223 Sonnets Analysis
223 Sonnets Analysis
day?"
WHAT'S HE SAYING?
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? / Thou art more lovely and more temperate:"
What if I were to compare u to a summer day? U r luvlier n more temperate (d perfect temperature):
"Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May / And summer's lease hath all too short a date:"
Summer's beauty is fragile and can be shaken, and summertime fades away all too quickly:! 1
"Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines / And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;"
Sometimes the sun is far too hot, and often it is too cool, dimmed by clouds and shade;
"And every fair from fair sometime declines / By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;"
And everything that is beautiful eventually loses its beauty, whether by chance or by the uncontrollable
course of nature; 2
"But thy eternal summer shall not fade / Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;"
But your eternal beauty (or youth) will not fade, nor will your beauty by lost;
"Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade / When in eternal lines to time thou growest:"
Nor will Death boast dat u wander in his shadow, since u shall grow wit tym through dis sonnets: 3
"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see / So long lives this and this gives life to thee."
For as long as people can breathe and see, this sonnet will live on, and you (and your beauty) with it. 4
Why is he saying it?
Here the theme of the ravages of time again predominates; we see it especially in line 7, where the poet
speaks of the inevitable mortality of beauty: "And every fair from fair sometime declines." But the fair
lord's is of another sort, for it "shall not fade" - the poet is eternalizing the fair lord's beauty in his verse, in
these "eternal lines." Note the use of anaphora (the repetition of opening words) in lines 6-7, 10-11, and
13-14. Also note that May (line 3) was an early summer month in Shakespeare's time, because England
did not adopt the Gregorian calendar until 1752.
The poet describes summer as a season of extremes and disappointments. He begins in lines 3-4, where
"rough winds" are an unwelcome extreme and the shortness of summer is its disappointment. He
continues in lines 5-6, where he lingers on the imperfections of the summer sun. Here again we find an
extreme and a disappointment: the sun is sometimes far too hot, while at other times its "gold
complexion" is dimmed by passing clouds. These imperfections contrast sharply with the poet's
description of the fair lord, who is "more temperate" (not extreme) and whose "eternal summer shall not
fade" (i.e., will not become a disappointment) thanks to what the poet proposes in line 12.
In line 12 we find the poet's solution - how he intends to eternalize the fair lord's beauty despite his refusal
to have a child. The poet plans to capture the fair lord's beauty in his verse ("eternal lines"), which he
believes will withstand the ravages of time. Thereby the fair lord's "eternal summer shall not fade," and
the poet will have gotten his wish. Here we see the poet's use of "summer" as a metaphor for youth, or
perhaps beauty, or perhaps the beauty of youth.
The opening lines of the sonnet dive the reader into the theme at a rapid pace, accomplished in part by the
use of enjambment - the continuation of a syntactic unit from one line of poetry to the next without any
form of pause, e.g., "Let me not to the marriage of true minds / Admit impediments ..." This first quatrain
asserts that true love is immortal and unchanging: it neither changes on its own nor allows itself to be
changed, even when it encounters changes in the loved one. Quatrain two embarks on a series of seafaring
metaphors to further establish the permanence of true love: in line 5 it is an "ever-fixed mark," a sea mark
that navigators could use to guide their course; in line 7 it is a steadfast star (the North Star, perhaps),
whose height we are able to measure (as with a quadrant) although we may know nothing of its nature
(the science of stars had hardly progressed by Shakespeare's time). Both of these metaphors emphasize
the constancy and dependability of true love.
Finally, quatrain three nails home the theme, with love's undying essence prevailing against the "bending
sickle" of Time. Time's "hours and weeks" are "brief" compared to love's longevity, and only some great
and final destruction of apocalyptic proportions could spell its doom. Note here the reference back to the
nautical imagery of quatrain two with the use of the word "compass" in line 10.
Sonnet 116 closes with a rather hefty wager against the validity of the poet's words: he writes that if what
he claims above is proven untrue, then he "never writ, nor no man ever loved."
