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Timwa Lipenga
(1975- )
Timwa began her career as a
Journalist for The Nation, Malawi's
main daily newspaper. She has a
Master's Degree in Francophone
Literature from the Sorbonne (Paris,
2002), and a Master's Degree in
English Literature from the University
of Malawi (2005). She is a lecturer in
French Literature at the University of
Malawi, Chancellor College.
Introduction
This story is about the lifelong bond between two sisters, Linda and Aisha. As
a child, Linda idolises her older sister Aisha and follows her everywhere, even
if it means taking risks and breaking rules. The sisters grow very close and
have fun together - especially swimming in the stream, which is forbidden.
But as they grow up and life gets harder, the sisters choose different directions.
Linda chooses marriage, home and community, while Aisha leaves for the city.
In the end, the sisters are re-united through shared tragedy.
Key literary features
The story is in the genre of
, touching on the social issues of
IDS. The plot structure is unusual in that
there is no real climax or resolution. In the end, all the conflicts in the story are
overtaken by an even bigger, more tragic and hopeless conflict that we know
will never be resolved. Yet there is a message of hope in the sisters’ loyalty and
love for each other.
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4. Swimming partners
Timwa Lipenga
She was born two years before me,
my leader. As our parents had no more
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finally walk, | followed her everywhere. The most ominous threat |g ‘A
receive from my mother was that, if | was naughty, Aisha Would run ou
So | generally behaved, for | could not bear to be separated from wi,
sister. 8
We both attended the village school. She was two dl
me and, when I was in Standard One, | used to wait unti
Threes knocked off. | would sit a few metres outside
waiting, tired and hungry.
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Her friends teased me because of the way | followed Aish;
1a around,
There were those who were nasty and called me ‘Slave’, There were
those who were anes Pha tagging along and called me ‘Shadow’
Aisha herself oscillated between these two moods, Sometimes she
would get irritated and try to sneak away from me. At other times she
would just accept me as her shadow, and would make plans for both
of us. | would not be consulted, | would just be told what we would be
doing on that particular day,
One day, soon after | had turned seven, Aisha informed me, ‘We are
going to the stream today.’
We had just knocked off from school and we were on our way home.
I stared at her. ‘To draw water?’
She giggled. ‘No silly. | didn’t say the well. | said the stream. Let's go.” |
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Powered by CamScannerAs | followed her, | could not help feeling a bit nervous. Mother never
allowed us to go to the stream. We only ever went to the well, and we
would draw enough water from the well for cooking and bathing. What
would Mother say if she ever found out? But this was Aisha, | reassured
mysell, everything would be all right,
We got to the stream around 3 o'clock. Aisha started taking off her
school uniform and | decided to do the same. Then she stepped into the
water, | stood watching her.
‘Come on in, It’s fun!’ she yelled, splashing about.
‘Ican't.' | said, my voice barely audible.
She stopped, surprised. It was the first time | had ever refused to do
anything she had said,
‘What did you say?”
' cleared my throat. ‘I can’t. | don’t know how to swim.’
She gave a heavy, exaggerated sigh to show her irritation. ‘Linda. |
don’t know how to swim either. | am playing. Now, are you going to
come into this stream or are you going back home?
With that ultimatum the choice was very easy to make. | stepped
into the water.
Oh, but it was cold! | shivered the way | did whenever we went to
draw water during the month of June. During that cold, cold month, as
we made our way to the well at dawn, | sometimes felt as if the cold
was entering my body through the cracks in my feet. My legs would feel
unbearably cold, then it would be my arms, and then my teeth would
start chattering. | would walk the rest of the way to the rhythm of my
chattering teeth.
That was the feeling | had now, but Aisha was happy and splashing
about. | tried to do the same. If Aisha was doing this, surely it could not
be so bad. She splashed some water at me. |
‘Aisha-a-al’ | screamed. | decided to hit back. We started chasing,
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ar, 1 soon forgot
each other around, each one trying to splash at the other. | ¥
the cold and started enjoying the game. i
joying the ga into our schoo! uniforms
We le ing. We got ;
le left the water towards evening. We fe shivering.
