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Task 2 The Scripts Contains Mistakes, Identify and Correct Them

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Task 2 The Scripts Contains Mistakes, Identify and Correct Them

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TASK 2

THE SCRIPTS CONTAINS MISTAKES, IDENTIFY AND CORRECT


THEM
''Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. Thank you for finding the time to come and join me for this
presentation this afternoon. My name is Tim Mason, I'm a retail consultant, and many of you will
have seen me shadowing you in your jobs and looking through the accounts and so on in the company
over the last week. I've invite you here today to have a look on my findings. First, I'd like to have a
look at the performance of the company, the sales of the company over the last three years; then I'd
like to have a look at our market share in the womenswear market and look at our competitors; and
thirdly, I'd like to suggest some improvements in our range of womenswear. At the finally, I’d be
happy to answer any of your questions.''

CORRECTIONS
''Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. Thank you for your time to joining me this afternoon. My
name is Tim Mason, I’m a retail consultant, and many of you will have seen me shadowing you in
your jobs and looking through the accounts and so on in the company over the last week. I've invited
you here today to have a look at my findings. First, I’d like to look at the company's performance and
the company sales over the last three years. And our market share in the womenswear market and
look at our competitors. Thirdly, I’d like to suggest some improvements in our range of womenswear.
Finally, I’m happy to answer any of your questions.''

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