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Ashley S. Drew
May 8, 2019
University Honors
University of California, Riverside
APPROVED
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Dr. Heidi Waltz
Department of Comparative Literature and Languages
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Dr. Imani Kai Johnson
Department of Dance
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Dr. Richard Cardullo, Howard H Hays Jr. Chair, University Honors
Abstract
Since its inception in the 1970s, hip-hop and rap music have experienced significant evolution,
both rhythmically and lyrically. Currently, there is a divide in hip-hop styles, among them
"Mumble Rap" --a style of rap music where artists are believed to sound incomprehensible and
mumbled in speech. My research explores the phonetic change, purpose & function of the music
style of “Mumble Rap”. It also will delve into a comparison of style with another popular rap
category, Socio-Political rap or "Conscious Hip Hop", to further note how it differs from other
subgenres. In the article “Hip Hop Nation Language” by H. Samy Alim, Alim identifies ten
characteristic tenets of what he calls the “Hip Hop Nation Language” that is essential to the Hip
Hop Nation. Using his article, I will draw from Alim's description of these ten tenets to examine
It has been a long journey in finishing my capstone, and I feel that need to thank everyone that has
been involved in both a micro- and macroscale of this project. To both my faculty mentors, Dr.
Heidi Waltz and Dr. Imani Kai Johnson, I would like to thank them the most. Both of my mentors
have helped guide me along the way in everywhere possible to help me create the finish product
of my project. I would like to thank also all other faculty and staff members, from other professors
than lent an ear & advice to my Honors staff who have had kept me focus, as well. I also want to
give thanks to all of my family and friends in their help keeping me in line mentally and
emotionally as I not only conducted and finished my research, but through the four years of my
college career. Last but not least, I would like to thank Hip-Hop and Rap. Without Hip-Hop and
Hip-Hop culture, none of this project would have been created. I hope this study draws more
readers into the world of Hip-Hop that has much more to offer towards academia as well as life
than others may believe. I love Hip-Hop and I hope it continues forever.
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Introduction
Hip hop first originated in the 1970s in South Bronx, New York. The term “Hip-Hop” is
not one that is easily defined among Hip Hop scholars and audience as a whole. However, when
describing it in its beginnings, Hip-Hop was actually made up essentially of 5 different elements
that together created this sphere of what we now call “Hip-Hop”. On the forefront was first disc-
jockeying, also known as DJ-ing, where a person would take music disc and did what is known as
scratching and mixing a song or multiple songs together. Following after Djs were also the dance
including dance styles such as breakdancing or b-boying, the graffiti art known as tagging, the
Rapping is best described as the rhythmic and poetic discourse of language often over a set
beat. But rapping was not first “rapping” in its origins. There were first emcees (MC or masters of
ceremony) who worked alongside of DJs. MCs entertained audiences through the force of their
personalities. They performed these innovations in the context of Jamaican toasting… telling them
stories about them and reciting improvised poetry or spoken words set to music (Bowser 2012).
These individuals were also called wordsmiths before gaining the title of a “rapper”. The term
“rapper” can first be seen being coined around the late 70s, such as in the song “Rapper’s Delight”
Hip-Hop/Rap first reached popularity with the releases of songs such as “Rapper’s Delight”
and 1980 “The Message” by Grandmaster Flash & The Furious Five. With these two songs we
saw a spectrum of themes and the beginning styles of the genre. From the fun storytelling narrative
and clever rhyming wordplay to the messages about social issues the African American community
were experiencing in their daily lives, rap became a platform where artists were able to convey
their reality in the way they perceived it. This would include talking about their neighborhood,
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life, environment, and even every and any problems they have had to encounter when one’s skin
is black to encouraging one to dance and have fun as it also created a sphere of a joy and celebratory
life for the community through hard times. Brown (2010) states:
Lyrically, rap music profoundly influenced how race and economics are viewed. It created
a response from the music industry, which couldn’t deny the popularity of rap and it sense
of raw display of African-American and Latino urban street culture. The roots of rap tap
into how African-American males use of street knowledge, African heritage and
syncopations, politics, and the complexities of language to create what is referred to today
And this is no different than what happened to rap as we moved into the 90s.
