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Its early AfterNoon at the church

Black Screen after the title sequence coming in. The pastor is
present. The main character is present. They're in the sanctuary
of the church. The pastor starts a monologue about God's mercy
and how he wants us to be like Him.

Dialougue starts at black. Then the scene opens up.

The camera starts from outside the church and smooths its way in
slowly, The Pastor is at the pulpit speaking strongly to the main
character because he knows his tendency. The main character is
looking regretful and heavily receptive

Pastor Stone

Mercy. The lord is merciful. He's merciful not because He has to


be but because he chooses to be. Often times people confuse mercy
with weakness, its the opposite.

*Violent cutaway* hits small traces of blood


pops on his face. he wipes it
Main character has a sweaty with a blood dripping hand and
white dress shirt on and a goes back to punching
loose thin black tie. the
camera is facing him from Pastor Stone during cutaway
under him he's punching
someone underneath him. every You have to be a very strong
hit gives a sound effect and individual in order to exhibit
he is making grunts. as he mercy on an enemy.

Cut aways of the main character committing heinous acts of


violence while the pastor is talking. But you hear the effects of
whats going on.

So the camera is going towards the church and as it gets to the


steps it cuts to violence, then comes back and its in the
vesitbule, all the way until it gets to the front row where you
see both characters

Shah Stone

Where the fuck is the car?


summary

the port is about a man who is successful in business. he wants


to dominate his industry but his cutthroat and merciless tactics
has given him many enemies. One in particular is a ghetto kingpin
who makes money off of insurance fraud. He has kids from the hood
wreck havoc on businesses in the area that he has relationships
with. Once the insurance pays, he gets 50% of the money. A couple
of inexperienced kids mistakenly break the window of the wrong
business, it happens to be the shahs business.

Its early AfterNoon at the church

Black Screen after the title sequence coming in and you heard a
voice. The pastor is present. The main character is present. Two
body guards are present standing on either side of the front door
of the church and an escalade is present parked directly in
front. The two central characters are in the sanctuary of the
church. The pastor starts a monologue about God's mercy and how
he wants us to be like Him.

Dialougue starts at black. Then the scene opens up.

The camera starts from outside the church and smooths its way in
slowly, The Pastor is at the pulpit speaking strongly to the main
character because he knows his tendency. The main character is
looking regretful almost to tears and heavily receptive to the
council

Cut aways of the main character committing heinous acts of


violence while the pastor is talking. But you hear the effects of
whats going on.

So the camera is going towards the church and as it gets to the


steps it cuts to violence, then comes back and its in the
vestibule, all the way until it gets to the front row where you
see both characters

Pastor Stone

Mercy. The lord is merciful. He's merciful not because He has to


be but because He chooses to be. Often times people confuse mercy
with weakness, it's the opposite.

*Violent cutaway*
Main character has a sweaty white dress shirt on and a loose thin
black tie. the camera is facing him from under him he's punching
someone underneath him. every hit gives a sound effect and he is
making grunts. as he hits small traces of blood pops on his face.
he wipes it with a blood dripping hand and goes back to punching

Pastor Stone cont'd *during cutaway*

You have to be a very strong individual in order to exhibit mercy


on an enemy. An enemy who's sole mission is to destroy you.
Someone plotting against you day and night, planning your demise.
Without mercy you will find yourself looking for some.

*back to church entry*

Pastor August Stone

Some might say mercy allows room for attack but they fail to
realize that mercy can change someone's heart *insert bible
verse*. What better to lose an enemy and gain an ally? Just for a
minor cost of compassion.

*Violent cutaway*

Main character in the backseat of ranger rover with a driver and


a woman. He's yelling at her for being late and is saying that
she does this time after time, hes very animated and seems
violent. he jumps at her and doesn't hit her but she flinches
hard and immediately catches herself flinching an fixes herself
up. Shows her angle and she has dark shades on.

*back to church Sanctuary*

Pastor August Stone

Patience is something that goes hand in hand with Mercy.

*close up to Pastor Stone*

I know it is hard to see it now, but patience is what got you


here. Patience is what will keep your business viable and
patience is what will keep you alive. If you couple that with
mercy, you will be unstoppable.

Pastor stone walks towards Shah mid dialogue and puts his hand on
his shoulder while talking about patience. Wide shot of them -
Shah gets up and hugs the pastor for a minute and walks directly
towards the camera and essentially into it when it goes into a
black screen. *cue music*

*TITLE* "The PORT" over a wide shot of the church and the whole
barnum ave it stays here for a few seconds as shah comes out of
the church then the title fades away

SHAH comes out of the church to a close up of him obviously just


done crying, slightly embarrassed and upset. He looks to his body
guard and pauses for a long time making faces of bewilderment and
anger. squinting like he is perplexed as to whats going on. then
he gives the body guard the directive to start the car very
sternly.

