Annotated The Visitors
Annotated The Visitors
Her first
She was co-winner of the 2012 RAKA Kate Challis Award for Stolen.
Rainbow’s End has had numerous productions since its premiere in 2003
and won the 2012 Drovers Award for best touring production. Both Stolen
and Rainbow’s End have been placed on secondary school curricula. The
Lewis won the 2014 Black & Write! Prize, and was shortlisted for the
Awards.
Jane believes that stories have the power to reframe our national identity.
INTRODUCTION
attempts at cultural eradication and much more have either gone untold,
Lecture called ‘After the Dreaming’, talked of the Great Australian Silence,
and a vested interest in forgetting the past to avoid the truth of history.
Fifty years later, Rachel Perkins, in her Boyer Lecture entitled ‘The End of
and the freedoms that would come for all Australians when we embraced
the name of Apartheid. The history was complex and divisive with a great
truth-telling, the TRC helped shape a definition of truth that was inclusive
and empowering to allow all aggrieved parties to speak. The TRC adopted a
the truth;
evidence-based lens;
the Royal Commission into Aboriginal Deaths in Custody, Australia and politicians. As Stan Grant wrote in August 2017:
The object of the establishment of the Council is to promote a have taken some people by surprise, the idea that people were here
process of reconciliation between Aborigines and Torres Strait for more than 60,000 years before the Endeavour dropped anchor.
Islanders and the wider Australian community, based on an What were we doing all that time, just waiting for white people to
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appreciation by the Australian community as a whole of Aboriginal find us?
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the events and people who have left a mark on the past. Captain Cook is not
address Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander disadvantage.
just a person, Captain Cook is a narrative we have chosen to help write out
The telling of hard histories is implied in this statement but stops short of the millennia of Blak history and to reinforce the narratives of Terra
embracing a whole truth-telling process, instead focussing on Nullius, white superiority and the righteous colonial and modern
reconciliation first and foremost. Truth-telling has become the rallying cry occupation of the continent. So it is with January 26, 1788.
of the Australian modern era and like the definitions used in South Africa it Eighteen years after the Endeavour crew mapped the eastern coastline of
has become important to see truth as a function of perspective and often Australia and eventually raised a flag claiming it for the British Empire,
dominated by self-serving narratives restating colonial imperatives. the First Fleet arrived in Botany Bay on January 19 and 20, 1788 to find
In a year that could only be described as an absolute dumpster fire, 2020 that Cook’s records were not as truthful as they were led to believe, with
was to mark the 250th anniversary of the voyage of the Endeavour poor soil, a lack of fresh water and the harbour not deep enough to anchor
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captained by Lieutenant James Cook. Bushfires and Covid-19 meant the close to shore. And so the First Fleet under the command of Arthur Phillip
suspension of the planned re-enactments and other events but, before this moved to Port Jackson (later Sydney Cove) arriving on January 26, 1788.
welcome demise, the debate raged about the role of memory-making and The two events of the voyage of the Endeavour and the arrival of the
memorials. While the USA was dealing with its own Trump-inspired sense First Fleet get confused all the time. The claiming of the continent and the
of disconnection from truth and evidence, and race relations hit another raising of the British flag we have all come to associate with Sydney Cove
disastrous low point, the role of statues and memorials was raised in was first done on an island named Bedanug in the Torres Strait. Cook
Australia. What is the role of a statue to James Cook in the truth-telling of named it Possession Island, but this was done on August 22, 1770—over
Australia? In 2017, in response to the tearing down of statues and three months after the week spent in Kamay, which they named Botany
monuments marking USA Confederate leaders and racist events, Bay. Because very few people know the relevant dates concerning the
broadcaster and commentator Stan Grant dared to question the role of the voyage of the Endeavour (April 29, 1770—arrival at Kamay; June 10, 1770
narrative that Captain Cook ‘discovered’ Australia. It was with great —ran aground and was shipwrecked in Gooreng Gooreng country for six
weeks; August 22, 1770—landing at Bedanug), January 26 has often Jane Harrison is a playwright who has built her reputation on writing on
become the repository of the all the foundation narratives of our country. A to the public record our narrative from our perspective. From her works
survey from 2017 stated: Stolen and Rainbow’s End you see a strong combination of social justice,
This highlights the intersection of the ‘discovery’, colonisation, country- footsteps of ’80s classics ‘Basically Black’ and BabaKiueria by shifting the
forming and ANZAC narratives as they get apportioned to a single day in framing of the conversation and recasting the dominant point of view to
our calendar and how little knowledge those surveyed had about January reflect our way of seeing the world. She does this not by alienating the
26. I argue there is vested interest in confusing and intertwining these audience but by drawing them in through familiar constructions of debate
narratives. The two events of the arrivals of the Endeavour and the First and discussion, she stipulates the gathered council wear suits to show
Fleet become synonymous because they are crafted to act like the statue of status, they speak English to invite understanding, and express cultural
Captain Cook, a statement of perspective and a permanent marker in time perspectives throughout to demonstrate a First Nations view of this
that argues legitimacy and power. Megan Davies talks about each Australia foundation event.
Day becoming more toxic as the gap between the rhetoric of the day and Harrison brings wit and charm through the debate like a gathering of
the anniversary it marks clashes with the aspirations of the nation and its jurors sifting through evidence to arrive at agreement. There is not one
Drama works best when it can find voice for a diversity of arguments and
Who gets to name a place? Why is there so much confusion around the
allow an audience to decide.
foundation narratives of this country? What role do First Nations
Like many of Harrison’s works, The Visitors took a long time to develop
Australians play in the storytelling of this country?
around January 26 and Australia Day I think scared off the white
cultures, it is no surprise that our narratives have been closely held and
by Moogahlin Performing Arts, sold out during the 2020 Sydney Festival
coloniser and it is no accident that storytelling in the form of theatre, film,
and extra performances had to be scheduled to fulfil demand, you got the
song, dance and art-making have been where we have found strength and
sense that these fears were unfounded. Australians are in search of new
power in the modern era.
meaning for old colonial relics and to place these abandoned and confused
foundation narratives more in relation to the 60,000-plus years of human
We need more plays like The Visitors to help shape the future by
Wesley Enoch
December 2020
Wesley Enoch is a writer and director for the stage. He was the Artistic
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The Visitors premiered at the 2020 Sydney Festival. The premiere was
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
supported by Create NSW, Australia Council for the Arts, City of Sydney,
My first responsibility is back to my community, and while there is no one Government through the Department of Communications and the Arts and
‘community’, I have been blessed with support from many First Nations Catalyst—Australian Arts and Culture Fund. I particularly want to
individuals and companies whilst developing this script. I am aware of the acknowledge the producers, Moogahlin Performing Arts. It was a big leap
sensitivity in me, as a First Nations woman, telling a ‘men’s’ story and to stage a play of its size and scope. ‘The Incredibles’—Lily Shearer,
mostly I was encouraged by the many First Nations men who were Liza-Mare Syron, Fred Copperwaite and Ali Murphy-Oates—made it
involved, so a huge thankyou to the fellas. happen. Thank you Fred Copperwaite, for your steady yet ambitious
The idea for this play had been percolating for many years before direction. To the cast: John Blair, Damion Hunter, Colin Kinchela, Nathan
Maryrose Casey invited me to be writer-in-residence at the Monash Leslie, Leroy Parsons, Glenn Shea, and Kerri Simpson, my gratitude for
University Indigenous Studies Centre. There, I put down a complete first your powerful and moving performances. Thank you to the set, sound,
draft, with a script reading culminating the residency. My two cultural lighting designers and crew, and all of those working behind the scenes to
consultants during the residency were Tony Birch and Robyne Latham. I make the magic happen on the night.
am most grateful. Sydney Festival Artistic Director Wesley Enoch deserves a big mob of
Across its many years of development, various organisations provided credit for his encouragement and sector leadership over many, many years.
support in many forms—time, workshopping, feedback, audiences and Much appreciation to Currency Press for our long-standing publishing
Moogahlin Performing Arts (Yellamundie Festival), Playwriting And for everything you do, and what you mean to me: my daughters
Australia, Melbourne Theatre Company, Cybec Electric, Melbourne Savannah and Nova, and my partner Dominic. Love, love, love.
Indigenous Arts Festival, the Victorian College of the Arts and the
Waving the dramaturgical wand at various times was the adored Aiden
Fennessey, Francesca Smith, Chris Mead and Fred Copperwaite. I’ve had
the incredible privilege to work with directors Glenn Shea, Leah Purcell,
Sermsah Bin Saad, Kamahi Djordan King, Glenn Maynard, Troy Russell,
Robert Preston, John Blair, Damion Hunter, Jason De Santis, Kirk Page,
Sound Design, Phil Downing, with additional composition from Tim Gray
The play was workshopped with the assistance of Playwriting Australia and
in 2016.