Shifting the mainstream narrative of rap came song releases such as “Boyz-n-the-Hood”
by rapper Eazy-E in 1988. The song that tells about the day in the life of a young black man in the
hood “who’s always hard” as he goes about driving around in his “6-4” talking about theft, being
violent towards both men and women, getting drunk, and interactions with police reached great
popularity following along with the rise of rap group N.W.A (Niggaz With Attitude). The group
consisted of many rappers such as Eazy-E himself, Ice Cube, Dr. Dre and more, who held no mercy
in talking about their gangster vibes and life of the hood as well as police brutality. Following the
90s-decade, rap saw the rise of artist including Snoop Dogg, Tupac/2pac, Notorious B.I.G, and
more. Most rappers alike held hard gangster personas talking about their lives in the streets, gangs,
drugs & violence, as well as unjust police encounters in the mainstream music. But was it really a
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In the 1980s African American communities in America were worsening due to many
factors such as the rise to drug influx & usage and gang violence. Bowser (2012) states:
The gang environment in the South Bronx in the 1970s and 1980s was unlike any
other in the United States. Great Depression- like levels of overall unemployment
were recorded in the South Bronx, which was isolated economically and socially
from the rest of society, as were other American ghettos… Amidst a citywide fiscal
crisis, even the police department stopped patrolling the area; the South Bronx
These sorts of conditions did not go away nor were they alone in one area of the country
and time. Many low income African American communities dealt with similar and poor living
conditions through the 1980s and 1990s. This also happen to coincide as well with the rise of
police brutality in these environments too. Therefore, when one is surrounded in such dangerous
and tough conditions, it is not just a persona for show, it’s a mentality necessity to survive and get
by. One can imagine how perhaps African Americans, especially males, believed that they had to
be tough and ruthless to survive and doing anything for money, such as drug dealing or acts of
violence and theft even moreso during this time. Even to modern day the mentality is no different.
And this sort of conveyed reality spoke out too to many other African Americans coast to coast in
the 90s era of rap music. But, in addition, it also began to attract the attention of the “majority” of
the mainstream listeners. The attraction of the mainstream took the imagine that was introduced
by some of the named rappers and set an image of what they had to be (and others) to sell the
As gansta rap took the mainstream by storm, much of the social-political rap was pushed
in the underground, though some were by choice of artist who did not want to be controlled by the
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mainstream. Though other prominent politically charged voices were still able to popular in the
mainstream such as Public Enemy and A Tribe Called Quest, what dominated music was thus the
typical misogynist, sexual and violent rap music that many characterize all Hip-Hop to be—even
Hip-Hop/rap from the late 90s to the early/late 2000s ranged from gangster rap to
procreational rap to even pop-rap. This era brought along hits that both celebrated blackness,
provoked thought, and party/clubbing songs from more artist such as Jay-Z, Kanye West, Lil John,
Nelly, Lil Wayne, Missy Elliott, Outkast and more. However, turning into the mid- 2010s, we
Mumble Rap
In 2016, Hip Hop rapper Wiz Khalifa was asked in an interview with radio host of Hot 97
of his thoughts on some of the emerging artist during that year. “We call it mumble rap,” Khalifa
described. “It ain’t no disrespect to the lil homies, they don’t want to rap. It’s cool for now, it’s
going to evolve. Those artists, if they want to stay around, they’ll figure out the next thing to do.
But right now, that’s what’s poppin’.” This term, “mumble rap” has since been coined in describing
the rapping style of rappers that have emerged onto the hip-hop scene in 2016. Mumble rap can be
described as a rap style in which artists, instead of being articulate, seem to sound
incomprehensible and mumbled in speech. What started with a few rappers, such as Lil Uzi Vert,
Young Thug, Lil Yatchy and more, has then been an encapsulated term and a new style of hip-hop
music amongst the use. The term “Soundcloud rappers” (referring to the artists songs distribution
on media platform Soundcloud) have also been used to described these rappers in 2018, giving
this new era of young rappers a new title than the diminutive term “mumble rappers”.
