English Literature feedback
Love and Relationships Poetry Name
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Mark______________
Level AO1 (12) AO2 (12) AO3 (6)
6 Critical, exploratory, Analysis of writer’s methods Exploration of
conceptualised response to task with subject terminology used ideas/perspectives/contextual
and whole text judiciously factors shown by specific,
Judicious use of precise Exploration of effects of writer’s detailed links between
references to support methods to create meanings context/text/task
interpretation(s)
11 12 11 12 6
5 Thoughtful, developed response Examination of writer’s Thoughtful consideration of
to task and whole text methods with subject ideas/perspectives/contextual
Apt references integrated into terminology used effectively to factors shown by examination
interpretation(s) support consideration of of detailed links between
methods context/text/task
Examination of effects of
writer’s methods to create
meanings
9 10 9 10 5
4 Clear, explained response to Clear explanation of writer’s Clear understanding of
task and whole text methods with appropriate use ideas/perspectives/ contextual
Effective use of references to of relevant subject terminology factors shown by specific links
support explanation Understanding of effects of between context/text/task
writer’s methods to create
meanings
7 8 7 8 4
3 Some explained response to Explained/relevant comments Some understanding of implicit
task and whole text on writer’s methods with some ideas/ perspectives/contextual
References used to support a relevant use of subject factors shown by links between
range of relevant comments terminology context/text/task
Identification of effects of
writer’s methods to create
meanings
5 6 5 6 3
2 Supported response to task and Identification of writers’ Some awareness of implicit
text methods ideas/contextual factors
Comments on references Some reference to subject
terminology
3 4 3 4 2
1 Simple comments relevant to Awareness of writer making Simple comment on explicit
task and text deliberate choices ideas/contextual factors
Reference to relevant details Possible reference to subject
terminology
1 2 1 2 1
0 Nothing relevant written
DIRT tasks
Do a quotation explosion on the Highlight where you have used Write a clear thesis/introduction
highlighted quotation, then write subject terminology eg. simile, which shows a line of argument
a paragraph analysing it adjective, symbolism etc.
Find and write down quotations Highlight where you have used Re-write the opening sentence of
which support your points the key word from the question, each paragraph so that it is a
or synonyms for it, to show that clear topic sentence
you are answering the question
Add a comparison about the Highlight where you have used a
structure and/or form of the comparative connective. If they
poems are missing, add them in