Analysis: Sidney's connection to the moon is an example of a "pathetic fallacy" in which elements of
nature appear to experience human emotions. At first Sidney describes the moon in accordance with
classical mythology, as an individual being. Yet, his insistence that the moon is lovesick does not make
sense in this context because the goddess of the moon is Diana, a perpetual virgin who is not affected by
love. Then, Sidney switches his perception of the moon to adhere to Copernican belief, and he describes
the moon as a planet. The series of questions he asks expresses his desire for a logical explanation of
Stella's behavior. He wants to know if the scorn his love receives at her hands is limited to the earth.
ABOUT: Sir Philip Sidney was born in 1554 and died in 1586. He was an English poet, scholar, soldier, and
courtier. Sir Philip Sidney is remembered as one of the main literary figures of the Elizabethan age.
Rhyme scheme: Petrarchan
abba abba cdcd ee
Sydney uses several devices in this 31st sonnet which are but not limited to personification,
symbolism, synecdoche, repetition alliteration, metonomy, assonance, and pathetic fallacy to bring the
moon to life as the speaker (astrophil) addresses the moon with a sorrowful tone with the inclusion of
the words "wan" and "sad steps" which allows the reader to understand the darkening aspect of the
moon and in essence the speaker's (Astrophil) melancholic mood
ASTROPHIL AND STELLA 39: COME SLEEP!...PEACE BY SIR PHILIP SIDNEY
Come Sleep! O Sleep, the certain knot of peace,
The baiting-place of wit, the balm of woe,
The poor man's wealth, the prisoner's release,
Th' indifferent judge between the high and low.
39. Sidney personifies sleep and begins to have a conversation with it. He prays that Sleep will come and
release him from his current misery. Only when he is asleep is he able to ease his suffering and stem the
civil war that is waging between his heart and his head, between his love and his reason. He wonders what
price he must pay in order to convince the god of Sleep to come to him, and he promises a "good tribute."
Smooth pillows, a comfortable bed, and a dark, quiet room are all that he desires, if only he can persuade
Sleep to come. Finally, Sidney comes up with a way to convince Sleep to come to him. When he is
asleep, he argues, the image of Stella will appear in his dreams, and Sleep will be able to watch. This is
the greatest tribute that he can pay.
Analysis: This is an example of a sonnet in which Sidney's persona talks to an entity other than Stella. In
addition to "Sleep," Sidney also directs his speeches to the allegorical "Reason," "Love," "Queen Virtue,"
"Patience," "Desire," and more. In literature and rhetoric, this act of addressing something that is not a
person is referred to as "apostrophe." The irony in this sonnet is very interesting. Sidney begs for Sleep to
come and rescue him from his love and suffering for Stella. Yet, at the same time, an image of Stella will
automatically come to his head while he is asleep. Whether he is asleep or awake, Stella is always in his
mind. He prefers the Stella in his dreams because he does not have to face the reality that she is not his
own.
NOTABLE RENAISSANCE FEATURE: Humanism as man gets troubled by love naturally.
Individualism as man finds a way out of the trouble caused by love (just as the poet takes sleep as
the way out of the troubling of love and despair in him).
# Tone: begging and hopelessness #He personifies Sleep as a savior and Despair as a villain
# Metaphor of Sleep "Come sleep, oh sleep, the certain knot of peace,/ The baiting place of wit, the balm of woe,/
The poor man’s wealth, the prisoner’s release,/ Th’indifferent judge between the high and low."
Sidney compares sleep to joyous, healing, or relieving situations in order to convey the emotions which sleep brings
a person.
Paradox: The word ‘poor’ lexically means a person who has a little, and Prisoner, someone who is bound by
the four walls of a prison. But here the poet remarks Sleep to be a wealth of a poor, and freedom from the
world of prison to a prisoner.
Theme: Sleep can end the miseries of reality such as the feeling of distressed love.
AMORETTI: SONNET 26 BY EDMUND SPENSER
Sweet is the Rose, but growes upon a brere;
Sweet is the Junipere, but sharpe his bough;
sweet is the Eglantine, but pricketh nere;
sweet is the firbloome, but his braunches rough.
