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The document outlines the author's motivations for transferring to Bentley University, emphasizing the need for a hands-on, experiential learning environment that aligns with their entrepreneurial goals. It also discusses the author's background growing up in the Bahamas, their experiences with race and identity, and their commitment to community service and personal growth. Additionally, the author expresses a strong interest in studying business and real estate development, aiming to create meaningful change in their community through entrepreneurship.
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Uni Supp

The document outlines the author's motivations for transferring to Bentley University, emphasizing the need for a hands-on, experiential learning environment that aligns with their entrepreneurial goals. It also discusses the author's background growing up in the Bahamas, their experiences with race and identity, and their commitment to community service and personal growth. Additionally, the author expresses a strong interest in studying business and real estate development, aiming to create meaningful change in their community through entrepreneurship.
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Why are you interested in transferring from your current institution, and why do you

believe Bentley is the best place for you to succeed?

I am interested in transferring because my current school’s teaching style does not match

how I learn best or support my long-term goals. The heavy focus on textbook learning and exams

feels disconnected from real-world applications, which I believe are essential for business

success. As someone who wants to become an entrepreneur, I learn best through hands-on

experiences, collaboration, and solving real problems, but I have not found these opportunities in

my current school. I want an education that prepares me for the challenges of the business world

by combining theory with practice. I also feel that my current school lacks the career-focused

resources that help students gain practical experience before graduating. Because of this,

transferring to a school that better aligns with my learning style will help me grow academically

and professionally.

Bentley is the best place for me because of its strong focus on experiential learning and

career preparation. Integrating business, technology, and hands-on learning, primarily through

programs like the Trading Room, will give me the real-world experience I need to succeed. I am

also drawn to the career-focused initiatives that help students develop the skills and connections

needed to excel in business. The supportive community and opportunity to learn from faculty and

peers who share my passion for innovation make it an ideal environment for me. I want to be

part of a school that encourages active learning and prepares students for real challenges, not just

exams. Bentley will give me the tools, experiences, and network to reach my goals and make a

meaningful impact in business.

Our students come from a variety of experiences, backgrounds, and cultures — aspects

that are important to a rich educational experience and your success in college and beyond.
You may use this section to discuss how race has affected your life, be it through

discrimination, inspiration or otherwise. (3250 Character limit or fewer)

Growing up in the Bahamas, I was surrounded by a culture that embraced and celebrated

my identity. Being in a majority-Black country meant that race was never something I had to

question or be overly conscious of in my daily life. I felt a strong sense of belonging, knowing

the people around me shared similar cultural experiences, traditions, and values. My community

emphasized unity and support, allowing me to develop self-confidence. This environment shaped

my perspective on race in a way that was different from many others who grew up in places

where racial identity came with challenges. I never had to experience discrimination or feel like

an outsider, which gave me a secure foundation in my identity.

But it was only when I left the country to attend boarding school in Canada at sixteen that

I started to see race differently. I was surrounded by others of color there, but they were not of

color in my classes and social settings. I didn’t directly suffer discrimination, but I was reminded

of the role of race in how things come together and what opportunities there are. I knew the

small but important differences in how other people perceived me versus my peers. I remember

that there have been times when I tried working hard to be noticed or understood, and it made me

more aware of the privileges and difficulties of being part of a racial minority. Having been one

of the few people who looked like myself, I looked back at the experiences that people from

different races have gone through.

This new perspective was not an easy thing to get to first, but it has turned out to be a

very significant learning experience. In welcoming environments, I began to pay more attention

to how race influences people’s lives. I thought about how I’ve never experienced racism in my

own country. Still, many people in other places live with biases and system barriers that restrict
their chances and how they feel they are a part of that community. I realized these things and

started to realize how important inclusion and representation really is. So I began to talk about

the issues of equality and diversity, and I found out that although I had my own experience, I had

my part to play in learning about it and promoting it.