She did not talk
again and started running towards home. Both of us wer
When we got home, our mother was lighting the fire.
to us until she had finished stoking the fire.
‘You two girls are not coming from school. Where have you been?’
she asked suspiciously.
‘Um, we were looking for firewood.” Aisha said, looking down.
‘Linda, is that true? Were you looking for firewood?’ Mother asked,
| was in an awkward position. | did not want to lie to Mother. Both
our parents had punished us before for lying. But then | did not want
to betray Aisha either. So | took the safest but most damning way out:
silence. yn] auidencra!
The silence seemed to drag on forever. Although | aboided my
mother’s gaze, | could tell she was still looking at us, searching for clues,
| was still shivering, both from the cold and from fear.
‘Why are you trembling like that?’
Mother came close and touched my head. Then she touched Aisha’s,
That was when | raised my head to look at her. | saw confusion on her
face, then anger.
“You went swimming?’ she asked in a frighteningly calm voice.
‘We were not swimming ... we were just ... p-p-p-playing”’
I stammered.
There was another silence. Then my mother turned to Aisha.
‘As the firstborn, | expected you to show more responsibility,’ she
said in the same calm voice. ‘I did not think you would drag your sister,
who trusts you so much, into such a dangerous situation. | am very
disappointed.’
Then she turned to me. ‘Linda, you do not know how to swim.
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Powered by CamScannerYou could have drowned in that stream. You know that you catch cold
easily, and yet you went ahead and swam. You worry me because you
cannot think for yourself. You-arefike-the-khope-bird-which; although:
[Link], ‘etsiselfbe carried in any-direetion-that thewind chooses
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Then came the judgement. ‘I'm not going to tell your father about this,
He has enough problems worrying about how we have not managed to
harvest enough maize this year. We do not even know if we will manage
to get a good price for it in the city. Why should I bother him about two
disobedient dalighteest jvivevit aiet
We heaved a sigh of relief. My father, strict disciplinarian that he
was, would surely have used his leather belt on us for such blatant
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disobedience, not to mention the risk to our lives. Mother continued: ‘!*¥
‘But just to show you that | am not happy with what you have done,
there will be no supper for you tonight. If you had wanted supper you
would have been here to help me prepare it.’
| stared at her in dismay. Aisha showed no reaction. | could see
from my mother’s face that she would not be Rvayed ivthis matter Ea
We lingered by the kitchen, which was a separate and small hut, away
from the main house. My mother had prepared pumpkin leaves with
groundnut stew, my favourite. Then she took another pot and started
dishing out dried-fish stew. | thought | would collapse with hunger.
She covered the food and took it inside the house together with the
thickened maize porridge, nsima. The food was for my father. Mother
then came back into the kitchen. She put the nsima, vegetables and
fish that had remained on a plastic plate and started eating. Aisha and |
watched her hungrily as she swallowed each mouthful. | thought | would
cry, but as Aisha would probably have laughed about it, | kept quiet.
We learned a lot from that experience, but the most valuable lesson
was ‘to be more careful next time’, 9 E17 Weridi he sre |?
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Powered by CamScannerHer brother Petulo started speaking, ‘Last week, your mother came
to me with a problem, She has been struggling to make ends meet since
your father passed away. She has made a decision and asked me to
support her in that decision.’
He turned to her. For the first time in her life, my mother looked
nervous.
“Your uncle is right. You all know how we are suffering. Money was
difficult enough to come by when your father was around, It is worse now.
Linda and Aisha, every term you are chased away from school because
you have no school fees. The house we live in is only partly thatched.’
She was close to tears now. ‘I can no longer afford to send you to school.
| do not have enough money. Please understand.’
Aisha spoke in a hushed voice. ‘Mother, are you saying we should
stop going to school?’
