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The Leo club of SMK Assunta organised a visit to Rumah Hope on February 12, 2011 from 9am to 12pm. 18 Leo members attended and played games like running and passing an orange with their necks with 28 orphans aged 5-15. After the games, the orphans were served brunch sponsored by the school canteen. The Leos then interacted with and gave gifts of sweets and candy to the orphans before taking a group photo and leaving at 11:45am to return safely to school by 12pm.

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The Leo club of SMK Assunta organised a visit to Rumah Hope on February 12, 2011 from 9am to 12pm. 18 Leo members attended and played games like running and passing an orange with their necks with 28 orphans aged 5-15. After the games, the orphans were served brunch sponsored by the school canteen. The Leos then interacted with and gave gifts of sweets and candy to the orphans before taking a group photo and leaving at 11:45am to return safely to school by 12pm.

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Group : 3 Group members : Zayyani, Nadiah, Mathila Tutorial : 15 Unit : PISMP SN Jan 10

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Report on a Visit to Rumah Hope Last Saturday,on the 12 of February 2011 The Leo club of SMK Assunta organised a visit to the Rumah Hope. It was from 9.00 am till 12.00 pm. The Rumah Hope was located in Petaling Jaya, which was nearby our [Link] left the school at 9.00 am and reached the home at [Link] we arrived ,the kids were still doing their chores and so we waited [Link] were about 18 Leo members who attended this trip. There were 28 orphans there. Most of them were between 5-15 years old. They were very polite and adorable. We played some games with the orphans which included an ice-breaking game where running was involved and another where one must pass an orange to each group member using only their neck. After we finished with the games, brunch was served to the orphans about 11.00 [Link] school canteen had sponsored some fried rice and [Link] was the time where the Leos had the chance to interact more with the orphans. The gifts were distributed right after which consists of sweets and [Link] all gathered in one place and took a group photo. Then we realized that it was already 11.45 am which meant we had to leave. We said our goodbyes and left the home. We reached school safely at 12.00 pm and from there, the leos went home after a wonderful morning.

Report by, SherMaine Lim(4A1)

Corrected report

Report on a Visit to Rumah Hope Last Saturday,on the 12 of February 2011 The Leo club of SMK Assunta organised a visit to the Rumah Hope. It was from 9.00 am till 12.00 pm. The Rumah Hope was located in Petaling Jaya, which was nearby our [Link] left the school at 9.00 am and reached the home at [Link] we arrived ,the kids were still doing their chores and so we waited [Link] were about 18 Leo members who attended this trip. There were 28 orphans there. Most of them were between 5-15 years old. They were very polite and adorable. We played some games with the orphans which included an ice-breaking game where running was involved and another where one must pass an orange to each group member using only their neck. After we finished with the games, brunch was served to the orphans about 11.00 [Link] school canteen had sponsored some fried rice and [Link] was the time where the Leos had the chance to interact more with the orphans. The gifts were distributed right after which consists of sweets and [Link] all gathered in one place and took a group photo. Then we realized that it was already 11.45 am which meant we had to leave. We said our goodbyes and left the home. We reached school safely at 12.00 pm and from there, the leos went home after a wonderful morning.

Report by, SherMaine Lim(4A1)

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