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Best Tips for Getting Fit and Healthy

The article titled 'Do you want to get fit forever?' discusses the author's personal journey to fitness through regular gym attendance and a healthy diet. The author emphasizes the importance of consuming fruits, vegetables, proteins, and staying hydrated while avoiding fast food. The article concludes with an encouraging note that getting fit is easier than it seems.

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Best Tips for Getting Fit and Healthy

The article titled 'Do you want to get fit forever?' discusses the author's personal journey to fitness through regular gym attendance and a healthy diet. The author emphasizes the importance of consuming fruits, vegetables, proteins, and staying hydrated while avoiding fast food. The article concludes with an encouraging note that getting fit is easier than it seems.

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Task 3 — Writing

Write an article (100–130 words) for a school or college magazine saying what
you think is the best way to get fit. You should include the following
information:
» explain which type of exercise you do to get fit
» explain what type of food is the best for you to be healthy
You should plan your article before you start writing. Think about what you are
going to write and make some notes to help you in this box:

Planning notes

TITLE: Do you want to get fit forever?


Introduction / PARA 1- 20 years old; thin ; went to the gym ; do sport ; eat healthy.
PARA 2- fruits / vegetables / water / proteins
Closing sentence: It is easier than you think it is!

(No marks are given for these planning notes)

Now, write your article.

Do you want to get fit forever?


I have always followed a healthy diet and now I want to tell you some important
tricks.
I began to go at TO the gym when I was young. I think the most important
THING for me it is when I can feel me well with my body and my mind.
Moreover, I have always eaten healthy food. For example some vegetables,
milk, fish, meat and fruit. I eat five food (comidas: meals) times every day and I
never mix protein with carbohydrates. However, I drink half a litre half of water. I
prefer eating healthy food to eating fast food because I am not good when I eat
it.
Do you want to follow my tricks?
CORRECTION:
- LENGTH: 113 WORDS  Very good! This is a perfect length for your article 
- STRUCTURE: Title + Paragraphs  Good!
- STYLE: Good  You use familiar and neutral language, but make the text entertaining
for the readers!
- CONTENT: Very good. You talk about everything they ask you to talk about and divide
it in the proper paragraphs.
- GRAMMAR: Simple and generally correct.
- LINKING WORDS: Good.
- GOOD BEGINNING/MIDDLE/END: Yes.
- RANGE OF VOCABULARY: Yes, the vocabulary is accurate to the topic.
- SPELLING: Yes.
- INTERESTING: Yes.
- CLOSING SENTENCE: Very good! 

This writing is almost perfect…


CONGRATULATIONS! 

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