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Mumble rap is best described as being a derivative of Trap music, a subgenre of Hip-
Hop/Rap that is defined by its heavy bass, 808s, and hi-hats. Lyrically and explanatory of tis name,
“trap” refers to the location in which drug dealers and/or making occurs often talks such things.
From here, “Mumble Rap” began branching into its own new style to appeal to the mass majority.
Although the style became popular amongst the music chart, it still created much controversy
among the Hip-Hop community and to Hip-Hop fans. While some still enjoy these energy-bringing
trap beats, some could not help but notice that the lyricism is missing amongst these rappers. Both
in articulation and in theme, this rap style causes hesitation in support of the music. In a Billboard
article titled “‘Mumble Rap’: Did Lyricism take a Hit in 2016?”, writer Kathy Iandoli says:
Fans have been flashing decoder rings over rappers’ lyrics for decades and
vacillating in their preferences. Jay-Z’s initial high-speed rhyming style…. Made him not
only hard to understand but ready for filth during an archival dig around Reasonable
Doubt’s era…Wu-Tang Clan’s Ol’ Dirty Bastard had ostensibly garbled lyrics...Bone
predicament of simple comprehension in hip-hop is the same, yet reaction is now different.
It is this split in audience that draws me to want to analyze further “mumble rap” and draw to
question what exactly inside of this style provokes such a split in a wider audience. My research
and analysis will thus also focus on current decade songs from 2015 to those current in 2019.
Data
Method
The first question I drew myself to ask in this research is: are they really mumbling? And
further, is this mumbling creating a further change different than typical African American
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Vernacular? To demonstrate if there is such speech change inside of “mumble rap”, I have decided
to transcribe two samples of notable mumble rap songs using the linguistic IPA system. Songs
were chosen based on the popularity of the song and the artist that fits into the category of being a
labeled a “mumble rapper”. Within the charts, I provide transcriptions of the song during specific
time lapse with its IPA above and the actual song lyrics below for each line.
Data Charts
Like somethin’ you ride a sled down, I just want that head
3 maɪ bɹɪʔi ɔ mæ
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Watch the way that I tear it down
13 ʃi (s)ɛd ɔm ɪnseɪ: ɔ
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Please, Xanny, make it go away
Artist Info:
Rapper Lil Uzi Vert (25) was born and raised in (North) Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Beginning
his rap career in 2010, Lil Uzi Vert had much of a breakthrough between the years of 2014-2016,
including with his song “Xo Tour Life”. The young rapper stated in many interviews that his rap
style was influenced by other rappers such as Wiz Khalifa and Meek Mill. He also expresses his
music interest in rock naming artist such as Paramore, Marilyn Manson, and My Chemical
Romance as favorites of his as well as stating that he wanted to become a “trap rap rockstar”.
Artist: Migos
Song: Motorsport
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Xans, Perky, Check (yeah), Bill Belichick
Take the air out the ball (ooh), just so I can flex
Take the air out the mall, walk in with the sacks
Take the air out your broad (Hey), now she can’t go back (E)
Take the air out the ball (Yeah), just so I can flex
Take the air out the mall (Hey), walk in with the sacks
9 ɔfsɛt
Offset
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This season’s Off-White come in snorted (White)
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Suicide doors, Britney Spears
Artist Info:
Migos is a trio rap group consisting of the members Offset (27), Takeoff (24), and Quavo (27)
whom grew up in Gwinnett County in Lawrenceville, Georgia. The group was founded in 2008
and gained popularity in 2013. The group is well known for their many adlibs and sound effect use
in their tracks. Their music is classified under “hip-hop/trap”. Their song “Motorsport”, from their
album Culture II, was released in 2017 and featured two female rap artist—Cardi B and Nicki
Minaj.
