WRITING TASK 1 - MAP - STRUCTURE
Verb tenses:
2000 - the present day: HTHT (Intro, Overview, Body), QKD
2000-2005: QKD (Intro, Overview, Body)
the present - the future (proposed): be going to V, will V, will be
predicted to V
Intro:
C1: The maps illustrate how the N has been modernised since 2000 to
the present day.
C2: The two maps illustrate various changes N has undergone since 2000
to the present day .
N1: the design / 2004 / the north of the redesigned map/
V: see/ witness/ show/ illustrate/ display/ represent/ demonstrate/
delineate A: major / striking/ significant/ remarkable/ notable/ salient /
striking/ considerable/ marked/
N2: transformation/ change/ difference / modernization/ development/
improvement/ shift
Sâu sắc (a) notable - notably, significant - significantly, remarkable -
remarkably, considerable - considerably, fundamental changes/
differences/ introduction, be intensively modernized/ industrialized/
renovated/ sustainability - sustainable
Cơ sở: recreational infrastructure/ facilities/ amenities/ features/
elements.
Thời gian: in the years 2003 and 2013 / between 2003 and 2013 / in a
period of 10 years, from 2003 to 2013/ ten-year period
Overview
[1] It is apparent that the area has been extensively renovated/
industrialized/ modernized, seeing some fundamental changes to N1.
[2] Another notable feature is there has been a significant development
of N2 amenities while N3 features have disappeared.
It is apparent that the area has been extensively developed/ renovated/
industrialized/ modernized, seeing fundamental changes to “tên khu vực”.
Another notable feature is there was a significant development of commercial
and recreational amenities while industrial features disappeared.
Biên độ thay đổi: [1.1] be extensively renovated/ modernised/
industrialized,
Yếu tố thay đổi nổi bật (phát triển - mới - biến mất): , seeing a
fundamental change to N1 in the “khu vực”. In addition, there was a
significant development of N2 and N3 while N4 disappeared.
Body 1:
[Term 1] In terms of T1, the most striking alternation is to the N1, with
an increase in the number of N, and in particular the construction of N.
[Term 2] Another difference is the relocation of various T2.
- In [new], N1 and N2 were moved to and enlarged.
Body 2:
[Term 3] A closer look at the maps reveals that T3 had more prominence
in [new]. - This can be seen in the remarkable expansion of N1 and the
construction of N2 [ở đâu trên bản đồ]
[Term 4] On top of this, N1 which (trước đây làm sao) was flattened to
pave the way for N2.
MAP STRATEGY
The map has seen a major construction in A (N), replacing the position
of
To the northern part of the map, A has been established (V)
2004 saw a striking improvement in A (N), taking the place of B
The north of the redesigned map has witnessed a sustainable
modernization in A by removing B
The removal of A was witnessed in the northern part of the maps, which
was replaced by / altered by
N1: the design / 2004 / the north of the redesigned map/
V: see/ witness/ show/ illustrate/ display/ represent/ demonstrate/
delineate A: major / striking/ significant/ remarkable/ notable/ salient /
striking/ considerable/ marked/
N2: transformation/ change/ difference / modernization/ development/
improvement/ shift
Sâu sắc (a) notable - notably, significant - significantly, remarkable -
remarkably, considerable - considerably, fundamental changes/
differences/ introduction, be intensively modernized/ industrialized/
renovated/ sustainability - sustainable
Cơ sở: recreational infrastructure/ facilities/ amenities/ features/
elements.