Despite the challenges of adjusting to a new cultural environment, I never lost my pride

in my identity. My Bahamian background has always been a source of strength for me. I am

inspired by my people’s rich history, resilience, and communal spirit. Whatever I go, I carry the

values of hard work, perseverance, and mutual support. Living abroad, my experience has taught

me that diversity involves not only having different cultures but it is more than that. Active

listening means picking up the phone, talking to people, learning from what others have been

through, and voicing ideas on how we can have meaningful conversations about race and

identity.

As I look ahead to my college experience, I hope to be part of a community where

diversity is acknowledged and valued. I want to share my story while I learn from people with

different backgrounds and perspectives. Accumulatively, my journey has helped me to realize

that identity is formed from both individual encounters and the environments in which we move.

In a diverse college environment, I will be able to continue to grow, experience a wider

perspective, and participate in discussions about race, culture, and experiences that define us.

BABSON

REQUIRED PERSONAL ESSAY

The Babson education prepares students for all types of careers across business,

entrepreneurship, social innovation, and more. Tell us about your interest in this area of
study and in Babson specifically. We invite you to submit your answer in either essay (500

words maximum)

I grew up in the Bahamas in an entrepreneurship culture, so all my hopes and aspirations

came naturally from an early age. I was able to learn from my dad that success in any business

comes from innovation, resilience, and the ability to see opportunities where others see obstacles.

I spent a lot of time developing a love for using business to create change, not just to succeed but

to do good to uplift my community. Having seen the economic obstacles my country was going

through, I became resolute in finding ideas that would generate sustainable growth. Babson is the

ideal place for me to turn this vision into reality by providing the hands-on learning,

entrepreneurial ecosystem, and global network needed to develop businesses that make a lasting

impact.

The Bahamas has a good tourism industry, but the economy has not developed in many

ways. The industries like agriculture and technology are still undeveloped and there are no such

options to lead the young people. This can be changed by entrepreneurship, which will result in

new opportunities and economic growth. My goal is to solve old problems with new solutions

and create successful businesses while uplifting the community. I want to show others the beauty

in entrepreneurship beyond the making of money and also use it to create something that changes

lives and builds a better future by marrying creativity with action.

Babson is the perfect place for me to develop these ideas and turn them into reality. I am

excited by the Foundations of Management and Entrepreneurship (FME) course because it

provides real-world experience to students in building and managing a business. I will work with

like-minded peers and learn from experienced mentors to refine my entrepreneurial skills. As the

school is very committed to action-based learning, I will be able to try out my ideas, learn from
failures, and become a better business leader. Furthermore, my familiarity with the school’s

global network of entrepreneurs and changemakers will allow me to gain more perspectives and

strategies on how to make a difference back home.

Ultimately, Babson is where I can turn my entrepreneurial ambitions into reality. The

education, mentorship, and hands-on learning will enable me to gain skills and confidence to

build businesses that leave a lasting impact. I am not aiming at personal success but to inspire

others and support economic growth in my home country. I will learn from experienced people

and work with peers who share the same goals so that I can gain the knowledge and network to

drive real change. With this support, I feel ready to take the next step in my journey and become

a leader who is using business as a force for good.

College-Specific Writing REQUIRED SHORT ANSWER A defining element of the Babson

experience is learning and thriving in an equitable and inclusive community with a wide

range of perspectives and interests. Please share something about your background, lived

experiences, or viewpoint(s) that speaks to how you will contribute to and learn from

Babson’s collaborative community. (250 words maximum)

Moving from a warm tropical island to a boarding school in a place with freezing winters

was a challenge I never expected to shape me so profoundly. The sudden change in climate and

culture was overwhelming, and there were days when I struggled to adjust. However, this

experience forced me to grow in ways I never anticipated. I had to learn independence,

discipline, and resilience while managing homesickness and staying focused on my goals.

