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The letter requests ongoing monitoring of a patient with diabetes, hypertension, and atrial fibrillation who is moving cities to live with his daughter. It provides details on his medical history including non-compliance with medication and diet. It asks the receiving nurse for continued management of the patient.

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Writing Test 4

The letter requests ongoing monitoring of a patient with diabetes, hypertension, and atrial fibrillation who is moving cities to live with his daughter. It provides details on his medical history including non-compliance with medication and diet. It asks the receiving nurse for continued management of the patient.

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NURSAMPLE02

WRITING: QUESTION BOOKLET


CANDIDATE NAME:

D.O.B.: D D M M Y Y Y Y PROFESSION:

VENUE: TEST DATE:

Starting at the left, print your Candidate


Number and fill in the corresponding circle
below each number using a 2B pencil.
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(other than to take the test) or assist any other person to
disclose or use any OET test or sub-test content. If you cheat
or assist in any cheating, use any unfair practice, break any of
the rules or regulations, or ignore any advice or information, you
may be disqualified and your results may not be issued at the
sole discretion of CBLA. CBLA also reserves its right to take
further disciplinary action against you and to pursue any other
remedies permitted by law. If a candidate is suspected of and
investigated for malpractice, their personal details and details of
the investigation may be passed to a third party where required.

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INSTRUCTIONS TO CANDIDATES
You must write your answer for the Writing sub-test in the Writing Answer Booklet.
You must NOT remove OET material from the test room.

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Occupational English Test

WRITING SUB-TEST: NURSING


TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES
WRITING TIME: 40 MINUTES

Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.

Notes:
Assume that today's date is 22 January 2019
You are the nurse in a Community Health Centre. A patient you have been monitoring is moving to another city to live
with his daughter.

PATIENT DETAILS:
Name: Mr Peter Dunbar
DOB: 18 Mar 1932

Current medication:
Metformin 500mg 3x/day (oral hypoglycaemic)
Ramipril 5mg daily (anti-hypertensive, ACE inhibitor) – for hypertension
Warfarin variable 3-5mg (anti-coagulant)
Sotalol 40mg daily (beta blocker)

Treatment record:
Sep 2017 Diagnosed with type 2 diabetes August 2016. Fasting blood sugar levels (BSL) = 9
Doctor recommended dietary management: low-fat, low-sugar, calorie
restriction; limit alcohol. ÓExercise
Pt lives at home with wife. Wife cooks. Wife managing dietary requirements, but Pt likes 2-3
glasses wine with meals

Dec 2017 Wife deceased. Pt depressed/grieving. Referred back to doctor for monitoring/medicating
Fasting BSL = 9. Pt non-compliant with diet. Excessive fat, salt, sugar, alcohol (wine/beer)

Mar 2018 Doctor prescribed metformin (oral hypoglycaemic agent). Now Pt cooking for self –
non-compliant with diet. Non-compliant with medication. Blames poor memory
Pt appears unmotivated. Resents having to take medication: ‘always been healthy’
Takes medication intermittently; encouraged to take regularly
Educated regarding need for regular medication and potential adverse effects of intermittent dosing
Discussed strategies of memory aids

Jun 2018 Pt hospitalised (City Hospital, Newtown) with myocardial infarction (MI) following retrosternal pain,
nausea/vomiting, dizziness, sweating. Confirmed by ECG
Treatment: aspirin, streptokinase infusion. Prescribed ramipril 5mg daily. Diagnosed with atrial
fibrillation post MI – commenced sotalol and warfarin

Jun-Aug 2018 Pt attended twice weekly


Oct 2018 Pt now walking with a stick. Signs of diabetic neuropathy. Poor exercise tolerance. Restricted
mobility
Non-compliance with diet continues. Still self-catering. Discussed alternatives
e.g., community-based meal delivery service; moving in with adult children (son/daughter);
retirement village
Had respiratory infection 2 wks ago. Amoxicillin prescribed. Pt discontinued all other medication
as felt unwell. Resumed medications but still only taking intermittently
Again provided education re importance of adherence to drug regimen

22 Jan 2019 Pt attended with daughter. Pt moving to Centreville to live with daughter & her husband.
Daughter will cook – requires education re Pt needs & monitoring
Daughter advises that Pt resistant to dietary alterations and medication regimen.
Still misses or doubles dose – all medication. Refuses to reduce salt, sugar, alcohol, fatty food
Pt continues to require monitoring & encouragement
Letter to transfer the Pt to the care of the community health nurse in Centreville, where the Pt is
moving to live with his daughter

Writing Task:

Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter to the Community Health Nurse in Centreville,outlining
the patient’s history and requesting ongoing monitoring. Address the letter to the Community Health Nurse, Eastern
Community Health Centre, 456 East Street, Centreville.

In your answer:
● Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences
● Do not use note form
● Use letter format
The body of the letter should be approximately 180–200 words.
Any answers recorded here will not be marked.

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NURSAMPLE02
Occupational English Test

WRITING SUB-TEST: NURSING


SAMPLE RESPONSE: LETTER OF TRANSFER

Community Health Nurse


Eastern Community Health Centre
456 East Street
Centreville

22 January 2019

Dear Nurse

Re: Mr Peter Dunbar


DOB 18.03.1932

Thank you for accepting Mr Dunbar into your care for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to
comply with his medication and dietary regimens. Mr Dunbar is moving to Centreville to live with his daughter.

Since October 2018, Mr Dunbar has shown signs of diabetic neuropathy and consequently mobilises with a walking
stick. His type 2 diabetes is controlled by metformin and through his diet, however, he remains resistant to any form of
treatment, and has not been compliant with his medication regimen, reporting poor memory as the primary cause of
his neglect. On occasion he also double doses. Contrary to advice, Mr Dunbar has continued to consume excessive
amounts of alcohol, fatty foods, salt and sugar since the death of his wife last year, contributing to his current
condition. While his daughter will now be cooking for him, she will require some guidance related to his needs.

In June 2018, he suffered a myocardial infarction for which he was hospitalised at City Hospital in Newtown. He was
diagnosed with atrial fibrillation on the same admission and was subsequently prescribed warfarin and sotalol. His
hypertension is controlled by Ramipril. As with his other medication, Mr Dunbar is intermittent in his compliance.

Thank you for your continued management of this patient.

Yours faithfully,

Nurse

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