CHARACTERS
‘Bureaucrat/Numbers Man’.
LAWRENCE, young Gweagal man, Botany Bay mob, Fire Clan. Youngest.
‘Almost initiated’.
‘General’.
The ‘Tradie’.
‘Anthropologist/Philosopher’.
SETTING
CONVENTIONS
suits and the props are modern. They bring spears and shields with
them.
— means an interruption.
clouds spectacular. The sound of cicadas and birds and the sea. never use you as a scout.
JACOB: Bros. I can be silent when required. Quiet as a bush mouse. But no
A lone man, WALTER, stands on the edge of an escarpment, looking out to
need for subterfuge just for a meeting. Grandfather …
sea (the audience). He is lost in thought. Although morning, it is
JOSEPH: Jacob.
blindingly hot. After a time, GORDON arrives. He is a big man, a warrior,
JACOB and GORDON do the blackfella handshake.
fit.
JOSEPH: Decent. The ants were frenzied. GARY: Speaking of which … never in my lifetime have I witnessed that.
resumes pacing. WALTER silently embraces JOSEPH. There’s no need GORDON and GARY shake hands. JACOB and GARY shake hands. JACOB
for words between them. JOSEPH follows WALTER’s line of sight. turns to GORDON while GARY is left standing alone.
through the bush and GORDON stops pacing. GORDON: Serious? Since last time?
JACOB: Haha. Grandfather reckons it’s something in the water. I reckon it’s
Jacob.
JACOB laughs.
GARY: Strange times?
JOSEPH: Strange time. Perhaps that’s Albert? They finish eating, tossing their shells in a pile. The midden.
JACOB: Everyone loves a water view. But WALTER is still lost in thought.
GARY: Speaking of which, the purpose of this meeting— JACOB: [ under his breath] Tidda.
JACOB: We starting the formal stuff already? How about a feed first? WALTER: Pardon me. I was contemplating.
We’ve all come a long way. ’Cept Gordo. ALBERT: Told ya.
GORDON: Yeah, tuck in. Rock oysters, Goolwa cockles, pippis, red cockles,
A few laugh.
He indicates WALTER.
GARY: Before we start waxing lyrical, let’s get through the meeting
We stay until we all agree. JACOB: Jacob, North Shore Nation. We’re lovers and fighters. We love
The agreement is for the greater good, not favouring any one clan 3
fighting—ay.
group. Agreed?
GARY: Gary, Northern River Nation.
ALL: Yes. Yep. Yes.
GORDON: Gordon, proud Harbour and Freshwater Nation.
GARY: No gossip. Agreed?
GARY: Thank you, Gordon, for permission to hold this meeting on your
ALL: Of course. Yes. 4
country. Are we happy to speak this common language?
GARY: Lastly, have you given instructions that the women are not to
JACOB: Of course!
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approach them, nor the children?
ALL: Yes. Yep.
ALL: Yes.
GARY: Wait. Where’s the Bay mob? Uncle Raymond?
JACOB: Hang on. How are the girls going to fish if they’re not allowed on
JOSEPH: He declined.
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the water? That’s what they do.
GARY: Why’s that, Gordon?
ALBERT: It’s just until they leave.
GORDON: Why ask me?
GARY: None of us should approach them until we send word?
JACOB: You flogged him, hey, bros. What for?
ALL: Okay. Yes. Fine.
GORDON: Running off his mouth.
GARY: Jiliwa that way.
GARY looks disapprovingly at both GORDON and JACOB.
Keep your coolamons full.
It’s hot and we need you hydrated. GARY: No gossip. All—other than the Bay mob—are here?
ALBERT: Sure. GARY: Good. [ In language] May the spirits look kindly on this Council of
GORDON: The plan is— Elders and guide us in our business today.
our Elders, who guide us with their wisdom of the ages, our warriors, They all turn to look out to sea. After a time …
who defend us, the stories and ceremonies, which teach us lore. And I JOSEPH: Let me get it straight. There were three, but smaller nowees. They
GARY: Hold that great observation, Albert. Our agenda … JACOB: At least he’s strong.
JACOB: Keep the river flowing, Gary. GORDON: And he’s armed.
GARY: Actually there’s only one item— JOSEPH: Good for him to sit and listen, eh?
JACOB: We can use him to run messages. Hang back there, young fella.
There’s a sound through the trees and they all react, alert.
GARY: For the boy’s sake, let’s go around and introduce ourselves—
LAWRENCE bursts into the space, panting.
all.]
LAWRENCE: Uncle Raymond sent me.
LAWRENCE: Cousin brother.
ALBERT: He’s Bay mob. Young Lawrence.
ALBERT: Bay mob. Fire Clan.
GARY: Go on then.
JOSEPH: Welcome.
LAWRENCE is still out of breath …
GORDON: Oi! That’s for me to do. Welcome.
LAWRENCE: He wanted me to tell youse about the big nowees …
LAWRENCE: Respect to your country, Uncle.
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LAWRENCE nods then sneezes.
LAWRENCE: Nah, there’s a whole mob of them. Uncle wanted me to warn LAWRENCE: The heat. I reckon it’s the heat.
you.
LAWRENCE wipes his mucousy nose on his arm; the others wrinkle
WALTER: Warn us?
their noses in disgust.
LAWRENCE: That they’re coming. That they’re on their way. Each with a
JOSEPH: A scarlet parakeet fell from the sky. In my many years, I have not
big mob on board.
witnessed that. I wondered … well … could it have something to do
GARY: So why isn’t he here to warn us?
with them ?
LAWRENCE quickly glances at GORDON and shakes his head. JACOB: They don’t have that much power, Gramps.
GORDON: He sent a boy in his place. GORDON clears his throat and GARY gets the hint.
GARY: Gentlemen! This is not our usual, seasonal meeting— ALBERT: We’ll see.
JOSEPH: Being law time. And the women being off on their business— GORDON: Who cares if he votes? What I wanna know is, will he man up?
GARY: —I felt it was incumbent upon me, as Chair, that we should meet to We need the young fellas to form our front line. You up for that?
discuss—and agree on—a course of action. Gordon, respectfully, as LAWRENCE: Sure. I brought my spear, my woomera and Uncle’s shield.
JACOB: Yet.
GARY: Our process needs to be—
GARY: Go ahead. 6
JACOB: Quick. I’ve got bark for a canoe drying out. In this weather, it’ll
LAWRENCE: I just want to clarify, why are you meeting? What do you have
crack. So, Mr Chair, get on with it!
to agree on?
LAWRENCE: Does anyone know why they’re back? After fourteen hot
GARY: Oh, I’m sorry. How we’re gunna deal with this mari nowee, this
seasons?
time.
WALTER: Fine question, lad.
GARY: With a show of force? Yep? over the top. That way it looks like there are waves and waves of
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JACOB: Too right.
GARY: Agreed. Make it look like we’re serious. JACOB: Classic strategy.
ALBERT: Exactly. Mr Chair. I believe Gordon has formulated a plan? WALTER: Wait.
GARY: Gordon, could you set the scene please … GARY: What?
GARY passes the message stick down to GORDON, who accepts it very ALBERT: Got a different plan?
GORDON: Certainly, Mr Chair. I’m suggesting: the attack should come GARY: What?
from three directions. Albert, you and South Shore mob, you come WALTER: Before. When you declared that we’d all agreed to shoo them off.
from the west side. The protocol is we vote with a show of hands.
ALBERT: My men are on standby. Awaiting my signal. GARY: Okay. Point taken.
GORDON: Good fella. Jacob’s mob will come down from the east. They start to put hands up gammon way.
GORDON: And I will bring my fellas over from the south. [ To JOSEPH] And
breath] And that’s saying something.
you, Grandfather. You have your youngest, strongest warriors at the GARY: [ clearing his throat ] Elders. With a show of hands—all those in
ready?
favour of sending them away—
JOSEPH: Well I, I um … Five hands go up. WALTER does not raise his hand. They all look at
JACOB: Not much fire power in his mob. Which is—what’s the word?— him.
JOSEPH: Ironic?
GARY: Why?
GARY: What’s with you mob, today? You’re all over the place!
GORDON: It’s bullshit.
He shakes his head. ALBERT: Is this part of some other idea? You got a better idea? He’s pretty
clever.
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WALTER: No. WALTER: They look desperate.
GARY: [to WALTER] Let me get this straight. You don’t want to shoo them JACOB: How’s that our problem?
away? What do you expect us to do? Set fire to their nowee? WALTER: They’re in our waters. So they’re our responsibility.
