2019 HSC English Advanced Band 4/5

Question 6 Paper 1 Sample 1

Annotation:

This response demonstrates detailed knowledge of the prescribed text.

It constructs an argument based on love and its barriers. There is

some thorough analysis of the ‘The Crucible’ specific to the dramatic

text type. Some lapses in expression impact on the overall

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