where kids could play in parks and gardens
would be a preferable choice.
To sum up, growing up in the countryside can be very positive for someone’s
childhood, but the city will usually offer better opportunities for their talents’
development.
2.2. Dạng 2: Do The Advantages Outweigh The Disadvantages? hoặc Do The
Benefits Outweigh The Drawbacks?
Bố cục:
Introduction
● Paraphrasing
● Thesis statement (Ở dạng này, câu thesis statement phải nêu được quan điểm
khía cạnh nào quan trọng hơn.)
Body
● Paragraph 1: Weaker Side - chiều ý kiến em không ủng hộ
● Paragraph 2: Stronger Side - chiều ý kiến mà em ủng hộ
VD; trẻ em nên được dạy về tiền bạc sớm, em nghĩ là lợi ích đánh bại tác hại hay
không
- lợi ích nhiều hơn
+ B1: tác hại
+ B2: mặc dù việc này có 1 số tác hại nhưng tôi tin rằng lợi ích của nó
nhiều hơn.
- tác hại nhiều hơn
+ B1: lợi ích
+ B2: mặc dù việc này có 1 số lợi ích nhưng tôi tin rằng tác hại của nó
nhiều hơn.
Lưu ý viết đoạn 2 dài hơn đoạn 1. Nếu trình bày ngược lại, luận điểm trình bày
sẽ không rõ ràng.
Conclusion:
Summary of main ideas
Bài viết mẫu 2:
Đề bài: In most countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more available.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Sample:
It is widely witnessed that fast food is becoming more and more popular in many
countries. I hold the belief that the drawbacks of this development are far more
significant than the benefits involved.
The fact that the prices of fast food are reducing and its availability is increasing.
Having more affordable fast food options available bring many benefits to both
individuals as well as the society. Delicious foods are offered at low prices and
delivered in a short amount of time. Some chains, like McDonald's, have opened
several drive-through restaurants selling foods less than one dollar, so people no
longer need to leave their car. This can allow people to save money and time, which is
suitable for working people with a busy schedule. On the societal level, when more
people go to fast-food outlets for their regular meals, fast food businesses can quickly
expand and thus increase the sales volumes. This expansion of fast food chains might
create more job opportunities for local people and result in higher employment rates.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, this trend can have several major downsides.
Chief of these is that traditional dinners that serve as a bonding activity among family
members in the past are now less common as a result of the growth of fast food.
Long-term negative effects on family dietary patterns may result from this trend.
Another reason worth mentioning is that eating too much fast food may actually
increase one’s chance of developing a wide range of chronic conditions, such as
diabetes or obesity. Additionally, chemical components included in convenience food,
such as saturated fat and food coloring, can hasten this process.
In conclusion, the fact that fast food is becoming much more affordable and popular
can bring certain benefits for some individuals and the economy. However, I believe
that this development is more disadvantageous due to the negative effects on familial
bonds and health.
2.3. Dạng 3: Is This A Positive Or Negative Development/Trend?
Bố cục:
Introduction
● Paraphrasing
● Thesis statement (your opinion)
Có 3 cách trả lời cho câu thesis statement:
● Đồng ý với advantages
● Đồng ý với disadvantages
● Cân bằng cả hai phía.
Body
● Thiên về một phía (positive hoặc negative)
● Cân bằng cả hai phía (balanced)
Conclusion:
Summary of main ideas
Bài viết mẫu 3:
International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same
time, people are concerned about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
● Is This A Positive Or Negative Development?
● Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
Sample:
People have different views about the effect of international tourism. While I accept
that international tourism has some positive impacts on our lives, I believe that it has
more negative impacts compared to positive ones.
On the one hand, International tourism has many advantages. First, from my
perspective, travel is a very common pastime. By exploring a new location, travelers
can unwind and enjoy themselves. Additionally, traveling stimulates their minds and
broadens their horizons by exposing them to various countries and traditions. Second,
from an economic standpoint, the tourism industry is crucial to the development of
many nations. Tourism is one of the major sources of income for some people.
Additionally, the tourism sector generates numerous job openings in industries like
hotels and restaurants. International travel consequently raises the standard of living in
some local communities.
On the other hand, I believe that International tourism has more negative impacts on
the environment and local cultures. First, from an environmental standpoint, there are
three ways that tourism could harm the ecosystem. First, the tourism industry's
demand for excessive construction might ruin natural habitats and potentially cause
the extinction of several species and plants. Additionally, waste and pollution are
increased by international tourists. Finally, the tourism industry demanding constantly
natural resources like water and energy could result in a shortage of some basic human
needs. Second, from a cultural standpoint, tourism could have a negative impact on
local cultures. Farming and fishing may become obsolete as a result of people being
forced to work in tourism-related industries, which could lead to the loss of many
cultural traits and values.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the potential dangers of international tourism on the
environment and culture are far more significant than the benefits on personal and
economic sectors. Governments should impose laws to protect the environment and
local cultures.
II. Cấu trúc
Some individuals believe that sth… is an ideal (lý tưởng) option, while others think
that
In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages of both places will be discussed.
Firstly/As a result/additionally/On the contrary (trái ngược lại)
It is still feasible to + Vbare: vẫn khả thi làm j
To sum up
It is widely witnessed that + N is becoming more and more popular in many
countries
I hold the belief that the drawbacks of this development are far more significant
than the benefits involved.