WALTER: No. ALBERT: Look, Walter, from all the stories our old people tell us, we don’t
GARY: Then what? want that mob landing. You must have heard those stories? I can tell
WALTER: No need.
WALTER looks out at the boats. The clouds get darker. A wind whips
WALTER: Well, it might seem simple to just send them away. But it could
WALTER: Maybe.
be a matter of life or death.
JACOB: Whaaat?
JACOB: Don’t be ridiculous! We’re not gunna die.
GORDON: Somebody thinks different.
GARY: It’s a show of force, not an actual battle. A gammon battle.
LAWRENCE: Yeah!
GORDON: Although we may need to follow through—
JACOB: It’s hot, it’s gunna thunder. It’s gunna bucket down. We all know
ALBERT: If it comes to that.
what we gotta do.
GORDON: In which case, there’s always casualties with war.
JOSEPH: There is no precipitation with mammatus clouds. That comes later.
that with the women—no way could we make a decision like that
JACOB: Excuse me.
without the women.
GARY: Gentlemen! Keep it nice.
WALTER: I wasn’t talking about us dying. I mean them .
ALBERT turns to WALTER.
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GARY: Why don’t you want to send them on their way?
▼▼▼ ALBERT: I’m curious as to your evidence for that viewpoint. What’s
aren’t? That’s my point. Logic suggests we need to check them out JACOB: I thought I was the joker.
The weather changes slightly, as do the clouds and sounds. ALBERT: Shh.
GARY: Look. Just because I want to send them off, that doesn’t mean I GARY: Settle down! Hand the message stick to Walter. Explain yourself.
want them to die. I just want them to go away. The message stick is passed down.
GARY: My mind is made up. All of our minds are fixed, right?
WALTER: Who are we, around this circle? Yes, we’re the warriors of our
ALL EXCEPT JOSEPH: Right . mobs. We’re the craftsmen. Scientists, Healers. We’re cultured. We
JACOB: Even yours, Grandfather, right? Right? Right, Joey? have language, more than one. We trade. We have ceremonies and
JOSEPH: Right … yeah, yeah. songs. We have lore. We have protocols. And we share one particular
protocol, and that is we welcome those who pass through our country.
JACOB: And talking about it for a whole mob of seasons won’t change our
JOSEPH: True.
minds.
GARY: Gordon—
GARY: A barbecue.
GORDON: Sorry, Grandfather. GORDON: We should be ready to pounce!
ALBERT: It’s unusual circumstances. JACOB: This meeting should be about the plan, Gary.
LAWRENCE: On account of the heat and all? ALBERT: We need to be signalling to our men on standby. We need to be
JOSEPH: [ to LAWRENCE] Please don’t think that’s how we usually act. briefing them.
WALTER: Rather than just rushing in to confront them, we consider other LAWRENCE: Battle. Yeah! Then I’ll be a big man.
options. That’s what these meetings are for. To consider. We set aside JOSEPH: Is that your last test, young fella?
a day, to talk, to listen, to observe. LAWRENCE: Yep. I’ve gone through most of initiation. Last thing I need to
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JACOB: A day? A whole freaking day! do.
GARY: Calm down! He’s right. Our role here is to look at the situation
GORDON looks at LAWRENCE as if for the first time. The others all
wisely.
look pointedly at GARY.
LAWRENCE points more energetically. They ignore him. ‘How ya bin?’ et cetera.
LAWRENCE: Hey, Uncs. Look … JACOB draws JOSEPH off to the side.
ALBERT: Three of them. JACOB: Gramps. Got a minute? It’s about the new wife.
GORDON: That’s more than last time. JACOB: Well. You know.
LAWRENCE: There were almost two mobs of them in my country last JOSEPH: No.
week …
JACOB: Well. Things aren’t all that … things aren’t exactly …
LAWRENCE: Almost.
JACOB obliges. JOSEPH sniffs under his armpits.
GORDON: We need to assemble. We need to prepare.
JACOB: I don’t have this trouble with the others … This new one, she’s a
GARY: We still outnumber them, don’t we? All our mobs, against three
bit tricky … Ever had that problem?
nowees’ of them …?
JOSEPH: Yeah. Nah. Poke ya tongue out. All hands go up.
JOSEPH: Depends. I reckon … WALTER: Mr Chair, can we observe them for a few moments? Indulge me.
JACOB: Tell me. JACOB: Why don’t we watch them for the next five seasons so you can get
GARY: Gordon has convinced me that there are precedents. But ALBERT shakes his head.
ALBERT: It’s unusual— GARY: Okay, okay. Let’s all observe them for a few minutes.
JACOB: Like everything about this crazy day— JACOB: Why don’t we measure their heads while we’re at it?
WALTER: I’m okay with it. We agree then? JACOB: Lot of bark in those nowees.
WALTER: With a show of hands? JOSEPH: Maybe they’re waiting for us to welcome them? Do you see any
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JOSEPH: Ttt. back to their nowees. They needed help to find water. They’re a
ALBERT: Anything solid? Like solid evidence? That we can use to form an bit … I dunno, not very savvy, I guess. Uncle Raymond says we should
send them away. He says they don’t belong. They are myall, strangers.
opinion?
WALTER: Yet we welcome everyone else. That’s our way of doing things
LAWRENCE: [ boldly] You’ve checked them out, Uncle. What have you
LAWRENCE: What I’m trying to say is, I don’t think it’s the same with
GORDON: Different to last time.
them. They’re different.
GARY: Anything else?
JACOB: Sure are.
They look at each other, look across the sea, look back at each other.
WALTER: Different doesn’t mean less than.
The sounds of masts creaking, and metal on metal, and faint voices.
GARY: We don’t know that. Let’s not speculate.
JOSEPH: They’re noisy buggers.
ALBERT: Better to draw upon our knowledge of them . What do we know—
Sniggers of laughter.
first-hand?
GARY: Okay, okay … let’s try a different tack. Let’s all take a small mob
They all look at each other. They all look blank.
of time to yarn Walter around.
WALTER: I have something.
JACOB: Like a really small mob of time. No bloody speeches, right?
JACOB: Is it ‘magic’? Haha.
GARY: Stop interrupting. We each take a small mob of time to put forward
WALTER: Kind of.
our arguments. Why we should scare them off. Who’ll begin?
Grandfather Joseph, as the eldest? WALTER brings out a tomahawk. They come over to look, GORDON
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GARY: Lawrence? ALBERT: Is that a mago?
JACOB: You set a grass fire, young fella, we’ll see what it flushes out. WALTER: Kind of.
GORDON: But watch which way the wind is blowing. LAWRENCE touches it.
GARY: Go on.
GARY: Don’t cut yourself, young fella!
ALBERT: It’s very much like our magos, the stuff it’s made from except
JOSEPH: It’s not flint. Or greenstone. What would you use it for, Jacob?
ALBERT: Incredible! ALBERT: They might have other—what did you call it? Technologies. We
JOSEPH: But if you chop down the branch, isn’t it gone forever? ▼▼▼
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GARY: Thanks, Walter … They gave my wife’s Aunty this.
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He pulls a faded red ribbon from his pocket.
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JACOB: I could trade with you. I have some excellent spears. [ Apologetically] I sometimes use it to tie the feet of fowl together. It’s
quite strong.
WALTER ignores him.
WALTER: And wasn’t there something about a cloth?
LAWRENCE: Hey, Unc. Don’t give it to these old fellas, no disrespect. It’s a
GARY: Now that you remind me, yes … they also gave her this.
young fella thing. New technology.
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He pulls out a handkerchief and covers his groin area with it. JACOB
WALTER: Exactly! Or say you’re running up a tree, to get honey—
begins to laugh. They all join in. GARY hams it up a little, enjoying
JACOB: The women collect the honey.
GORDON: When he hasn’t even been up close. poisonous smell lingers in the air … Second time, the goorabeera rings
out again. Bang! Old Uncle George is struck in the leg! He bleeds! He
GARY: Well, what do you know for sure then, Gordon?
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gives out a terrifying yell. Brave Uncle Raymond—
GORDON: Last time they were aggressive. I know that first-hand. They had
LAWRENCE: Like you, Uncle? GORDON: You’re telling that story wrong.
GARY: You were there? Tell us. Pass him the message stick.
ALBERT: Brave young Raymond with his spear and his illalong charges
The message stick is passed to GORDON. But he won’t take it. towards them. The goorabeera bangs once more and this was the
result!
GORDON: Was a long time ago.
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ALBERT: The illalong with the hole! I know this story! Gary, pass it! He holds LAWRENCE’s shield up and puts his finger through a hole.
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He sighs.
ALBERT: And the message stick, Lawrence … So, eighteen summers ago— LAWRENCE: I like the way you tell that story.