Comparison
In order to further the comparison and analysis of mumble rap, I will provide a transcription
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rap”, many perceive that “conscious rappers” (those more socio-political) are my lyrical and
articulate than the latter and the two get placed against one another for comparison often. The artist
of choice, J. Cole, serves not only as an example of a conscious rapper, but stands as an example
of rappers (i.e Kendrick Lamar, Drake, Nicki Minaj, ect.) and rap style before the current new style
Artist: J. Cole
Song: KOD
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7 doʊn gɪv ə fʌk ɛn (aɪ)m sɔmwʌt ɪnseɪn
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17 noʊ ə jʌng nɪgə hi akɪn soʊ kɹeɪzi
Artist Info:
Rapper J.Cole (34) grew up in Fayetteville, North Carolina. With dreams of rapping, the artist
attended and graduated college in New York City, where he was first rejected by Jay-Z before
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being signed to Roc Nation in 2009. He released his first mixtape in 2008 and has steadily gained
a large popularity for his rap style and messages including those from his 2018 album KOD where
the song “KOD” is featured. Cole states that he was influenced by 90s rappers such as 2pac, Andre
Discussion
The best way to look at this new style of hip-hop music is to look at it as a language. In H.
Samy Alim’s (2004) “Hip Hop Nation Language”, Alim discusses hip-hop in the light of a
language of its own. Alim states, “Rapping, one aspect of hip-hop culture consists of the aesthetic
placement of verbal rhymes over musical beats, and it is this element that has predominated in hip
hop cultural activity in recent years. Thus, language is perhaps the most useful means with which
to read the various cultural activities of the Hip Hop Nation (HHN)” (Alim, 388). Using both this
ideology and the framework of characteristics of the Hip Hop Nation and the Hip Hop Nation
Language (HHNL) that Alim proposed, one can observe a breakdown of Mumble rap in the
Alim gives ten characteristics or “ten tenets” that he describes as describing Hip Hop
(1) HHNL is rooted in African American Language (AAL) and communicative practices...
Thus HHNL both reflects and expands the African American Oral Tradition.
(2) HHNL is just one of the many language varieties used by African Americans.
(4) HHNL is a language with its own grammar, lexicon, and phonology as well as unique
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(5) HHNL is simultaneously the spoken, poetic, lyrical, and musical expression of the
HHN.
(8) HHNL exhibits regional variation... Even within regions, HHNL exhibits individual
(9) The Fundamental aspect of HHNL... is that it is central to the lifeworlds of the members
of the HHN and suitable and functional for all of their communicative needs.
(10) HHNL is inextricably linked with the sociopolitical circumstances that engulf HHN.
(Alim, 393-394).
Hip Hop Nation Language is a language with its own grammar, lexicon, and phonology as
well as unique communicative style and discursive modes (Alim 394), however it is
simultaneously rooted in African American Language (AAL) (Alim 393) or African American
Vernacular English (AAVE). Much of its speech structures comes from the vernacular of the
African American community as it also incorporates various amounts of structures that are
involved inside of rap. Some of the most observable grammatical and phonetic features of AAVE
displayed in rap are: 1) the habitual be; 2) zero copula; and 3) consonant word reduction (Brown
286-287).
The habitual be is the use of the verb “to be” without any change or conjugation to its form.
The zero copula describes when there is an absence of a copula or auxiliary of “is” or “be”. Though
the copula is not stated, the use of it is still existing or implied during speech. Though there are
also other verbal changes such as tense absence or particle change that itself is common in AAVE,
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what is most interesting to note and seemingly most standout about “mumble rap” is its increased
of words. This pattern is observed in both words that end in single or cluster consonant endings.