Thời gian: in the years 2003 and 2013 / between 2003 and 2013 / in a
period of 10 years, from 2003 to 2013/ ten-year period
Xây dựng: Building - Built, Construction - Constructed, Erection -
Erected, Introduction - Introduced
Phá bỏ: demolished - demolition, removal - be removed, be cut down, be
flatten, be knocked down, disappeared
Di chuyển: relocation - be relocated, replacement - be replaced,
conversion - be converted
Mở rộng: enlargement - be enlarged, expansion - be expanded, extension
- extended Không đổi: remain unchanged, experience no changes
[3] Về mặt thương nghiệp: On the commercial side/ aspect,
[[4] Về mặt giải trí: There was a notable improvement in terms of
recreational aspect/ regarding to recreational facilities when
Vào năm cũ, có sự thống trị của N1, which then biến mất in năm mới: In
2003, there was a domination of N1, which then disappeared in 2004.
Trong khi đó: Whereas = While = When = As
Một điểm khác là N2: Another major difference is that/ Another major
change is N/ Another noticeable/ notable/ significant/ striking change/
alteration/ modification is N,
Sự phá hủy của N3 được ghi nhận trong năm mới: The demolition of N/
The removal of N was seen in the year 2004, which was replaced by
Ngược lại, có sự phát triển bàn tới/ liên quan tới các yếu tố khác:
However/ In contrast/ On the other hand/ Nevertheless, there was a
significant change regarding to / relating to/ in terms of N5
Thêm vào đó: In addition/ Additionally/ Moreover/ Besides/
Furthermore,
[1] 1 cái nhìn gần hơn vào bản đồ cho chúng ta thấy: A closer look at the
accommodation/ residential features of the map presents that
[2] In năm cũ, there was a domination of N1, which then disappeared in
năm mới.
to hơn hẳn 10 năm trước: be considerably larger that 10 years previously
Thống trị nhưng bị đập đi: N1 which used to dominate the “năm cũ” map
was replaced by
Khách sạn nhiều phòng và thêm 1 lầu: Hotel capacity: an increasing in
the number rooms + an extra storey above the initial row of rooms
Cơ sở hạ tầng: facilities/ features/ capacities/ amenities/ elements/
infrastructure - Khu vực: Housing area / Hotel capacity / Housing sector
Biên độ cho Overview: has been extensively renovated/ modernized /
industrialized
Xây dựng: construction – be constructed / erection – be erected /
introduction of N – be introduced / be built / the appearance
Mở rộng, chuyển đổi: seeing fundamental changes to N/ extension – be
extended / expansion – be expanded / development / enlargement – be
enlarged / modernization – be modernized/ alteration – be altered =
replacement – be replaced by N / Renovation – be renovated /
improvement - be improved
Chuyển chỗ: conversion into – be converted into / relocation – be
relocated / be moved to/ be removed to the North (N) of map / the
northern map / situated - resituated in
Nhường chỗ cho: pave the way for / make the room for/ leave the
location for
Phá hủy: demolition – be demolished/ be flattened / be knocked down to
pave the way for/ the removal of N
Chia ra các nhóm khu vực khác nhau:
[1] industrial - residential - commercial - recreational
[2] residential - facilities - recreational
industrial = factory residential = commercial = service
accommodation recreational =
entertainment
factory blocks of flats cafe
railway line B Mansions children’s play area
wasteland terraced houses laundry
cottages B street park
shops
remove develop
develop
The maps illustrate how the beach hotel was modernized in a period of
10 years, from 2003 to 2013.
Overall, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes
to accommodation of the beach hotel. In addition, there was significant
development of recreational infrastructure/ facilities/ amenities/ features/
elements with the notable introduction of water sports facilities.
MAP 1: BEACH 2003 - 2013
Accommodation
Facilities
Recreation
MAP 2: TOWN 1980 - 2015
Road:
Accommodation (Residential aspects)
Commercial + Recreational:
Industrial:
MAP 4: SCIENCE PARK 2008 - NOW
MAP 7: GRANGE PARK 1920 - TODAY
BODY 1: THE WEST
BODY 2: CENTRAL
BODY 3: THE EAST
MAP 9: LIVERTON (1980 - NOW)
BODY 1 : NORTH
BODY 2 : CENTER
BODY 3 : SOUTH