ALBERT: Eighteen hot seasons ago, this same mob. with the same markings,
WALTER: Mmmmm. That story’s …
appear. The Elders try to ignore them, but they kept persisting. So they
ALBERT: The point is: those things hurt from a whole mob of distance. And
sent down an advance party. Uncle George, Gordon’s father, and Uncle
we have proof. Bang!
Raymond.
JOSEPH: Old Uncle repelled them though?
LAWRENCE: Uncle Raymond tells this yarn!
GARY: Obviously. They left. But now they’re back. Do we want that to
ALBERT: Except he was young Raymond then.
happen again?
GORDON: Raymond shouldn’t be telling that story.
ALBERT: No.
GARY: Then you tell it.
JOSEPH: No.
But GORDON shakes his head and ALBERT grabs his chance to
JACOB: We need more than two old fellas to scare them off.
continue.
He goes to stand up but WALTER holds up his hand.
ALBERT: It’s a community story and I have the message stick. The two men
WALTER: Wait! What if there’s another explanation?
step forward but in response the goorabeera erupts, Bang! frightening
GARY: [ to WALTER] You have questions, well so do I. Like, why the need WALTER: At first I wasn’t sure what it was, and if it was utilitarian or a
for the goorabeera? When old Uncle was approaching them to talk? trivial thing. I experimented and discovered it was a tool. It’s perfect
GORDON: To welcome them. for making these kinds of openings—it’s very hard—and it can make
ALBERT: You say that a lot, Walter. JACOB: That tool, you still got it?
WALTER: You said the hole in the illalong proved they were dangerous.
ALBERT points to the shield reverentially.
ALBERT: This is the very illalong that was pierced by the goorabeera. We
LAWRENCE: What do you mean?
have the story, but we can also see the outcome with our own eyes.
WALTER turns to ALBERT.
WALTER: That story. There’s something wrong …
WALTER: Albert, is what I said possible?
GORDON: [ muttering] Yes.
ALBERT: Those old stories are evidence.
GARY: Go on.
WALTER: Then perhaps my story is too? [ To JOSEPH] What about you,
WALTER: What if that hole, in that illalong, wasn’t caused by a goorabeera?
Grandfather? Do you still think Albert’s tale is the whole, and the only,
ALBERT: Look at it! It wasn’t made by a piece of flint or a kangaroo tooth.
story?
It wasn’t made by anything we know. Yet there’s a hole.
JOSEPH: It’s a mystery.
GORDON: The goorabeera made that hole. I swear on my life.
GARY: Or a distraction. We need to decide whether we let them land or not.
WALTER: Perhaps there’s a different explanation?
Gordon says they’re dangerous: Walter says they’re not. What else do
WALTER reveals his shield. There is a hole in it. Everyone stares at it. we have?
JOSEPH: My eyes tell me that’s the same kind of hole! GARY: Could they … if we let them land, would it be possible that they
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JACOB: Did you find that too? After they left? could deny us our liberty?
WALTER: No. It’s mine. And I made the hole in it. GORDON: Pff. They won’t succeed. I am the equal of three of those people.
JACOB: If they try to rush us, we’ll respond in force. They won’t know what
WALTER: Using an object of theirs that I found.
hit them.
JACOB: You love their stuff.
GORDON: In terms of marksmanship, they have no idea of our superiority WALTER: We have as long as it takes. We have forever.
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over them. We have more accurate spears, and more athletic JACOB: [ under his breath] We’re gunna use up our forever yabbering.
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warriors. GARY: Alright then—Jacob, your turn.
WALTER: That also contradicts your story about the goorabeera, and their
ALBERT tosses him the message stick.
terrifying ‘magical’ powers. Therefore they prove no threat.
JACOB: Why yarn up big time about them? You’ve checked them out. They
GORDON: You’re trying to trip me up.
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are among the miserablest specimens you’ve ever seen. Wretched.
JOSEPH: Gentlemen!
JOSEPH: Have you seen their teeth?
GORDON: None of us want them here.
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LAWRENCE: Their teeth are shocking.
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ALBERT: You have to be up quite close to notice their teeth.
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GORDON: Bay mob fella said they tossed their dead overboard, at dawn.
GORDON: Teeth? Teeth?! I mean, come on, we need to take action! Before
GARY: I heard it was one body.
they … before they … ambush us. Jacob—c’mon. Do something, bros.
GORDON: So? Still not right.
JACOB: [ to WALTER] We all want to send them away. You’re stopping us.
WALTER: Gordon. You fight with that family group, don’t you?
Why?
LAWRENCE: Hey. That’s my mob— WALTER: Alright. I have a peculiar feeling about this. And too many
GARY: Shush, young fella! questions that I don’t have the answers for. For instance, we don’t
WALTER: You speak of their dishonesty often, yet, all of a sudden, this Bay know what their motivations are. They could have come in peace, they
mob brother is a reliable witness. could be in trouble, they could offer us things that are useful.
GORDON: Nothing you say changes what I see with my own eyes.
GARY: Gordon! Elders!
I see big nowees. Lots of them.
He has a migraine.
I see a mob of mobs of people.
Grandfather, Joseph, I would really value your wise council right
Dangerous people.
now …
LAWRENCE: There’s another one!
JOSEPH: Still gathering my thoughts.
ALBERT: Four nowees.
GARY: That’s okay, Grandfather. Take your time.
LAWRENCE: And another on the horizon!
JACOB: Like we’ve got lots of that.
GARY: That’ll make five.
JOSEPH: Maybe he was right? About the two mobs. JOSEPH: I can’t hear myself think—
GARY: Quiet!
LAWRENCE: Taller than ten men.
JACOB: Me in particular—as well as the canoe, I’ve got that new wife—
GORDON: The goorabeeras. That’s all the evidence we need.
ALBERT: Technically, we haven’t seen anything and they haven’t done GARY: Elders! Quiet. Men. Brothers! Shut up!
anything.
They all fall silent.
GORDON: Why are you siding with him?
LAWRENCE: Do youse have to yell? You’re giving me a headache.
ALBERT: I’m not.
They look at him, but basically they’re too caught up in their own
There is thunder in the distance. The wind has picked up.
mire.
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JOSEPH: Cumulonimbus clouds. Wild weather is imminent, gentlemen.
And how do you agree on anything?
GARY: Grandfather, it must be your turn. Please. Have you formulated your
ALBERT: [ to WALTER, quieter ] You’ve managed to stir up all this chaos over
thoughts?
something that should be really straightforward.
JOSEPH: Shouldn’t we go back to our women? Hear what they have to say?
GORDON: None of us want them here.
ALBERT: Our women are on secret business. They were firm about us not
JOSEPH: You don’t speak for everyone. Not for me, anyway.
bothering them.
GORDON: Old man!
JOSEPH: Right.
GARY: Gordon.
JACOB: If they die, whose fault is that? Not ours— Walter, have you got anything to add?
ALBERT: And what about the trees? They hacked them down, last time. Pause.
GORDON: I’m going down there now. C’mon, men. One mark indicating we should allow them to land …
GORDON, JACOB and ALBERT are gathering their things when WALTER GORDON: That’s a joke!
speaks softly. JACOB: Which one of you? Own up. The rest of us deserve to know.
WALTER: Stop. I’ll do you a deal. You vote. I’ll sit it out. If you all vote to GARY: The point of a secret ballot is that we don’t disclose the way we
repel them, I’ll respect the decision. vote. If the Elder wants it that way …
GARY: Highly unusual. But then, this is a most unusual meeting … Any GORDON: He doesn’t need to own up. We all know who turned.
ALBERT: It’ll move things along. spinning a story about a poor mob who are gunna die if we don’t help
GORDON: Some action. them, so you jump over to the other side of the river. That’s pathetic.
GARY: Hey! We don’t talk to each other like that! We’re Elders. It’s not
WALTER walks over to the lookout point, intensely still, and then
right.
turns, observing them.
GORDON: You’re worried about what’s right? We’re trying to send this
GARY: Last time, Brother Walter was ostracised by the way he voted. I
ruthless mob back to where they belong—and all of a sudden we’re
don’t use that word lightly. So this time we will vote anonymously.
paying attention to a pack of stories!
Each of you, mark the message stick. To send them away, mark the red
JOSEPH: Please—
section. To let them land, mark the yellow section. Clear?
GARY: Gordon!
He marks the stick with a piece of sharp flint then passes both on.
JOSEPH: Please—
The movement of the clouds across the sky quickens as if time has
GARY: Can I remind everyone, that this is not about what the ‘popular’
sped up. One by one, they make their mark on the stick. Finally it
reaches GARY again. decision is. I am proud to be an Elder on this Council because I value
Send them away. GORDON: Gunna get the whole set of protocols chanted at us, are we?