On the societal level: về mặt xh
The fact that
Despite the aforementioned benefits, this trend can have several major
downsides.
Chief (hàng đầu) of these is that + CL: tác hại hàng đầu của vđ này là
CL = clause = mệnh đề = CN + VN
Long-term negative effects
Another reason worth mentioning is that + CL
In conclusion, the fact that + STH + lợi ích + which can bring certain benefits for
some individuals and the economy (kinh tế). However, I believe that this development
is more disadvantageous due to the negative effects on + Danh từ nói về tác hại
In conclusion, the fact that + STH + tác hại + which can bring certain negative effects
for some individuals and the economy (kinh tế). However, I believe that this
development is more advantageous due to the positive impacts on + Danh từ nói về
tác hại
While I accept that international tourism has some positive impacts on our lives, I
believe that it has more negative impacts compared to positive ones.
People have different views about + sth + cụm DT
from an environmental standpoint: quan điểm về môi trường / from a cultural
standpoint
A. Introduction
- It is thought by some people that
- predominate all over something
- The essay will first demonstrate that this + nêu cái advantages ra + , followed
by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, particularly + cái disadvantage
, is not valid
- Logical conclusion
- The downside of + Cl/V-ing/N+ pales in comparison with the upside: nhạt nhoà
so với
- this essay shall shed light on (làm sáng tỏ) the justifications (những lời biện
minh) for this statement
- Primary ad/disadvantage: lợi/bất lợi chính
B. Body 1
- One evident benefit to + Ving … is that + CL
- In other words,
- Another reason that +N+ would be advantageous is that
- Firstly, we have to mention what the benefits of + Ving/ Cl
- One of the motivations behind the decision of + N + is that + Cl
- From a more optimistic view( advantage): góc nhìn lạc quan hơn
- It can be deduced that + clause: có thể suy ra rằng
- Thus, + clause= hence, + clause
- The +more/ adj-er hoặc adv + cl, the more/adj_ẻ hoặc adv + cl : the earlier
someone learns an additional language, the more likely they are to master it
- Adv + more likely to + V:
C. Body 2
- On the other hand there are obvious downsides to + Ving/ Noun
- Cl/ V-ing has its drawbacks that should be considered
- the idea of +V-ing/N/ CL can be disadvantageous
- I’m firmly convinced that the beneficial outcomes of taking risks are far
more significant: bị thuyết phục rằng
- In other words, : nói cách khác
- It is well-known that + cl
D. Conclusion
- It is recommended to + people+ to +V/cl
- Clearly outweigh the flawed argument
- The advantageous impacts can overshadow the downside.
E. Vocabulary
- staff are guaranteed welfare including health insurance, paid time off,
and unemployment benefits : có thể nói cho những bài liên quan đến
lợi ích của công việc hoặc nghỉ hưu
- Steady flow of = increase of
- revolutionize innovation and accelerates economic growth: cách
mạng hoá sự đổi mới và tốc độ phát triển kinh tế
- ease the burden of welfare dependency: giảm thiểu sự phụ thuộc vào
trợ cấp xã hội
- inherit intelligence from their predecessors: kế thừa trí tuệ của ng đi
trc
- The influx of +N = high increase: sự tràn vào
- Visitor’ traffic: quá đông khách du lịch
- Vacancies= job opportunities
- Acquaintances: người quen
- Core value: giá trị cốt lõi
- Reputation: danh tiếng
- Refrain from + V-ing = giống giống decrease: kiềm chế việc làm gì đấy
- Prone to + V: dễ bị/ mắc
- Gap: gián đoạn
- Bypass: bỏ qua
- a job that is beneath their capabilities or may not offer the same prospects their
future career might have: một công việc dưới sức năng lực hoặc có thể k tạo dc
triển vọng mà đáng ra sự nghiệp tương lai của họ nên có
- accumulate=save: tích luỹ( tiền, kinh nghiệm)
- Bring up : nuôi dưỡng
Đề bài: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a
foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
It is widely witnessed that pupils tend to study at colleges and universities in other
countries. I hold the belief that the benefits of this are predominant compared to the
disadvantages.
another: 1 cái còn lại
em có 2 quả táo, em ăn quả táo này, thì quả táo còn lại là another
other + noun (s/es - số nhiều) những cái khác, những cái còn lại
others (và không thêm danh từ)
Firstly, students studying abroad will reduce the development of departments in the
country.
Drawbacks
+ financial burden (high tuition fee (học phí) & high cost of living (chi phí sinh
hoạt) ⇒ have to work part time to earn a living ( trang trải cuộc sống) ⇒ work
intensively (cường độ cao) ⇒ affect academic performance (thành tích học tập)
& health
+ Living alone ⇒ difficult ⇒ do not have many friends ⇒ lonely (cô đơn) ⇒
struggle with mental problems, issues ⇒ hard to adapt (thích nghi) with new
culture
Benefits
+ Learn new programme, new knowledge, contact with good professors, discover
new things that not available in own country,
+ living alone ⇒ help know yourself better & more mature (trưởng thành) +
independence
affect: verb - ảnh hưởng
effect: noun - sự ảnh hưởng