Though not uncommon, there is an increased amount of use of consonant reduction inside of
“mumble rap” songs. Inside of Lil Uzi Vert’s “XO TOUR Llif3”, lyrics state:
Which, as phonetically transcribed from the song, gets produced by the rapper as:
2 ɪnsaɪd ɔː waɪt
enside aw white
4 aɪ ʒu wɔ(n) də hɛ:
I ju waw(n) du heh
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Notably, the rapper can be seen dropping of several final consonant such as the d in “sled”
and “ride” and the double l cluster in “all”. Even though this may be documented as another noted
characteristic in AAVE use, this can also be seen as the artist means, unconsciously or consciously,
of creating a path of similar sound sets to transition from one word to the other to create a faster
Observing the first line given prior, we see that double l in “all” was dropped. This then
leaves the a on its own to create a shortened “aw” sound (phonetically represented as ɔ). The sound
is a mid-low back vowel and the initial sound in “red” is a voiced alveolar central approximant.
These two sounds, in relation to tongue placement, are closer in transition of sound creation than
if the artist were to annunciate the l sound (an alveolar lateral approximant) and switch to an r.
Smitheran (1997) notes that given that the rapper has to meet the artistic demand for rhyme, use
of this systematic AAL pronunciation rule can generate a unique rhythmic line (11).
Another example of this we can observe is looking at “Motorsport”. The lyrics are:
And we can these lyrics phonetically transcribed from the rapper as:
Da ku came importd
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11 ðɪʃisʌn ɔl waɪt kʌmɪn ʃnoʊrtəd
Similarly, we can see that there is some deletion of sounds in their final consonant position.
For example, in line 10 the rapper drops the final p in “coupe”. Another note, perhaps more
stylistically, is alteration or change in phoneme choice, such as “sh” from “s” in “snorted”. I also
note how there were times where there appeared to be a merge in words, causing them to seem as
a single word. For example, in line 11 we see this with both the “This season” and “come in”, that
I note as I transcribe came off as “thishisun” and “comin”. This again can be seen as a, unconscious
or conscious, result of keeping up with a set rhythm in the song while finding a right way to balance
The question that can stand next, however, is there a difference in this same production
with a rapper on the other spectrum of rap genres? Will they be more “articulate” than a “mumble”
rapper? To challenge this notion, I scrutinized the song “KOD” by rapper J.Cole for comparison.
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If practice made perfect, I’m practice’s baby
We can note that even “conscious” rappers are subject to the same speech changes when
trying to stay along a rhythm that they set for themselves. There are instances where there are
drops in final consonant position such as in line 9 where the p in “sip” is missing. There is also
shortening (result of consonant deletion in words) of words such as with “convice” in line 10 that
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seems to be pronounced as “covis” by the rapper as this transcribed portion of the song sped up in
rhythm. Even the word “Activis” seemed to take two different pronunciations by the rapper during
In observation, the muttering effect listeners seems to arise predominantly with the up in
speed and rhythm the verse that the rappers set for themselves. Though this is not always the case
for most artist, we can count it in as one of many possible factors that may influence articulation
In addition to noting the effect of rhythm on the speech of these rappers, I also would like
to draw towards the idea that these speech differences and styles can be the cause of many things
such as who they are embodying or drawing from, like an animator. For instance, rapper Lil Uzi
Vert, along with naming rappers such as Wiz Khalifa and Meek Mills as being influential for him,
states that he also draws from and enjoys rock artist such as Paramore and Marilyn Manson. Given
the rock artist inspiration, this can be used to note and explain some of his more drawled, singing
rap style. In observation, in “XO Tour Life” he moreso sings in lines 13-16:
13 ʃi (s)ɛd ɔm ɪnseɪ: ɔ
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Xanny, help the pain, yeah
This moment in the song also displays moments of consonant reduction, but seems to be due to
the effect of him singing the lines rather than a definitive rap as the end of the verse leads to the
chorus. Whereas with J.Cole, who draws a lot from rappers of the 90s, seems to embody and
resemble their rapping speech style that has more enunciation just as the 90s rapper influencers of
the 70s and 80s had more of in the beginning of rap following more of a spoken word rhythm.
Another factor to consider is also location and region of some rappers which also can result
in different AAVE use than other regions. As Alim states, HHNL exhibits regional variation...
