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the purpose. awareness.
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ORGANIZATION
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transitions are Transitions are
used. used
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and an appropriate. or ordinary. repetitive. response is
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choice reflects evident. variation in
an advanced sentence length
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demonstrates demonstrates demonstrates demonstrates understanding of
full command knowledge of sufficient minimal control the conventions
of the the conventions control of the of the of written
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are not meaning.
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