Balancing academics, personal growth, and relationships in a new environment taught me that

discomfort is often the first step toward growth. Instead of resisting change, I learned to embrace

it, realizing that every challenge comes with an opportunity to adapt and improve.
Living with classmates from different backgrounds further expanded my understanding

of people and perspectives. I met peers who had experiences that were very different from mine,

with their struggles and stories. They taught me humility and empathy as I witnessed resilience

in various forms for other people. I realized the strength of collaboration and that diversity makes

a community stronger as long as we are open to learning from one another. I look forward to

sharing my own experiences and learning from others. I am ready to use my adaptability, cultural

awareness, and determination while learning from the point of view of my colleagues to learn

and grow both personally and academically.

UNC

Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth

and a new understanding of yourself or others.

One event that changed my view on growth and leadership was speaking at the OWN

Talks entrepreneurial conference. It started as a chance to talk about what I know about youth

entrepreneurship and ended up being a moment of self-discovery. When I stood on that stage, I

realized that my journey was about more than just business. It’s about resilience, risk, and the

incredible power of how I use my voice to inspire others. This experience changed my mind

about what exactly entrepreneurship was. But as I spoke to the audience, I learned that there’s

authentic leadership that’s sharing knowledge, embracing challenges, and helping others walk

their path.

Reflecting on my experiences, I talked about the risks of starting a business and the

hardships entrepreneurs encounter. I remembered the challenges, the doubt, and those moments

when I could not say with certainty that I had chosen the right things. Telling about these

struggles helped me to view them differently. They were not just impediments but stairwells of
my growth. The more I shared, the closer I was to where I was on my game. I discovered failure

was not a bad thing; every failure was a teacher, and it was not about trying not to grow. It was

about growing out of challenges. This realization gave me the confidence that I can be an

entrepreneur in every aspect of my life.

One of the most powerful moments of my speech came when I shared a quote by Denzel

Washington. I said, “Fall forward, fall into the unknown, take that leap of faith, and endeavor

always to challenge yourself to be better, do better, and become better than the person you were

yesterday.” Those words then echoed with me. I realized that success is not about playing safe

but about taking risks, trying to conquer fear, and always developing. But the realization stuck

with me when all the conference was over with. Having never been an unsure person, I had a

habit of avoiding challenges. So, I began to approach challenges differently, seeing uncertainty

as an opportunity rather than something to fear.

Beyond personal growth, the conference also showed me the power of community. Young

entrepreneurs surrounded me, and everyone had the same struggles and aspirations. But our end

goals were to innovate, take risks, and leave an impact, and they were the same for us. This

experience reconfirmed that success is not a solo game but a win for the team. The learning and

sharing experiences decreased my feeling of being all alone in new things and how I could grow

stronger than others.

Looking back, I am able to see now that it is through embracing discomfort, learning

from failure, and growing from my experience to help uplift others where true growth occurs. In

addition to deepening my passion for entrepreneurship, the OWN Talks conference shaped my

idea of leadership. It taught me that real success is not determined by the fruits of your labor but

by your achievements and your ability to support and inspire other people on the way.
We’d like to know how you’d contribute to the Carolina community and ask that you

respond to each prompt in up to 250 words. Discuss one of your personal qualities and

share a story, anecdote, or memory of how it helped you make a positive impact on a

community. This could be your current community or another community you have

engaged.

One personal quality that defines me is my dedication to giving back to my community.

Growing up, I saw how many families struggled with limited resources, especially regarding

education. It pushed me to do something, so I organized clothing and book drives to help those in

need. Working with Island Luck Care on their back-to-school drives is one of my most

meaningful experiences. Too often, we see ourselves as small fish in a small pond and fail to

realize how much we can change a person’s life through seemingly small efforts. I also helped

organize kids’ carnivals and Easter egg hunts, creating moments of happiness for children who

often lacked these experiences. Each experience reinforced my belief that service is not just

about giving but about providing opportunities for others to feel valued and included.

These experiences have strengthened my passion for helping others and understanding

community impact. I hope to carry this same dedication to service with me to Carolina and

engage in volunteer work and student-led initiatives. I want to join programs that support

students and the community through mentoring, organizing events, or fundraising for meaningful

causes. My goal is to help create a culture of kindness and inclusion where everyone feels

supported. I look forward to joining a community that values service as much as I do and

continuing to make a difference in the lives of those around me.