Even within regions, HHNL exhibits individual variation based on life experiences (394). With
artist such as Migos, a lot of trap and “mumble rap” artist come from the south and east coast state
regions. We see their differences such as the “sh” rather than pronunciation of “snorted”, which
also can be seen in Lil Uzi vert’s song where (in line11) he also seems to say “shpot” rather than
However, I feel that although we can note and theorize origins of these uses and changes,
we also must leave room to assume that all of these changes phonetically were done on purpose
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Music Observations: Message and Lyrical Execution
Hip Hop, like many things, cannot be summed up into one whole. It is a combination of
multiple aspects that helps creates an ever-changing whole. Even those aspects are made up of
smaller parts like a taxonomy or leaves along a branch to a whole tree. Likewise, we can view this
in both the lyrical approaches to rapping as well as the message in the music. Johnson (2012)
identifies many of the different types of rap such as Acid Rap, Comedy Rap, Gangster Rap, Horror
Rap, Love Rap, Party Rap, Pimp Rap, Porn (Sex) Rap, Political Rap, Metaphysical Rap, Science-
Just as we see that there are various subgenres of rap music, we can see that there is also
various approaches in lyrical delivery by rap artist. Johnson (2012) describes an interesting way
one can use to analyze these variants looking at their approach, personality and method approach.
Within each there is a spectrum. Looking at the approach, we can measure it from then end of
subject, Non-sensical, or Storytelling. While looking at this, the other side to analyze is the poetic
verse which includes examples such as simple single rhyme line verse, double line verse (where
the following ending of the line rhymes with the previous or following), internal double liner
(where the rhyme happens within the two lines), the wrap-around (where rhymes happen at the
beginning and end of the sentence/lines, dense-rhyming (which displayed the artist ability to use
cleaver word-play of concepts), retrograde (rhyming at the beginning of the sentence) and even
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I believe that both lyrical approaches, though diverse, blends in towards the music style
and message that the rap artist specializes in making. Looking at “mumble rap”, it is seen as a
segment of Trap rap which itself can be looked at as a segment of Gangster rap. Often, it seems
that “Mumble rappers”, using Johnson’s model, are much more simplistic (regarding their
straightforwardness in subjects), and extroverted. However, poetic verse and method approaches,
I believe, can be seen in varying depending on the song being created. In these examples, the
subscript numbers indicate where rhymes of lines coincide with one another. For example, in
Or even in Lil Pump’s verse in the 2018 song “I love It” with Kanye West:
Here we see use of both a one-liner and a double liner style amongst the lyrics of deemed mumble
rappers.
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In addition, there are a few other linguistic devices we can observe in this new wave of rap
style. One is the use and insertion of onomatopoeia inside of songs. Often this use is in relation
towards an object or action that is just mentioned or being implied. Another is the insertions of
adlibs during lyrics. Finally, we can also see the use of repetition and/ or emphasis on the last word
or words in a line to amplify the line’s meaning. Notoriously, the rap group Migos has a wide
range of these devices. Such can be seen in their 2018 song “Motorsport”:
Take the air out the mall1 (Hey), walk in with the sacks
Offset
The use of onomatopoeia and word repetition are used to emphasize certain relation of
sound or effects to the words being spoken. In addition, the use of these as layovers adds more
layers to the sound of the song itself. Amongst audiences, this also enables listeners to partake in
the song along with the artist as they are able to recreate those last words or sounds provided by
this technique. To prove that this is a style inherent to this new style wave, we can compare it to
other artists’ songs around the same years both of a same and different rap genre. For example,
Remy Ma’s verse in her 2017 song “All the Way Up” with Fat Joe:
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Just left the big house to a bigger house1
Bitch, I will pop on your pops1 (Your pops) /Bitch I will pop on whoever2 (Brrr)/
