Story: This story is about a NEET aspirant who fails in his first attempt and tries hard for
his second
attempt but unfortunately fails again. After failing for the second time, he supports his father's local
shop.
Scene 1 starts:
Morning:
The alarm rings and he wakes up and his mother asks him to check his result of the first attempt.
Rohan in a tense and agitated state goes on to check his result and unfortunately fails.
Dialogues
Mother- Beta utho aaj tumhara result aane wala hai.
Rohan suddenly wakes up and realises that today is his result day.
Checks his result in his laptop……
He fails and here comes his father
Father- Kya hua kaisa rha result
Rohan- papa iss baar nhi ho paaya…
Father- Koi baat nhi ye sab band kro ab aur chlo mere saath dukaan pe baitho…
Rohan- Papa iss baar mera pehla attempt tha mujhe bus ek aur chance de digeye please…
Mother- Sahi toh bol rha h ye isko ek last chance de digeye iss baar iske paas time bhi bahot kum tha.
(coughs and sweats while speaking in this entire scene)
Father- Thik hai ek last chance hai tumhare paas agar tumhe yhi krna h toh issi attempt m krke dikhao
kyuki ye time barbad krne se aur aage kuch nhi hoga.
(Rohan became restless and urged his father in an apprehensive tone to give him a last chance so that
he could focus more on this goal. His mother being the one social support understands his emotions
and asks her husband to give him another chance. His father agrees and allows him to proceed
forward with his studies.
**During this convo, please include that his mother coughs and sweats while speaking as her health
condition is not good. )
Time lapse……..
(In a montage shot, we can show that he is studying, has a proper routine and time schedule.)
Scene 2:
One day while studying, he called out his mother but there was no response from her side. He stands
up and starts looking for his mother in the house. She was lying on the kitchen's floor. She got a heart
stroke while doing some work in the kitchen and the utensils and other items fell on the floor.
Rohan- Mummyyyy….Mummyyyy….. Suno mummmyyyy…
No response
(He stands up and starts looking for his mother in the house)
Rohan- Mummy kya hogya aapko. Utho mummy utho….
(She was lying on the kitchen's floor.)
He tries hard to save his mother but couldn't. He tries to contact but couldn’t reach him, contacted his
neighbour and got to know that there were no hospitals nearby.
Rohan to neighbour- Uncle aap aake dekho na mummy koi jawab nhi de rhi h unko kya hua h papa
nhi phone nhi utha rhe hai…
Uncle- Haan beta mai dekhta hu chlo..
They walk towards his house. Finds out that his mother is not in her senses.
Suddenly they together place her in the car and take her to the hospital.
Somehow, they managed to take her to the hospital but she dies on the way.
His biggest supporter was not by his side, he lost her. He became numb and shattered. That day he
got his biggest motivation to study. He understood that this reason was enough for him to focus on his
exam and achieve his childhood dream for the sake for her mother.
(He studies hard and does household chores.) Montage of carrying out different household activities
and studying timely.
Scene 5:
The day finally arrived.
Exam day:
He was getting ready to head towards the examination hall.
Father- Beta Rohan dekho ye phone m kya aa rha h NEET ke baare m
Rohan- Haan papa aaya..
His father calls him and asks to check what was popping out in his phone about NEET. HE CHECKS
AND CAME TO KNOW THAT NEET EXAMINATION FOR THIS YEAR HAS BEEN
CANCELED. For a boy like him, this attempt was everything in his life. That day he was completely
hopeless and we will fade out this scene on his sad facial expressions.
Fade in again: He is helping his father at his local shop and his face shows his displeasure with his
work, this was his fate, his destiny which did not favoured him.
CHARACTERS:
BOY: A 18 year old boy preparing for his NEET examination. He is intelligent and ambitious but his
financial condition is not that good. He loves his father and mother.
Mom: biggest support system for his son. She is like Vikrant's mom (12th fail). She convinced his
husband to give his son another chance. She loved her son very much.
Father: A typical Indian father who is worried about his son's future. He wants his son to join his shop
and improve the financial conditions. He is nature wise strict and he gets disturbed and sad after his
wife's death.