The poet seizes upon this notion of pain leading to pleasure by making a brief catalogue of beautiful
flowers which bloom on unpleasant plants. The rose grows upon a briar, the juniper has sharp boughs, the
eglantine has thorns, the “firbloome” has rough branches, the cypress has a tough “rynd” (lines 1-5). The
nut is sweet, but “bitter is his pill” (line 6), the broome-flower also sweet, but “sowre enough” (line 7).
Moly is sweet, but the root is “ill” (line 8). From nature the speaker learns that “euery sweet with soure is
tempered still” (line 9), but this sourness only makes the sweet object the more desirable (line 10). He
rationalizes, then, that he can endure a “little paine” to gain “endless pleasure” in the arms of his beloved
(lines 13-14).
Notable Renaissance feature : Humanism as man struggle as there is no gain without pain.
AMORETTI, SONNET 67 BY EDMUND SPENSER
Like as a huntsman after weary chase,
Seeing the game from him escap’d away,
Sits down to rest him in some shady place,
With panting hounds beguiled of their prey:
OVERVIEW
Here the speaker turns his earlier images of predator and prey around, describing himself as “a huntsman
after weary chace” having given “long pursuit and vaine assay” (lilines 1 and 5). His beloved, now a
“gentle deare” (line 7) seeks to “quench her thirst at the next brooke” (line 8) and, catching sight of the
hunter, surrenders herself to him “till I in hand her yet halfe trmbling tooke,’and with her owne goodwill
hir fiyrmely tyde” (lines 12-13). He stands amazed at her willing surrender to him, “to see a beast so
wyld,/so goodly wonne with her owne will beguyld” (lines 13-14). He rejoices that she has surrendered to
him, but is mystified (and perhaps further pleased) that she has done it not under duress, but of her own
free will.
BRIEF ANALYSIS
First we will take a look at a literal interpretation of Sonnet 67. This piece begins with a huntsman in
pursuit. His stalked prey, a deer, has gotten away from him. He is tired and sick of spending all of his time
hunting this deer and so he sits down in the shade to rest with his dogs and decides to give up his hunt for
the deer. But then the deer comes back from the way it had gone to drink from a nearby stream. The deer
sees the hunter sitting there in the shade and seeing that he is no longer hunting her, she decides that he is
not a threat and she comes straight to him without fear. Because of the deer’s trust the hunter was then
able to easily tie a rope about her neck and capture her. He then notes how strange it is to see a wild
animal so tame to be caught in that way.
Next we will look at the first half of Spenser’s Sonnet 67 in a metaphorical sense. “Like as a huntsman
after weary chase, / Seeing the game from him escapt away,” (ll. 1 and 2), portrays a man, a suitor if you
will, as the huntsman and a woman as his game. The man has been chasing after and longing for this
woman and she keeps getting away from him. He is trying to court her and she is not encouraging him,
she doesn’t want anything to do with the man. He decides to stop and rest for a bit because chasing after
this woman is so exhausting emotionally and mentally. Suddenly he realizes that he has been courting
her for a long time and that he isn’t going to win the woman’s affections and resigns himself to giving up
on his courtship of her. Now we will look at the second half of Sonnet 67, also in a metaphorical sense.
The woman sees that the man is no longer chasing after her “There she beholding me with milder look,”
(Spenser ll. 9) and suddenly decides he might not be such a bad suitor after all “Sought not to fly, but
fearelesse still did bide:” (Spencer ll.10). Spenser turns this piece around from the original Petrarch piece
here. He shows that it is the woman that is in control as opposed to the man. He reaches out to her
nervously because she has been running from him all this time and now she seems to be encouraging and
wanting his affections. He appears hopeful that his sentiments will be well received by the woman and at
the same time fearful of rejection. But she allows him to court her now and encourages him to love her
instead of playing hard to get and running off again. The man then thinks that it seems very odd to see the
woman who was so adamantly against him and his affections and who was such a free spirit to be a
gentle, meek, mild woman willing to submit to a man. But it wasn’t that she didn’t want him necessarily it
was that she wanted him on her terms not his. Edmund Spenser’s Sonnet 67 “Lyke as a Huntsman” is a
metaphorical piece written in the late 16th century in England for his wife in terms of their courtship prior
to their marriage. The sonnet goes through the long chase after the love of a woman and Spenser’s
frustration with it. It then shows him at his breaking point finally giving up. When the woman comes back
and finds that he is no longer chasing her fervently she decides she does want him and they wind
up together in the end. Petrarch’s version of this, Rima 190, ends with the deer, or young lady if you will,
being free because she belongs to Caesar and he has branded her with a collar that makes her safe from
hunters, or suitors. Spenser’s adaptation of this, along with the rest of the sonnets in Amoretti, differs
greatly from other sonnets of this time period. Most other sonnets end in tragedy with the suitor unable to
attain his love. Spencer’s version is rare in that in the end, he gets the the lady/woman.