Shah Stone

Start the fucking car

body guard 1

Got you Shah

Body guard runs over to the car gets in and starts it

Shah puts his shades on and heads down the steps towards the
door. the second body guard opens it for him and he gets in.

He's greeted by his secretary with a look of concern and


compassion. she puts her hand on his back or leg to console him

Shah Stone

Dont touch me (rudely pushes her hand away)

Shah Stone

*to driver* DRIVE

End Scene

Opens up with the garage door being opened to Gorilla entering


into the trap house. He's chillin and smoking. he has a woman
with him around and a couple guys.

gorilla
hurry up i dont have all day you see what i got goin on tonight
*looks to the stripper he has with him* *arm around her waist

Stripper

Yes bae have them hurry up *caresses Gorilla*

Thug 1

yeah so that insurance play been goin crazy, we hit 2 spots


outside the t and the bodega near the greens last week and each
one of them hoes payin by the end of the month

Thug 2

Yeah bro my slide know how to do the documents and shit. she got
the invoice looking pretty before they sent it to the rep. shit
got green lit asap

gorilla

No shit... I told yall thats the play from the beginning, yall
the dumbass niggas that wasnt jackin it. I know you aint call me
out no pussy just to tell me i was right.

Thug 2

Nah not even

gorilla

Get to it then

Thug 1

them new young niggas you got workin with us did some hold up

gorilla

fuck u mean?

Thug 1

we gave them the address to the spot and they ended up smashing
the window across the street

gorilla
aint that deep, im sure they got insurance

Stripper

*Stripper laughs* nah facts tho

Thug 2

....it was Shah shit

stripper

*demeanor visibly changes* hey bae, imma run to the car real
quick

gorilla

*pays stripper no mind* You Jazzin

Thug 1

deadass bro

gorilla

fuck it. he dont know it us

Thug 2

nah he do.. Them lil niggas did it on live *shows him the screen
recording* my lil sister screen recorded it

gorilla

*visibly upset* DAMN, i swear to god these lil niggas bro. I only
put them on cause thats my nephew and his stupid ass mother keep
beggin me to do it *gathers himself* fuck it, im on whatever he
on, fuck shah

Thug 1

i aint gon hold you, im out bro.. that nigga shah crazy my nigga

gorilla
what? *looks at the thug and punches him out* you think he
crazier than this? *stand over him* crazier than a *stomps on
him* fucking gorilla??

Thug 1

*on floor hurt*

gorilla

*takes two hands and slams it onto the thugs back like a gorilla
motion* *grabs his shirt and picks up the thug 1* *throws him to
the door* go tell that bitch to take an uber.

Thug 1 stumbles to the door and out of it.

Gorilla

*to thug 2* the fuck you lookin at?

END SCENE

Shah is at a restaurant with the secretary

Shah Stone

Update me, start with the property

Secretary

Well, we had some hard times with the vacation homes, as you
know. Turks is doing decently but the hurricane has rendered 80%
or our units inhabitable

Shah Stone

Have you spoke to insurance?

Secretary

Of course. They're just so backed up with claims that we haven't


made much headway.

Shah Stone

Did they know its me?


Secretary

Yes, I used the office line and communicated with company email.

Shah Stone

OK, we'll give it some time. Whats next?

Secretary

The hair studio got broken into, we pulled the survillance


footage, it looks like a couple of kids just trying to go viral

Secretary pulls out an ipad and shows Shah black and white
surveillance of kids throwing rocks at a building and recording
themselves, jumping around and having fun.

Shah Stone

Do we know the kids? (sternly)

Secretary

Ok so the window is fixed, there wasnt anything stolen and the


hair studio is open today

Shah Stone

Perfect, do we know the kids?

Secretary

Also, i spoke to the insurance for the window and they already
agreed to...

Shah Stone

*looks to the secretary with a menacing and mean face* Slowly..

Do we know the kids?

Secretary

Yes

Cut to young adult kid walking down the street listening to music
oblivious to whats around him.
shah goes to see his mother. shes in the front seat of the range
rover. facing front hes in the back. he tells her the situation
she asked what he did about it he says he killed the kid she says
good. sunday theres service you pan to see her in pulpit??

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