Away.
GARY: No. Just you.
Away.
GORDON, at boiling point, steps towards GARY but JACOB intervenes.
Away.
JACOB: Let’s get back to this brother. Who changes his mind, just like that. JACOB: Told ya! [ To GORDON] Hey! I bet it’s that business with Raymond
ALBERT: Yes, enlighten us. GORDON: Is that it? It’s a revenge on me?
GORDON: Yeah! Yeah. LAWRENCE: It’s nothing to do with that! Even though I think you’re a bully.
JOSEPH: I can’t— GORDON goes to biff LAWRENCE but WALTER shoves LAWRENCE
LAWRENCE: Because it was me. GARY: [ to LAWRENCE] And you lot, quit it. Finish what you have to say,
GORDON: You! Lawrence. [ Under his breath] The meeting’s a fucking shamble.
JOSEPH: You. LAWRENCE: Okay. The reason I changed is—him. [ Pointing at WALTER]
JACOB: Give us your reason! This Uncle chose to be a lone voice. You don’t know what it’s like to
WALTER: Gordon—you made us vote to count his vote. country, being with you mob, and I’ve already learnt so much. What
LAWRENCE: True? JACOB: Let’s go back a bit. The whole idea of them being here is a little
JOSEPH: You are unwell. Your eyes glow, as does your nose.
LAWRENCE: Good point.
JOSEPH: Green slides from your nose. Like slime at the edge of a waterhole.
treated her with kindness, that they shared some maugro with her.
GORDON: They slaughtered stingrays— ALBERT: You have to get quite close to mimic them.
JACOB: I heard the bay was like a summer’s sunset, red with blood.
He looks hard at LAWRENCE.
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GORDON: —stingrays as old as my father’s father’s father.
You’re not saying something. Nephew.
ALBERT: Don’t those things worry you?
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LAWRENCE: Okay … the night they arrived in my country, my way lit by He makes the sound of a horse neighing, and a small dog yapping.
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the full moon, I took my Uncle’s nowee in their vicinity. I got up quite Then he whistles the tune of ‘For he’s a jolly good fellow.’
close.
GORDON: Fuck this.
GARY: Why the need to get close?
LAWRENCE shuts up.
GORDON: [ looking at JOSEPH] When some people would hide behind a gum
ALBERT: So the nowee …
tree.
LAWRENCE: It’s like an ants’ nest. Goes on and on, layers and layers.
LAWRENCE: I felt it was my duty.
LAWRENCE: Who can tell? Their voices are odd. Soft. ‘Go n’eiri an bother
GARY: Curiosity killed the echidna.
leat.’ [ Irish Gaelic, pronounced: ‘Gah niahrey un bo-her lat’; meaning:
LAWRENCE shrugs.
‘May the road rise with you’, that is, Travel well.]
LAWRENCE: Yes.
WALTER: What was he like?
JOSEPH: And?
LAWRENCE: His whole demeanour was hideous. Not swathed in a red cloak.
LAWRENCE: My nowee slid beside theirs. It was like a cliff face. As tall as a This one looked like he had been at war, his cloaks ripped.
He shivers. He has their attention. LAWRENCE: Setting aside their human shape they differ little from brutes.
The night was still. I could hear snoring. Big mob of snoring. They have stocky bodies, short limbs, narrow heads, thin lips and
LAWRENCE mimics a cow … a sheep … then a pig. They all laugh. ALBERT: Did they have anything … unusual? Other technologies?
LAWRENCE: Hmm … The one leaning over … he had a small fire stick that
JACOB: Again!
LAWRENCE: He kept scratching himself. Scratch, scratch. And the smoking WALTER: What if someone like Grandfather could cure them?
activity … JOSEPH: Whoa! I’m not sure my powers are that great.
LAWRENCE breaks off a twig and demonstrates ‘smoking a pipe’. WALTER: But they might be.
JOSEPH: There are certain herbs, particularly, that help with scratching. I
JOSEPH: Smoking ceremony. Trying to heal himself.
could help with that. Actually, I am certain I could. And our smoking
LAWRENCE: And then he …
ceremonies are fairly advanced.
He sneezes. And sneezes.
LAWRENCE: I’m sure you could too, Grandfather.
JOSEPH: And?
JACOB: You cured that small problem I had.
LAWRENCE: I felt a small spray, like mist from a waterfall.
JOSEPH: That was nothing. The appropriate fern root, chewed.
GARY: Curious, but irrelevant.
JACOB: It wasn’t nothing for me, or the wife.
LAWRENCE: Hey, I’m just explaining.
He laughs.
He is unsettled, feverish.
GARY: Wives.
GORDON: If that fella was in my mob, and we had to travel a long distance,
JOSEPH: How many now, brother?
say to the new season’s hunting ground, sounds like he wouldn’t make
JACOB: Three …
it.
JOSEPH: Wheee.
WALTER: You’d leave him behind.
JACOB: It’s a lot of responsibility. Lotta hard work.
GORDON: Hey! Sometimes, that’s just the way it is. You give him
ALBERT: Sounds like it. For them. Fishing. Catching possums. Collecting
medicine, you bring in a man of higher degree—like Grandfather—to
honey …
extract any foreign matter, but if that fails, the man, woman, or child,
is done for. You know that. You have to leave them behind. They know GARY: With respect … can we get back to those folk?
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that. The whole mob knows that. JACOB: You started it.
ALBERT: Gentlemen, the point is, one or many of them, are showing signs JOSEPH: Young Lawrence. Were you … alarmed at any time? Did you
LAWRENCE: No.
LAWRENCE groans a little.
JOSEPH: Me neither.
JOSEPH: Are you okay?
GARY: What?
LAWRENCE: The heat. This crazy heat.
LAWRENCE: But afterwards, Uncle Raymond beat me for having risked his
JOSEPH: But it’s cooled down now.
Water’s run out … different cloaks? [ Mimicking perfectly] ‘Bonjour, au sauvage!’ They
gave me liquid that looked like water, but when you guzzled it …
JOSEPH: They need water! That’s why they’re here.
[ Giggling] ‘Fire! Fire! My mouth’s on fire!’ You wanted to hurl
WALTER: To fill up their coolamons. They fill up their coolamons and they
yourself into the river, your tongue hanging from your mouth like a
leave.
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blue-tongue. You couldn’t rid yourself of the bitterness.
LAWRENCE: That’s what they did out our way. Filled up their coolamons,
ALBERT: But they drink it by choice?
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cut grass, chopped down a tree. Then left.
JOSEPH: Eagerly.
JACOB: Bloody hooligans.
JACOB: No accounting for taste.
WALTER: You can die of thirst. That’s what I’m saying.
GORDON snorts.
GARY: Makes sense.
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JOSEPH: They also shaped my beard and rearranged my hair.
JOSEPH: We have beautiful clear water. While their water is poisoned.
WALTER: Grandfather, you say they are harmless yet you still vote to repel
GORDON: This is mad.
them. That strikes me as … inconsistent. And if they are sick, you can
WALTER: It’s risky, them being away from their land. For them and their
help them.
families and their country. Why would they do that unless they had to?
There’s a lack of humanity in that. Maybe you’re fine about them
That they had no choice?
landing?
ALBERT: Yeah, but we have a choice.
JOSEPH: I could be persuaded.
WALTER: Yes.
JACOB: Grandfather!
GARY: [ to JOSEPH] How do you know their water is poisoned?
JOSEPH: But then I see the other side too.
JOSEPH: I don’t. But when I drank that other mob’s—
LAWRENCE: Do these things always pan out like this?
LAWRENCE: You interacted with them!
GARY: Sometimes. JACOB: Always! ALBERT: Never.
JOSEPH: I was foolish!
LAWRENCE looks bewildered.
JACOB: You debil debil, Grandfather!
GARY: We still outnumber them. All our mobs around the water. Don’t we?
ALBERT: You’re the numbers man, Gary. JOSEPH: I have never heard such an awful sound! Oh, my spirit!
GARY: I reckon that’s right. GARY: The man, he’s twitching! Thrashing about!
They all look out to sea—except GORDON. They stare in horror, mesmerised.
JOSEPH: Wait! The birds have gone silent. JACOB: Still thrashing …
ALBERT: It’s gunna rain. The ants foretold that. They watch. For a long time …
It is very quiet. Suddenly, there is a crack of lightning, and the sound JOSEPH: Dead?
WALTER: They’re restless. JOSEPH: In your wildest thoughts, can you ever think of such a thing?
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ALBERT: The storm? GARY: The horror.
JOSEPH: A ceremony?
shore, they might do that to us? Look how that man swings, lifeless.
There are the sounds of drums and a fife playing. They listen … Look! Look! Look! It’s barbaric.