Notable Renaissance feature: Humanism as man falls in love.
Individualism as man chases after his loved one (just as the poetic persona did)
Literary Devices
Most literary devices are not used in Sonnet 67. There are a few literary devices used such as metaphors
and personification. The whole poem uses a metaphor since the topic is a man trying to win the love of his
life but in the sonnet, the love of his life is a deer and the man is a hunter. Also, since in reality the deer is
the love of his life, and the sonnet refers to the deer as a female, then another literary device is
personification.
SONNET 75 ANALYSIS
Lines 1-4
One day I wrote her name upon the strand,
But came the waves and washed it away:
Again I write it with a second hand,
But came the tide, and made my pains his prey.
The first quatrain of Sonnet 75 depicts the lyrical voice’s attempt to immortalize his loved one.
The stanza starts by setting the scene: “One day”. The lyrical voice writes the name of his loved one on
the sand of a beach but the waves wash the writing away (“I wrote her name upon the strand,/But came
the waves and washed it away”). The lyrical voice writes the name in the sand again, but, as before, the
waves wash the name away (“Again I write it with a second hand,/ But came the tide, and made my pains
his prey”). The action of the wave symbolizes how time will destroy all man-made things. To emphasize
this action the waves are personified as they “washed it away” and “made my pains his prey”. Notice also,
the way in which the lyrical voice refers to his own writing (“my pains”) and how this works as a
metaphor (“his prey”) for the relationship that the words have with nature and time.
Lines 5-8
“Vain man, said she, “that doest in vain assay,
A mortal thing so to immortalize,
For I myself shall like to this decay,
And eke my name be wiped out likewise.”
The second quatrain describes a dialogue that the lyrical voice has with his loved one. The woman reacts
to the writing and tells the lyrical voice that his attempts are in vain (“Vain man, said she, that doest in
vain assay/A mortal thing so to immortalize”), as mortal things such as herself cannot live forever. The
woman introduces a new perspective to Sonnet 75, as she criticizes the lyrical voice’s actions and words.
She emphasizes her mortal nature because she will also disappear like the words in the sand (“For I
myself shall like to this decay/And eek my name be wiped out likewise”). Thus, it is useless to write her
name because she, as the words in the sand, will eventually disappear. Time and nature are cruel and
destroy man-made things.
Lines 9-12
“Not so,” (quod I) “let baser things devise
To die in dust, but you shall live by fame:
My verse, your virtues rare shall eternize,
And in the heavens write your glorious name.
The third quatrain presents the lyrical voice’s response to what his loved one said. In this stanza, there is
a volta (turn) and the tone of Sonnet 75 changes. Up to this moment, both the lyrical voice and his loved
one emphasized on the mortal nature of them and their creations. Nevertheless, the lyrical voice says the
opposite in this stanza. The lyrical voice tells the woman that the “baser things” will disappear, but she
will live on (“Not so, (quod I) let baser things devise/To die in dust, but you shall live by fame”). Notice
the alliteration in these lines: “devise”, “die”, and “dust”. The lyrical voice, a poet, will immortalize his
loved one in his poems and, because of that, she will live forever (“My verse, your virtues rare shall
eternize, And in the heavens write your glorious name”). By immortalizing his loved one, the lyrical voice
puts her on a heavenly space, as she will be “in the heavens” with her “glorious name”. Now, the
alliteration is made with “v” sounds (“verse” and “virtues”), and they are much softer than the “d”sounds
in the previous lines.