You know who pop the most shit?3 (Who?) /The people whose shit not together2
(okay)/ You’da bet Cardi a freak4 (Freak)/ All my pajamas is leather2 (uh) /
Bitch, I will black on your ass5 (Yeah) / Wakanda forever2 /Sweet like a like a
honey bun6, spit like a Tommy (brrr) gun6 / Rollie on a one of one6, come get your
mommy some6 /Cardi at the tip-top, bitch7 / Kiss the ring and kick rocks, sis7
(Mwah)
Interestingly, we can see an influence of this style on certain artists. For example, rapper
Drake often seems to switch between styles depending on the type of rap audience he’s tailoring
to. Upon his 2018 album Scorpion, we can compare between the songs “I’m Upset” (as the tempo
End up getting loose and getting pictures from my ex2 (ex, ex, ex, ex)
SMS1, triple X2
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That’s the only time I ever shoot below the neck3 (skrr)
Why do you keep on shootin’ if you know that nigga dead?3 (skrr)
I swear you gotta feel me1 before they try and kill me1
‘Cause I’ve been goin’ off and they don’t know when it’s stoppin’2
I’m tryna see who’s there on the other end of the shade1
We can see that the use of these new linguistic, such as the onomatopoeia and end work/phrase
repetition, and musical devices, such as the increased background adlibs, upon this new age rap
genre seems to be mostly used as a sort of hype method. It functions to draw listeners in and
encourage the energy of the song to its listener. It draws more attention to the verse and keeps
listeners as involved through the song than just in the chorus if needed.
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Similar to “Emotionless”, in comparison, I note that there is often a complex rap style and
word execution with rappers that are trying to elude to more figurative imagery for the audiences
on a topic as one may see amongst socio-political rappers. Their personalities also tend to be
introverted/introspective. In Kendrick Lamar’s 2015 song “How Much A Dollar Cost” from his
Another example can be seen in CyHi The Prynce’s 2017 song “Closer”:
Heard echoes cause they was listening4, damn that was a close call1
Though that mumble rap music seems to display a more simplistic and extroverted style of
rap to that of the more usual introspective complex style conscious rap genre, the artists of either
are not limited to one or the other. Where conscious rappers can at time be extroverted and
controversial at times, mumble rappers also can be introspective and reflecting in their music.
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Reflecting the African American Community
Though “Mumble” rap seems to have its alterations and differences as a subgenre, I feel
that that is not the only issue some people have with it. Therefore, I speculate that the factor of
representation also contributes to the discouragement of the rap style to some others.
Since this style of music is very integrated and rooted inside of a community, it serves as
a reflection of the speech community to the outside viewers. Those who may not be knowledgeable
of the terminology and style of the speech community can find some sort of understanding as they
listen to rap music. However, this leaves room for error in perception of the speech community to
Just as music and media have given other ethnic groups insight into the African American
community as well as the community’s speech style; in more recent time, rap music has served
over the past few decades for being the media model to the African American youth and well as
set up an archetype of African Americans to those outside the group. As rap music had transpired
and bloomed much in the 90s so did the perception and speech style of the audience that it effected.
This means, then, that Hip Hop is a powerful force in shaping the lives of the youth for Hip Hop
not only reflects reality, it helps create it (Love, 222). And in the modern day with rap’s popularity,
this shaping even goes past African American youth, but all youth audiences internationally as
well.
Though the “gangster” rap era showed the tough lifestyles as predominantly African
American men to the mainstream listeners, its reception seems to have failed its origin. It was
about conveying one’s reality to the world for others to understand as well as relate to. It was also
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about playing around with music and creating things that were almost comical and funny. It, as
well however, was about being “hard”. And the latter is what stuck to most people.
Taking this all into consideration, I reflect then on what is being reflected in mumble rap.
