Ticket Id: 74782r
Dr Tony Jones
Private Practice
12 New Street
Still Water
19 April 2020
Dear Dr. Jones,
Re: Ms. Betty Johnson
Age: 81 years
I am writing to update you regarding Ms. Johnson who has been recovering successfully after right total
knee replacement surgery and is now ready for discharge back in to your care.
On 25/02/15, Ms. Johnson underwent an uneventful surgery and afterwards she was given a transfusion as
her Hb was 80 gm/dl, antibiotics, analgesia and wound care. Tablet Warfarin 5mg was started on the next Commented [ESL1]: . She was given
day and overlapped with injection Clexane 80mg that was discontinued seven days later. She was also Commented [ESL2]: w
started on Feratab 300mg in morning. Commented [ESL3]: , which
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Ms. Johnson was transferred to rehabilitation department on 0/03/15, where she had a good response to
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physiotherapy and exercises. The doses of Warfarin and Feratab were reduced to 4 mg and 150 mg
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respectively in view of an INR of 3.8 and Hb of 112g/l.
Today, she is being discharged with no additional cardiac issue. Her wound is exposed and healthy. She Commented [ESL7]: issues
would need a home nursing assistant and she would be using a stick as needed. Her discharge medications Commented [ESL8]: will
include tablets Warfarin 4 mg at night, Feratab 150mg in morning, paracetamol 1 gm four times a day and Commented [ESL9]: will
oxycodone 5-10mg as needed. An appointment with rehabilitation is scheduled in two weeks. I have Commented [ESL10]: w
advised her to see you in one week. You are requested to monitor her FBE and INR. Commented [ESL11]: the
Should there be any queries, please contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Doctor
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