Lines 13-14
Where whenas death shall all the world subdue,
Our love shall live, and later life renew.
The final couplet of Sonnet 75 summarizes the message of the poem. According to the lyrical voice, even
if everything comes to an end (“Where whenas death shall all the world subdue”), their love will survive
(“Out love shall live, and later life renew”). There is alliteration in the first line with a “w” sound
(“Where”, “wheneas”, and “world) and with an “l” sound in the second line (“Love”, “live”, “later”, and
“life”). The immortal quality in love and death is contrasted to the briefness in life. Notice how,
throughout the poem, there is a very melodic and stable rhythm that is formed with the
regular rhyme scheme and the iambic pentameter. These devices make the sonnet calm and pleasant to the
ear, while creating a very detailed picture.
THEMES
In ‘Sonnet 75,’ Edmund Spenser engages with themes of immortality and love. He spends the poem depicting his
efforts to immoralize his true love. As hard as he works, he can’t seem to accomplish what he’s striving for.
Spenser uses the image of the sand and waves in order to depict the inevitability of death. But, at the same time, as
he continues to write between waves, he confronts death, seeking to overcome it. This shows the strength of his
love in the face of unwinnable odds.
LITERARY DEVICES
Spenser makes use of several literary devices in ‘Sonnet 75.’ These include but are not limited to alliteration,
an extended metaphor, and enjambment. The latter is a common formal device that occurs when a poet cuts off a
line before its natural stopping point. For example, the transition between lines nine and ten. Allieration is another
interesting device, one that is involved with repetition. For example, “pains” and “prey” in the fourth line and
“verse” and “virtues” in line eleven. In the first lines of the poem, the speaker introduces an
extended metaphor that uses the image of a wave washing away his writing on the beach. It is used to represent the
way that the speaker labors over his love but is continually rebuffed.
NOTABLE RENAISSANCE FEATURE : Humanism as man is bound to fall in and guard love.
Individualism as human attempt to immortalize love for one's
loved ones.
AMORETTI SONNET 79: MEN CALL YOU FAIR BY EDMUND SPENSER
Men call you fair, and you do credit it,
For that your self ye daily such do see:
But the true fair, that is the gentle wit,
And vertuous mind, is much more prais'd of me.
BRIEF ANALYSIS
One evident thing in the sonnet is Renaissance humanism which can be seen in the Sonnet and gives a
discourse on human beauty, love, mortality , immortality and aspects of time. Spenser highlights the idea
of ideal beauty which he believes is worthy and perfectly fit to be appraised. The ideal beauty is the
beauty of “gentle wit” and “virtuous mind”. The lines suggests the inner beauty of a human mind and
intellect which is completely abstract. Critically, Spenser glorifies the abstract objects rather than the
physical object of beauty. It is clearly an influence of Petrarchan ideals who also glorifies the ideal beauty
and love. However, the idea of mortality is another aspect in the Sonnet where Spenser argues that the
physical beauty is mortal and fades away with the passage of Time. Time is personified to a manly figure
who destroys and decays the one’s physical body with its passing age. He states that the physical beauty
loses its “glorious hue” with Time no matter how “fair it be”. Furthermore, another aspect of humanistic
ideal is the idea of immortality is seen in the poem.
According to Spenser, the ideal beauty is immortal and free “From frail corruption”. He means to suggest
that the inner beauty is “permanent and free” and will last forever and ever. Critically, Spenser seems to
defeat the attacks of Time in the lines where the power of Time has no affect in it. He calls it as the “true
beauty” and he argues the reason pertaining to its immortality. He states that the reason behind its
immortality is because of its attachment with the higher being or “divine”. The ideal beauty is born from
the “heavenly seed” and and comes from the “fair spirit” or God himself which is true in itself. He further
stretches that whatever God has created the ideal beauty will remain immortal since he “fair hath made”.
One can assess that Spenser was able to accord the origin of true beauty in the sonnet which comes from
the divine source and the beauty is the ideal beauty which is immortal unlike the physical beauty which
fades away like any flowers that exist on the earth.
NOTABLE RENAISSANCE FEATURE: Humanism as the idolizing, immortalizing, exaltation or
adoring of love by man.