Pause as they stare out towards the sea. JOSEPH: Could we teach them … other ways?
JOSEPH: What going on? GORDON: They should be gone. They’re brutes.
GARY: There’s a structure like a tree, with a twisted rope. Is it stringybark? ALBERT: Are they cracking under some pressure?
WALTER: Maybe being on those nowees. Maybe they’re bad camps. They
They watch, alarmed. GORDON rises to join them.
Elders. We can’t help that. We can’t help it that those nowees are bad JACOB: He should’ve been speared. Nothing like a nice clean spearing.
GORDON: Let them swing on the end of a rope. So what? As long as they
JOSEPH: Hey! I was begat from a transgressor. My father, he married wrong
don’t do that to my mob.
skin. Perhaps I am tainted with his sin?
WALTER: So what? Are you their executioner?
GARY: It wasn’t meant personally.
WALTER: Perhaps you’d like to be the one on the end of that rope, pulling it
ALBERT: Grandfather, he was referring to the situation, that’s all.
tighter.
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much better.
WALTER: I pity you.
JACOB: You go and share your kangaroo tail with them. Go ahead.
GORDON: I’d stop right there …
JOSEPH stares at him, then puts his hand up.
WALTER: I can’t imagine wanting to have them swinging from a rope!
JOSEPH: I’m changing my vote—
GORDON: Be quiet!
JACOB: How the wind just turns direction, just like—that!
WALTER: You’re the brute.
JOSEPH: The wind does change direction. See, now it’s onshore.
GORDON: Be quiet!
JACOB: Yeah, and I smell their stench!
WALTER: You want to see each and every one of them wither away. Perhaps
GARY: Let him speak! Grandfather …
out of some hatred for your fellow man?
JOSEPH: It’s like Walter says—everyone should be given a chance. No
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matter where they come from.
GORDON grabs his spear and raises it at WALTER, but two of the others leap GARY: Are you sure?
up and put him and his arm away. He fights them as WALTER watches JOSEPH: I think so. Yes.
WALTER: Yes?
WALTER: That’s what you want? To spear me?
ALL: Yes.
GARY: What’s happening? Why are we behaving like uninitiated men here?
ALL: No.
GORDON: Shut up. Fucking shut up.
GARY: Lawrence?
GARY: You finished? … We need to take our duty seriously. We have
JACOB: It’s raining. The bark for my nowee will warp. And my new wife … GORDON: Get rid of them. Forever.
JACOB: You still sore about that? ALBERT: Shoo them away.
GARY: Well, we all know why you are so keen on battle, Jacob. GARY: Jacob?
ALBERT: His new wife. She was promised to brother Gary. But brother GARY: Grandfather?
Jacob— JOSEPH: I’m okay to let them land. I want to help the poor things. And you,
JACOB: All’s fair when you go to battle! When you win, you get the spoils. Gary?
ALBERT: Then we better be sure that they don’t win. Ever. GARY: Well …
No-one knows what to do. ALBERT: You get everyone else to say their bit but we don’t know what you
think.
LAWRENCE: Anyone want a lilly pilly?
GARY: Okay. They are breaking the lore. But does that mean we should?
GORDON: Come on!
Then they’ve won before even one spear has been thrown.
WALTER: Yes, thank you, Lawrence.
WALTER: That’s what I was talking about. If we have always welcomed
LAWRENCE throws a lilly pilly berry over.
visitors, then we should now.
GORDON: Now you got the young fella running the show. You’re hopeless,
WALTER: I don’t know what the consequences will be. Nor do you. But I
Gary.
know our lore. Our protocols.
Beat. GARY: I’m voting that we welcome them. As visitors to our shore.
LAWRENCE: He’s flipped! LAWRENCE: Ten …
GARY: We don’t even know if they will land. They could turn around by JOSEPH: Ten …
sunset and sail away. But if they land, we welcome them. Also, I’m
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being pragmatic. There are more of them than us. I don’t want to start
GORDON: Unbelievable! There will be bad consequences! I tell you! JOSEPH: But it’s cool now.
GARY: The vote is now: four to allow to land, three to repel. GARY: Albert? Give us your thoughts. Your reasons.
ALBERT: There is one story that concerns me. From eighteen summers ago.
GORDON stands.
A senior woman, she told me that a mob, the cloaked ones, had
GORDON: I’m signalling my mob right now. We will take up arms against
threatened the women and children, and tried to poison them.
them. There’s no point talking anymore.
GORDON: That’s what I am saying! We are putting our women’s lives at
ALBERT: Wait! [ To GORDON] What bad consequences? What you mean?
risk.
GORDON: What if they stay? Forever?
WALTER: Gordon, you speak of their violence. Often.
GARY is exasperated.
LAWRENCE: Maybe he’s the violent one? Is that’s what you’re thinking?
GARY: Visitors don’t stay. That’s why they’re visitors. Walter? ALBERT: You really have found your voice, haven’t you, boy?
WALTER: Of course they’ll leave. Folk have come here on their nowees LAWRENCE: Have I?
ALBERT: So, they snuck up on a group of women and children who were
forever. Do you really think that just because they come ashore this
one time that we might fade into nothingness, like smoke into the sky? gathered to prepare an evening meal.
GORDON gives him a slow clap. Faint echoes of an old English dirge and laughter.
GORDON: Fancy words. The children were terrified. They were clinging to their mothers’
breasts. Worse, the visitors had slaughtered two of the clan’s totems,
ALBERT: There’s one difference with this lot.
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the black swan, and they flung them at the women’s feet.
WALTER: What?
WALTER: What did she do?
ALBERT: There’s more of them.
ALBERT: She said she couldn’t do anything. She was a distance away, in a
JOSEPH: How many now?
cave, attending to a woman who had just birthed.
They look.
▼▼▼ GARY: Flip-flopping.
There’s eleven …
ALBERT: That’s right. She was as old as the stars in the night sky.
GARY: And the vote is five to welcome them and two to repel—
WALTER: Perhaps what she saw wasn’t a threat after all. Perhaps it was
WALTER: Actually—
something else?
WALTER: Albert, are you still set in your opinion? JACOB: Look. It’s his country—
Beat.
—not your country. Not your country. Not your country. Not your
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I’m vacillating. country. Not your country. We should be behind him!
GARY: They have smaller nowees. A whole mob of them … This is not their country. They won’t stay. I’m betting my life on it.
GORDON: What? What?! LAWRENCE nods weakly. And they register that he is unwell. JOSEPH
yabba yabba. It’s too late to do anything. GORDON: Jacob. Our alliance. Our mobs.
GARY: That’s not a decision. That’s putting your shield down. JACOB: That mob’ll leave the day after next—like they did Bay mob’s
LAWRENCE lies down, sick. The others barely register. country—and we’ll still have an alliance.
JACOB: Maybe … maybe they’re not completely wee-ree—bad. They JOSEPH: Though I still don’t know what we would do with the extra time
might look hideous, they might be flawed. Guess what, so am I. But we save.
the main reason is—they are not going to stay. The pull of your own JACOB: And that they won’t stay. They come, they go, those shiny ones.
country is too strong. That’s what I am gambling on. GARY: Like a flash summer storm, over in no time.
WALTER: Mostly, you said those things. Not me. GORDON: You’re not intimidating me! I’m entitled to my opinion!
ALBERT: But you were the one who turned us upside down in our thinking. They all watch him silently.
GARY: [ to LAWRENCE] Lawrence, the one on the nowee, when you were up
They’re no good. There’s not a one of ’em who’s any good. They will
close, did he seem dangerous? hurt us. They will trample our land. They will poison us with their
LAWRENCE goes to speak, but coughs. JOSEPH bends down to listen. liquid. They will cut down our trees and muddy our water and take too
Tense pause.
GORDON: I’m not afraid—
ALBERT: —then we should welcome them. JOSEPH leaves LAWRENCE’s side and goes up to GORDON and pokes
WALTER: But we need to be sure. That what we are doing is choosing. Is him in the chest.
JOSEPH: Gordon, what’s going on? You’re not telling us something. What
Now ALBERT sneezes, violently.
is it?
Sound of a big splash.
GORDON hangs his head.
GARY: Look, look, a small nowee is in the water!
GORDON: I don’t have words.
They look out to sea, panicking.
JOSEPH: Just try.
He stands up, but WALTER gestures for him to sit. He does. WALTER: Listen to him.
ALBERT: We should let their women and children come ashore anyway. ALBERT silently passes him the message stick.
GARY: And if he’s not going to welcome them, who will? Grandfather?
GORDON: I’m ten summers old. A kid with scabby knees. When the nowees
flogged me for disobeying him. He wanted me to be safe. But I WALTER: Sorry business.