Discuss an academic topic that you’re excited to explore and learn more about in college.

Why
does this topic interest you? Topics could be a specific course of study, research interests, or

any other area related to your academic experience in college.

One academic topic I am excited to explore in college is real estate and real estate

development. While pursuing a finance major, I have always been fascinated by how spaces are

designed and transformed. As a child, I loved creating structures in Minecraft and designing

homes in Roblox, but my interest has grown beyond creativity. I am eager to learn how real

estate impacts communities, drives economic growth, and provides development opportunities.

The combination of finance, strategy, and design makes this field exciting for me.

Beyond my interest, I see real estate as a way to create meaningful change. I want to

understand how real estate development can improve infrastructure, address housing shortages,

and revitalize underdeveloped areas. Learning about urban planning, sustainable development,

and property investment will give me the tools to contribute to needy communities. College will

provide the knowledge and hands-on experience I need to explore this field further. I look

forward to developing the skills necessary to make a lasting impact through real estate,

combining my passion for business with my desire to create spaces that support growth and

opportunity.

Please enter a personal statement that includes the following: (500 word maximum)

1) Why are you interested in studying business? (Why did you choose this major? What

experiences have led you to this decision?)

2) Knowing that your career journey will evolve throughout your time at UNC and that

many

students continue the career exploration process throughout college, articulate your

current
short-term (immediately upon graduation) and long-term (5 years post-graduation) career

goals and how you have explored and chosen these goals.

3) Explain why you want to transfer to UNC and how the Kenan-Flagler Undergraduate

Business Program is essential in helping you achieve your goals.

Personal Statement

I am interested in studying business because it has always been a driving force. Growing

up in the Bahamas, I saw firsthand how entrepreneurship creates opportunities and strengthens

communities. My father, a self-made entrepreneur, built his business without a college degree,

showing me that success is about innovation, adaptability, and resilience. His journey inspired

me to develop my entrepreneurial mindset, but I never wanted to follow in his footsteps. I

wanted to build something of my own. It drove me to launch a clothing brand, work with

international businesses, and become a content creator. My experiences in these areas exposed

me to real-world business challenges, such as negotiating contracts, understanding marketing

strategies, and managing finances. Not only did they inspire me to have a strong passion and

creativity, but I needed a strong foundation in business strategy, finance, and leadership to scale

my ventures and make a lasting impact.

My short-term goal immediately after graduation is to return to the Bahamas and take on

a leadership role in my family’s business. While I have worked part-time in the company,

stepping into a full-time leadership position will require me to immerse myself in every aspect of

its operations. I want to use my knowledge to modernize and expand the business while ensuring

it continues to thrive. In the long term, five years after graduation, I see myself growing as an

entrepreneur and a business professional. I plan to further my real estate and data science

education to make informed investment decisions and scale business operations efficiently. I also
want to continue expanding my ventures, whether it is growing my clothing brand or launching

new projects in real estate. Additionally, I am passionate about giving back to my community, so

I hope to mentor young entrepreneurs and create programs that support aspiring business leaders

in the Bahamas.

I want to transfer to UNC because the Kenan-Flagler Undergraduate Business Program

will give me the practical, hands-on learning experience I need to succeed. My current institution

places too much emphasis on theory and exams rather than real-world application, and I thrive in

environments that encourage active engagement, collaboration, and innovation. UNC’s dynamic

curriculum, access to industry leaders, and strong entrepreneurial network make it the perfect

place to refine my skills and turn my ambitions into reality. The program’s focus on leadership

development and experiential learning will provide the knowledge and mentorship I need to take

my business goals to the next level. At UNC, I will have the opportunity to gain the tools,

connections, and experiences that will help me grow as a business leader while contributing to a

community that values collaboration, creativity, and impact.

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