Notes
With the sound of rustling leaves, the bird
song soared through the air like a delicate
melody, each note is like a shimmering thread
woven into the vibrant tapestry of dawn. The
aroma of the alluring star shaped blossoms
filled my heart with joy and happiness. The
serene lake stretches out, its surface as
smooth as glass , perfectly reflecting the
azure sky.
Between the thick blankets of snow, the
serene lake is reflecting the azure sky. As the
tree stood tall , the twisted branches are
falling into the soft velvety snow. Over this
landscape the tall ancient building stands out
with its timeworn walls, whispering soft aged
echoes .
Improved version
Between the thick blankets of snow, the
serene lake reflects the azure sky, creating a
mirror-like surface that captures the
tranquility of the scene. Tall trees stand as
silent sentinels, their twisted branches
dipping gracefully into the soft, velvety snow.
Rising majestically above the tranquil
landscape, the ancient building looms, its
timeworn walls whispering soft, aged echoes
of forgotten stories, as if the very air around it
carries the weight of history
Nestled between the tree branches, an old
timeworn house stands there. The house
shrivels and rots like a discarded fruit. As the
trees stood tall, the twisted branches are
falling into the thick blanket of leaf. The
ground is covered in thick orange leaves.