100% found this document useful (2 votes)
1K views5 pages

TUGAS TUTORIAL 2 Bahasa Inggris

The document is a tutorial assignment in English consisting of 3 questions. The first question asks the student to identify parts of a job recommendation letter. The second question asks the student to identify 5 errors in a sample business letter. The third question asks the student to write a 100-150 word thank you email to a guest speaker at an international seminar.

Uploaded by

adindalibrainia
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
100% found this document useful (2 votes)
1K views5 pages

TUGAS TUTORIAL 2 Bahasa Inggris

The document is a tutorial assignment in English consisting of 3 questions. The first question asks the student to identify parts of a job recommendation letter. The second question asks the student to identify 5 errors in a sample business letter. The third question asks the student to write a 100-150 word thank you email to a guest speaker at an international seminar.

Uploaded by

adindalibrainia
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
  • Tutorial Task 1: Includes the first sample letter addressed to Vincent, with tasks requiring corrections and recommendations.
  • Tutorial Task 2: Focuses on a letter to a purchasing manager with related questions and tasks regarding letter structure and error identification.
  • Tutorial Task 3: Provides a gratitude letter to Mr. Allen Smith with discussion on appreciation and professional communication.

Nama Mahasiswa : ADINDA LIBRAINI ARYADI

Nomor Induk Mahasiswa/NIM : 050108458

Nama Mata Kuliah : BAHASA INGGRIS

Kode/Nama UPBJJ : 21/JAKARTA

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager


555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst


123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

2 It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When
we first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.

It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across
teams. Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by
me, but also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm
absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She
can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can
quickly become an asset and help your company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

ANSWER:

1. The opening greeting, is an initial greeting in the form of greeting


2. The content of the letter in the main part which is the main problem, topic, or core
issue to be conveyed.
3. The closing greeting, is a greeting sentence after the delivery of the letter ends.

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.


1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.
I look forward to receive your order.
Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)

ANSWER:
- In the letter, it was stated that the catalog would be sent soon, this makes the sender
of request letter wait for the catalog delivery and disrturb the sender’s activities.
- In the catalog letter ther is no need to provide too much information about the
company.
- Details regarding the item information required are not stated clearly or more
spesically.
- Information regarding payments and discounts is incomplete and not specific.
- The language in the letter uses informal language.

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.

ANSWER:
Dear Mr. Allen Smith,

I would like to send my appreciation for the opportunity that had been given to me, and
thank you for your time to be a resource person at an International Seminar. I am really
enjoyed discussion about the field marketing position and appreciated learning more about
working with you.
I can say that you are a person who is very throught, diligent, but also has a warm and
pleasant personallyity, I felt very comfortable while working with you.
Is that all from me, I look forward to meet and work with you again.
Thank you,

Adinda Libraini
[email protected]
+62896 7777 1116

You might also like