Mother nodded. ‘I tried to avoid such a decision, and | have been
around the village, borrowing money. But it is difficult. No one is rich
enough to help me to pay for the two of you, no one.’
We were stunned. Although we had indeed been humiliated by
being sent back home because of no fees, we had always taken school
as a given entity. We had never thought the day would come when we
would [Link] leave school.
My mother continued. ‘I even talked to our Member of Parliament
about you, but he said that he already assists three orphans from this
village. He says he does not have enough money for two more students.’
And so we stopped going to school. Instead, we would now go to the
maize field very early in the morning; then we would be back at home
in the evening.
| think the maize field marked our transition into womanhood more
pins the melee Pee Meakey Sul hee eee
than-the initiation ceremony had ever done. For the first time in our lives,
we could no longer go swimming.
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‘But Aisha, how will we survive in town?’
‘We will find jobs. We may not have school certificates, but at leas
we are literate.’
| was scared. | had never been to the city. Life in the village was har
but I was used to it. But taking a plunge into the city ...2
‘I can’t, Aisha.’
She stared at me, then played her trump card.
‘Then | will eave
you tomorrow.’
But it did not work. She left alone the next day as, for the
my life, | stood by my decision and refused to go with her.
As she had predicted, | soon got married to Itimu, Over a period of
three years we had two daughters, the pride and joy of my ageing mothe.
They sometimes reminded me of Aisha and me. | missed her a lot, but
there was a lot to occupy me in the village: taking care of the children
managing our maize field, and trying to keep an eagle eye on imu, whe
Was seen, if not as an eligible bachelor, at least as an attractive calc
first time in
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Powered by CamScannerBy the village standards, the fact that we had a corrugated-iron roof over
our heads showed that we were rich, and there were many who wanted
to share this ‘wealth’,
Aisha came back last week. It was the first time we had met in five
years. She is a pale version of herself, all skin and bones, with a dry
rasping cough. | have taken her into my house to look after her. It was a
decision | had no difficulty in making. Since my husband died six months
ago | have wanted an adult companion in the house. And what better
companion could | have than my childhood one?
We do not talk much, as she spends most of her time sleeping. But |
know that she has got the deadly AIDS'. She told me, during one of those
moments when she was lucid. 9" \ $*@_
Perhaps, one of these days I, too, will have the courage to tell her that
it is not only wealth that Itimu shared with me, it was AIDS, too. Perhaps
one of these days, | will tell her: ‘Aisha, you and | are still swimming.
partners.’ Until then, | am acting the part of the stronger sister.
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GLOSSARY
by virtue of: because of; as a result of deterred: prevented; stopped
‘ominous: worrying; warning of danger —_vigour: energy; enthusiasm; spirit
oscillated: moved back and forth admonish: scold; reprimand; warn
ultimatum: challenge; final demand taking a plunge (literal meaning):
damning: giving evidence of guilt Jumping or diving into water
disciplinarian: authoritarian; very strict__ taking a plunge (idiomatic meaning):
doing something difficult or risky that
person
blatant: obvious; deliberate requires courage
swayed: persuaded; made to change lucid: clear; reasonable; making sense
‘one’s mind
' In the setting for this story, there is no cure or treatment for AIDS so it is described as
deadly. However, in South Africa, some people with HIV or AIDS are now able to live long
and healthy lives with anti-retroviral drugs.
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loves freedom
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Why do the girls have
When Aisha asks Linda to joi
plunge into the city? Explain
the context of the story.
Do you think Linda's life as a marries
.d woman in the village is happy? Give ;
reasons,
a) For how long does Aisha stay away from the
b) Why does she return?
Aisha into her house at the end of the story, Linda says, -
When she takes
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particular words?
Linda takes
In the last paragraph of the story Linda and Aisha exchange roles:
But is she really stronger now than Aisha?
on the role of the stronger sister.
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difficulty in making. Why do you think the author uses th
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Explain your answer.