Alim’s tenets draw the points that HHNL is simultaneously the spoken, poetic, lyrical, and musical
expression of the HHN. At the same time, Alim believes that the fundamental aspect of HHNL is
that it is central to the lifeworld’s of the members of the HHN and suitable and functional for all
of their communicative needs. Which also ties into his last tenet statement: HHNL is inextricably
linked with the sociopolitical circumstances that engulf HHN (Alim 2004). So, what does that
It is easy to categorize and check off these characteristics amongst the many artist people
view as being “conscious rappers”, but not so much has with mumble rappers. While conscious
rappers focus on what is going on around and to the community as well as to oneself internally
towards a turn for a better future, perhaps mumble rap is a scene of age that we are missing in
understanding. Migos often say that they are “doing it for the culture”, but what does that mean if
most of their songs are trap? These artists appeal widely to age groups of young teens to young
adults (up around their mid-twenties), because it reflects what they want and feel. They want fun
and freedom. They want escape. They are delving more with the close internal realities and
emotions of the new youth mentality. Therefore, we can look as this music as a reflection of what’s
going on within a smaller scale with people in the social media run world, the casual drug use
world, the very sexual world, the don’t-care-what-a-bitch-says world that is very much now
prominent for many in the world. If we see a problem with mumble rap and its messages and
themes, it should turn us to trying to understand the audience that they are tailoring to. Sadly, not
everyone wants to be “woke” and focus on the social issues around them. A lot of them just want
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to be “young, wild, and free”; and that is also part of the hip-hop culture as well. Hip-Hop functions
were once served as spaces where the youth can come together and have fun and enjoy themselves
outside of the sphere of all that was bad around them. Therefore, mumble rap should not be
shunned completely for its themes and messages. It instead, serves as a reflection of the modern
times even as we see a split and where people want to be at in the world through this music
popularity.
However, representation goes beyond music here as well. It also is reflected in one’s
fashion, public messages and appearances that also factors into this. Some are now choosing to
ditch acting “ignorant” for the public and wearing high-priced name brands while others choose
to still flaunt their wealth, attire, and “hood” personalities. This to say as well, is often the results
of trying to make an image that listeners buy it to. However, this as well extensively is also the
new reality of who are youth are and where they are coming from just as rappers before have
displayed doing. Both sides of a coin are shown amongst these styles and rappers that also should
equally be viewed to reflect the community at hand and not denoted away on either side of being
Conclusion
Bowser (2012) quotes from DJ Kool Herc, “everything is not hip hop. And in fact, some
things generally associated with hip hop— for example, sneakers, weapons, gangster rap, and
bling-bling— in truth have nothing to do with it”. Rather than nothing, it still is something. It does
not define it completely but is still a part of it and helps shaped what we make of it. Hip-hop has
grown more as a phenomenon, and rap as a genre, not only in America, but internationally. Hip-
hop/rap lives as a genre for its ability to connect a story with a listener to relate to. As I drew from
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Alim, part of the fundamental aspect of the HHNL is its ability to be able to connect and
communicate with the members of the HHN. Even though “Mumble rap” does not violate any of
the other described tenets that Alim discusses, it still faults a bit in its inability to not focus on
to all of its audience. Therefore, while innovation as style is great, the loss of lyricism is a sacrifice
not worth it amongst some members of the HHN. I do not wish to denote freedom of style for any
rapper as innovation is always key; however, Hip-hop is more than just a complete focus on
muttered words and hyped adlibs. These aspects and new styles are all parts of the ever-growing
new shape of Hip-Hop/rap, but should not be the only sole focus and mass-produced representative
However, I also feel inclined to want to encourage this change and expression if it is also
what in part connects rap to the new age of listeners. Kendrick Lamar states in a Forbes interview
in 2017:
The responsibility…. Is to never forget the root where I come from, as far as hip-
hop, and knowing my forefather sand the people that laid the groundwork for me….
Never take it for advantage, and misuse it. But also, at the same time I want to
I want hip-hop to continue to evolve for the sake of hip-hop. Though we may want the message to
be said and heard, we also want to celebrate and build community unity through fun. But not at
the expense of creating a style that only focuses on one end. Hip-hop is a multitude that creates a
beautiful whole and I think that though “Mumble” rap brings an evolution of one spectrum of Hip-
Hop, there is a rise and evolution of all the other ends that we as listeners should also support as
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well to push into the mainstream light. This change should not be pushed away completely, but
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