My father’s country. JOSEPH: Look. They are so close now I can see them.
And they laugh. They mock him. JOSEPH: They are almost at the beach.
defeat us.
ALBERT: Ready, men?
Soon after they leave and he returns to the mob.
WALTER: Let’s go.
But within days my strong, brave father withers away. I sit with
GORDON looks over at JOSEPH, who is caring for LAWRENCE in the ▼▼▼
same way.
They step forward again, their spears are raised, ready to charge.
▼▼▼
GORDON: Wait.
GORDON: I tell him I had disobeyed him and suggest he flog me.
This is my country.
And all I could do is throw stones … Stand behind a tree and throw My responsibility.
stones like a little boy … I’m not that little boy now. I am my father’s son. I finish what he began.
The men gather around GORDON, comforting him as though the grief He puts down his spear. He steps forward.
is raw. It is.
[ Towards the boats] This is my country.
My father’s country.
Glossary of Aboriginal words
I know its patterns, its seasons, its soils, the texture of them, the
blue tongue - type of lizard
colours, the particular shade of green of the grass the patyegarang
cuz - cousin (but not always by blood)
nibbles after a fire has swept through, at dusk, when the patyegarang gadi - country (in the area around Sydney)
goorabeera - musket
I know its secret springs where a thirst can be quenched even in the
illalong - shield
driest season.
jiliwa - toilet
I know my country’s smells. The exact scent of leaf litter where
lily pilly - fruit of lily pilly tree
bulbs of the chocolate lily hide under moss, though it is not my job to mago - axe
maugro - fish
And where the hardest flint is to be found. For tools, for trading.
myall - stranger
Its rivers are my blood, its rocky outcrops my bones, its winds are
nowee - boat
my breath as my lungs fill and empty. It is me.
patyegarang - grey kangaroo
wee-ree - bad
While you walk on this country that you care for the land.
wombah - crazy
And that you look after the children of this land.
THE END
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Played when undesirables, both military and civilian, were drummed out of camp, or on
their way to punishment. Its origins are uncertain, but it probably dates to the early 18th
century.
with Dampier’s unflattering description of Aboriginal people, now
Introduction to Annotations
directed towards the invaders.
The Visitors is a re-imagining, from my perspective as a First Nations
Maori academic Linda Tuhiwai Smith posits that the creation of new
woman, of the arrival of the First Fleet in 1788—the beginning of the
Indigenous stories ‘contribute to a collective story’ that works to restore
colonisation of Australia by the English. Our knowledge of the events of
the place of Indigenous peoples:
1788 is sourced from the letters, journals and books of the colonisers and
The story and the story teller both serve to connect the past with
explorers: Anglo (white) and men. In contrast, Aboriginal knowledge
the future, one generation with the other, the land with the people
transfer—our history—was, and in many cases still is, an oral one and one
ii
and the people with the story.
that has not been preserved to the same degree.
What stories about the events of 1788 have failed, then, to be told?
I hope that is what I have been able to achieve with The Visitors. I believe
What perspectives have been overlooked or dismissed? Black American
that there is no exclusively ‘white’ history of Australia—when we—First
playwright Suzan Lori-Parks asserts that, when Black histories have not
Nations people—have always been here. There is no ‘Black’ history of
been recorded, it is up to Black playwrights to seek them out, and re-
Australia in the last 240-plus years, either. We are each other’s shadows.
assemble the fragments into our own narratives:
To make sense of our shared history, we need to go back to the very
ancestral burial ground, dig for bones, find bones, hear the bones
i
sing, write it down …
In fleshing out this bricolage of a play, I scoured many journals, books and
letters written by the early colonisers and explorers. Many historical facts
are alluded to, or repurposed, throughout the script, some blatantly, and
others more subtlety. In this publication of the play script I have annotated
historians. Either way, I have read between the lines—the subtext, if you
like. Sometimes I have turned their withering gaze back on them, such as
messengers travelling through foreign country.” [Karskens 2009 42]
Annotations
11 “Many of their warriors, or distinguished men, we observed to be painted in stripes across
the breast and back, which at some little distance appears not unlike our soldiers’ cross
1 “Several women appeared at a distance, but we could not prevail on the men to bring them
belts.” [White 1790]
near us.” [Bradley 1802]
12 “We put the boats onshore [in Botany Bay] near where we observed a group of the Natives
2 “I have frequently seen the men indulge at the expense of the weaker vessel, the women,
… We then made signs that we wanted water, when they pointed round the point on which
who have been forced to sit in their canoe, exposed to the fervour of the mid-day sun, hour
they stood … they directed us by pointing to a very fine stream of water.” [King 1793 in
after hour … for without a sufficient quantity to make a meal for their tyrants, who were
Cobley 1962 19]
lying asleep at their ease, they would meet but a rude reception on their landing.” [Collins
1798] 13 “… after receiving each a hatchet [of the use of which the eldest instantly and curiously
showed his knowledge, by turning up his foot, and sharpening a piece of wood on the sole
“Women line-fish from small canoes while the men fish with spears and usually on shore.
with the hatchet] took their leave …” [Collins 1798]
Early colonists and later anthropologists agree that most of the food is gathered by women.”
[Karskens 2009 405–406] 14 “… we fell in with a large party of natives … they were armed with spears and stone
hatchets. One of the latter they very earnestly wished to exchange for one of ours.” [White
3 “Love and war seemed his [Baneelon’s] favourite pursuits …” [Tench 1793 in Flannery
1790]
1996 8]
“The procuring of food really seems to be but a secondary business with them [the men]; 15 “… many of the Trees, especially the Palms, were cut steps of about 3 or 4 feet asunder for
the management of the spear and the shield, dexterity in throwing the various clubs they have the conveniency of Climbing them.” [Cook 1768–1771]
in use among them, agility in either attacking or defending … appearing to rank first among
16 “I advanced before them unarmed, presenting some beads and ribbands.” [King 1793 in
their concerns in life.” [Collins 1798]
Flannery 1999 44]
4 “The dialect spoken by the natives at Sydney not only differs entirely from that left us by
17 “… [Lieutenant King] produced his handkerchief and tied it on one of the women ‘where
Captain Cook of the people with whom he had intercourse … people living at the distance
Eve did the Fig Leaf’; the natives then set up another very great shout.’’ [Hughes 1987 85]
of only fifty or sixty miles should call the sun and moon by different names; such,
18 “… the gunner of the Supply [was] at some little distance, with a gun in his hand, an
however, was the fact. In an excursion to the banks of the Hawkesbury, accompanied by
instrument of death, against which they entertain an insuperable aversion …” [White 1790]
two Sydney natives, we first discovered this difference; but our companions conversed with
19 “The report of the gun frightened them very much.” [White 1790]
the river natives without any apparent difficulty, each understanding or comprehending the
other.” [Collins 1798] 20 “… as soon as we aproachd the rocks two of the men came down upon them … They calld
to us very loud in a harsh sounding Language … in all appearance resolvd to dispute our
5 “… several parties of the natives, as they proceeded along the coast, who all greeted them
landing to the utmost tho they were but two and we 30 or 40 at least … They remaind
in the same words, and in the same tone of vociferation, shouting every where ‘Warra,
resolute so a musquet was fird over them, the Effect of which was that the Youngest of the
warra, warra’ words which, by the gestures that accompanied them, could not be
two dropd a bundle of lances on the rock at the instant in which he heard the report; he
interpreted into invitations to land, or expressions of welcome …” [Collins 1798]
however snatchd them up again and both renewd their threats and opposition. A Musquet
6 “The canoe is made of the bark taken off a large tree of the length they want to make the
loaded with small shot was now fird at the Eldest of the two who was about 40 yards from
canoe, which is gathered up at each end and secured by a lashing of strong vine which runs
the boat; it struck him on the legs but he minded it very little so another was immediately
amongst the underbrush.” [Bradley 1802]
fird at him …” [Banks 1768–1771]
7 “The laboratory and sick tents were erected, and, I am sorry to say, were soon filled with
21 “[An Aboriginal man] stuck the end of his shield in the sand … I fired a pistol ball through
patients afflicted with the true camp dysentery and the scurvy. More pitiable objects were
it. The explosion frightened him … on my putting the pistol into my pocket he took up the
perhaps never seen.” [White 1790]
shield, and appeared to be much surprised at finding it perforated.” [White 1790]
8 “… they [Aboriginal men] laughed at and mocked the Europeans for their clumsiness and
22 “That Carstensz in 1623 and Governor Phillip more than 160 years later, should seek to
stupidity in the bush.” [Flannery 1996 8]
establish a relationship with the people through kidnapping is evidence of the gulf in
9 “[After initiation] they were received into the class of men; were privileged to wield the understanding between the races. It also indicates a callous disregard for the human rights
spear and the club, and to oppose their persons in combat.” [Collins 1798] of the inhabitants once these conflicted with the aims of Europeans.’ [Willey 1979 19]
10 “The Sydney region people had established trade relations and routes between the coast 23 “The Governor’s plan with respect to the natives was, if possible, to cultivate an
and inland and beyond … News and ideas from distant places could arrive with lone acquaintance with them, without their having an idea of our great superiority over them …”
[Bradley in Cobley 1962 42] troublesome here that no fanning will keep them from coming to one’s face … so that, from
their infancy, being thus annoyed with these insects, they do never open their eyes as other
24 “In the exercise of this weapon [spear] they are very expert. I have seen them strike with
people do; and therefore they cannot see far, unless they hold up their heads as if they were
certainty at the distance of seventy measured yards. They are thrown with great force, and
looking at somewhat over them. They have great bottle-noses, pretty full lips and wide
where they are barbed are very formidable instruments.” [Collins 1798]
mouths, the two fore-teeth of their upper jaw are wanting in all of them, men and women,
“… a spear was thrown at the people by some of the natives, who were lurking behind the
old and young: neither have they any beards. They are long-visaged, and of a very
trees and rocks. It was hurled with such force, that it flew a considerable way over the boat,
unpleasing aspect, having no one graceful feature in their faces. Their hair is black, short,
although we were between thirty and forty yards from the shore.” [White 1790]
and curled, like that of the negroes; and not long and lank … the colour of their skins, both
25 “Some of these unhappy people [convicts] died after the ships came into the harbour,
of their faces and the rest of their body, is coal black, like that of the negroes of guinea.”
