The line chart details fuel consumption from 1980 to 2030 in the
United States. Summarize the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
MY WORK: The given chart illustrates the volumes of fuel consumed by the
United States between 1980 and 2030. Overall, petrol and oil were the
leading types of consumed energy and are projected to maintain their
position until 2030, while kinds of renewable energy such as hydropower,
solar and wind were the least favourable in the U.S. hơi dài, thiếu đề cập
đến xh chung của biểu đồ
CORRECTION: The line graph illustrates the patterns of energy consumption
across six different types of fuel in the U.S over a 50-year period
commencing at 1980, with projections until 2030. Overall, petrol and oil
remain the most widely used energy sources in the US, outstripping other
energy sources by a significant margin. There is a general upward trend in
total consumption, indicating a continuous growth in energy needs.
Starting at 35 quadrillion units in 1980, petrol and oil experienced a
significant drop in consumption, around 31 quadrillion units in 1985 before
an increase to merely its initial figure in 1990. This kinds of energy fell
slightly in 1995, then went through an upward trend and are forecast to
reach a peak of nearly 50 quadrillion in 2030. viết quá nhiều thông tin
thừa, sử dụng từ còn chưa hợp lí
CORRECTION: Starting at 35 quadrillion units in 1980, petroleum and oil
experienced some initial fluctuations before beginning a steady increase in
1995, and are projected to reach a peak of nearly 50 quadrillion units by
2030.
Coming at second rank are coal and natural gas, beginning at 20 and around
16 in 1980, respectively. While coal keep its projectory upward during the
whole period, natural gas went through numerous fluctuations, both
conclude at more than 30 and around 25 quadrillion units in 2030. thiếu
thông tin, dùng từ chưa hợp lí
CORRECTION: Coal and natural gas share relatively similar consumption
levels over the period, both ranging between 15 and 20 quadrillion in 1980.
While natural gas consumption showed minor oscillations from 1980 to the
early 2010s, it is expected to remain stable until 2030, at nearly 25
quadrillion units. In contrast, coal exhibited a steady growth throughout the
period and is set to reach approximately 31 quadrillion units by 2030.
In 1980, both nuclear energy and renewables - including solar, wind and
hydropower – each accounted for around 4 quadrillion units of consumption,
the lowest figures among all fuel types. Nuclear consumption has followed a
steady upward trend, peaking at around 7 quadrillion units. Meanwhile,
renewables have remained comparatively less utilized. By 2030, solar and
wind energy are predicted to increase slightly to just over 5 quadrillion units,
whereas hydropower is expected to stabilize at roughly 4 quadrillion units.
SAMPLE:
The line graph illustrates the consumption patterns of six distinct types of
energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Overall, fossil fuels
dominate energy consumption, outstripping the use of renewable energy
sources by a significant margin. (chỉ ra sự khác biệt giữa cái cao nhất và thấp
nhất trong biểu đồ) The general trend over the period is gradual escalation,
indicating a continuous increase in energy demand. (chỉ ra xu hướng chung
của biểu đồ)
In 1980, the consumption of petroleum and oil stood at a remarkable 35
quadrillion units, nearly double that of natural gas, which amounted to 25
quadrillion units. Coal consumption was somewhat lower at just above 15
quadrillion units. In stark contrast, the use of renewable energy sources,
including wind, solar and hydropower, remained relatively modest, each
hovering at just under 5 quadrillion units.
By 2030, petrol and oil are projected to remain the dominant energy sources,
with total consumption of 50 quadrillion units. Despite some volatility in coal
consumption, it is expected that coal will surpass natural gas, with
approximately 30 quadrillion units of coal being consumed, compared to just
25 quadrillion units of natural gas. As for renewable energy, despite modest
growth, the figures are set to rise slightly, but hydropower is likely to
experience the smallest increase, recording the lowest energy consumption
among the renewable categories in 2030.