before they could be taken on shore—part of these had been thrown into the harbour …”
[Dampier 1697]
[Johnson 1790 in Flannery 1999 100]
38 “They wanted to know of what sex we were, which they explained by pointing to where it
26 “The inhabitants of this country are the miserablest people in the world … who have no
was distinguishable. As they took us for women, not having our beard grown …” [King in
houses and skin garments, sheep, poultry, and fruits of the earth, ostrich eggs, etc …”
Cobley 1962 19]
[Dampier 1697]
39 “… The Iora respected their old men as repositories of tribal wisdom and religious
“… the inhabitants, too, are the most wretched and poorest creatures that I have ever seen
knowledge, but the tribe would not hamper its mobility, essential for nomadic survival, by
in my age or time …” [Carstensz 1623 in Willey 1979 19]
keeping the old and infirm alive after their teeth had gone and their joints had seized up.”
27 “… they [Aboriginal people] had excellent teeth— unlike the white invaders.” [Hughes
[Hughes 1987 17]
1987 14]
40 “As we sailed into the bay, [Botany] some of the natives were on the shore, looking with
28 “They had not been landed more than an hour … but their came on the most violent storm
seeming attention at such large moving bodies coming amongst them. In the evening the
of thunder, lightning and rain I ever saw. The lightening was incessant during the whole
boats were permitted to land on the north side, in order to get water and grass for the little
night and I never heard it rain faster.” [Smyth 1787–1789 in Flannery 1999 60]
stock we had remaining.” [White 1790]
29 “… 6 small fires near the Shore, and mussels roasting upon them, and a few Oysters laying
41 “… spirits they could never be brought to taste a second time.” [Tench 1793 in Flannery
near … We tasted of their Cheer, and left them in return Strings of beads, etc …” [Cook
1996 54]
1768–1771]
42 “Some of the natives came along-side the Sirius, and made signs to have their beards taken
30 “A quantity of Darts lay about the Hutts; these we took away with us.” [Cook 1768–1771]
off. One of them patiently, and without fear or distrust, underwent the operation from the
31 “The English picked up the Eora’s weapons, left little piles of nails in return, and rowed ship’s barber, and seemed much delighted with it.” [White 1790]
32 “We likewise presented them with a looking-glass, but this they received with indifference, natives his appearance was so frightful— his clothing shaking in the wind, and the creaking
and seemed to hold in no kind of estimation.” [White 1790] of his irons …” [Collins 1798 in Flannery 1999 148]
“ … neither did they seem to admire anything that we had.” [Dampier in Willey 1979 23]
44 “From what I have said of the Natives of New Holland they may appear to some to be the
33 “Fish enough was sometimes taken to supply about two hundred persons …” [Collins most wretched People upon Earth; but in reality they are far more happier than we
1798] Europeans, being wholy unacquainted not only with the Superfluous, but with the
34 Three sting-rays were taken this month, two of which weighed each about three hundred necessary Conveniences so much sought after in Europe; they are happy in not knowing
weight, and were distributed amongst the [settler] people.” [Collins 1798] the use of them. They live in a Tranquility which is not disturbed by the Inequality of
Condition. The earth and Sea of their own accord furnishes them with all things necessary
35 “Stock: 1 Stallion 2 Bulls 19 Goats 5 Rabbits 35 Ducks 3 Mares 5 Cows 49 Hogs 18
for Life. They covet not Magnificient Houses, Household-stuff, etc.; they live in a Warm
Turkeys 122 Fowls 3 Colts 29 Sheep 25 Pigs 29 Geese 87 Chickens …” [Collins 1798]
and fine Climate, and enjoy every wholesome Air … in short, they seem’d to set no Value
36 “… one of the gentlemen with me sung some songs; and when he had done, the females in
upon anything we gave them, nor would they ever part with anything of their own for any
the canoes either sung one of their own songs, or imitated him, in which they succeeded
one Article we could offer them. This, in my opinion, Argues that they think themselves
beyond conception. Any thing spoken by us they most accurately recited …” [White 1790]
provided with all the necessarys of Life …” [Cook 1768-1771]
37 “… setting aside their human shape, they differ but little from brutes. they are tall, straight-
45 “[One of the Midshipmen] gave them a bird he had Shott, which they would not Touch;
bodied and thin, with small, long limbs. they have great heads, round foreheads, and great
neither did they speak one word, but seem’d to be much frightned.” [Cook 1768-1771]
brows. Their eye-lids are always half closed, to keep the flies out of their yes, they being so
46 “Gradually it dawned on the First Fleet officers that they had not encountered one people,
but a constellation of peoples, each with their own country …” [Karskens 2009 37]
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Cultural attitudes towards external groups are variably hostile or sympathetic, motivated by a desire to protect resources and maintain autonomy. Joseph's sympathy contrasts with Gordon’s steadfast hostility, driven by perceived threats to their land and lifestyle. The motivations include fear of cultural erosion and scarce resource competition .
The 'message stick' symbolizes the transfer of authority and the right to speak during the meeting. Passing it signifies transitions in leadership or responsibility, ensuring orderly proceedings and respecting the hierarchical structure of decision-making among the elders .
The interactions highlight cultural practices such as respect for elders and the significance of kinship ties. Lawrence's introduction as a 'cousin brother' emphasizes kinship as vital for social positioning. The meeting reflects social hierarchies where elders hold decision-making power, with younger members having specific roles to play .
Environmental factors such as the heat and dust impact the participants physically and influence their conversations. Lawrence sneezes due to the heat, and concerns about the weather affecting resources like bark for canoe making are raised, indicating how natural conditions affect both mood and practical aspects of their decisions .
Traditional roles and expectations manifest in the way younger members, like Lawrence, are treated and expected to fulfill roles such as voting or being on the front lines. He is armed and is seen as beneficial for tasks like running messages, reflecting an expectation for young men to engage actively in defense and decision-making .
Yes, there is evidence of internal conflict and differing opinions among the elders. Joseph expresses sympathy towards the newcomers and changes his vote, while others, like Gordon, strongly oppose allowing them to stay. This reflects a tension between perspectives on benevolence versus maintaining traditional boundaries and defense .
The primary purpose of the elder's meeting is to discuss and agree on a course of action to handle the mari nowee, which is considered a significant threat. The elders aim to decide on strategies to scare away or shoo off the intruders, reflecting a collective decision-making process for the benefit of their community .
The elders and community members plan to address the arrival of the 'mari nowee' by organizing a strategic attack from three directions. Albert's group comes from the west, Jacob's mob from the east, and Gordon's warriors from the south, creating the illusion of waves of warriors without end .
Women are notably absent from the discussion, as indicated by the mention that they are 'off on their business.' This hints at traditional gender roles where men handle defense and strategic decisions, while women’s responsibilities lie elsewhere, possibly in resource management or cultural practices .
The elders' planning method resembles a military strategy metaphor of 'pincer movement,' where forces attack from multiple sides to encircle the enemy. This suggests an advanced understanding of tactical warfare, leveraging illusion ('waves of warriors') to maintain psychological and physical advantages over their adversaries .