HIGHER WRITING MARK SHEET

NAME QUESTION 1 / 20 MARKS QUESTION 2 / 28 MARKS QUESTION 3 / 12 MARKS TOTAL / 60 MARKS

QUESTION 1 (80–90 WORDS) – 20 MARKS

COMMUNICATION AND CONTENT* LINGUISTIC KNOWLEDGE AND ACCURACY*
1 • Communicates brief information relevant to the task with little development 1 • Uses straightforward grammatical structures, some repetition
2 • Limited adaptation of language to narrate, inform and interest; straightforward personal 2 • Produces brief, simple sentences, limited linking of sentences
3 opinions are given with limited justification • Variable accuracy with language and structures, variable success when referring to past,
• Expresses straightforward thoughts and ideas; uses common, familiar language with present and future events, regular ambiguity; often errors prevent meaning being
repetition conveyed
• Variable use of appropriate register and style
4 • Communicates information relevant to the task, with development of the occasional key 3 • Uses mostly straightforward grammatical structures, occasional repetition
5 point and idea 4 • Produces occasionally extended sentences linked with familiar, straightforward
6 • Some effective adaptation of language to narrate and inform; attempts are made to conjunctions
interest and give convincing personal opinions which are occasionally successful • Some accurate language and structures, including some successful references to past,
• Expresses mainly straightforward thoughts and ideas with the occasional individual present and future events, some ambiguity; often errors occur that hinder clarity of
thought/idea; some different examples of common, familiar language communication and occasionally prevent meaning being conveyed
• Appropriate use of register and style is evident but with inconsistencies
7 • Communicates information relevant to the task, with development of some key points and 5 • Different examples of straightforward grammatical structures are evident
8 ideas 6 • Produces some extended sentences that are linked with familiar, straightforward
9 • Mostly effective adaptation of language to narrate and inform, some effective language to conjunctions
interest and give convincing personal opinions • Frequently accurate language and structures, including mostly successful references to
• Some examples of creative language use to express individual thoughts and ideas; a past, present and future events, occasional ambiguity; sometimes errors occur that hinder
variety of mainly common, familiar language with the occasional example of uncommon clarity of communication
language
• Appropriate use of register and style is evident but with occasional inconsistency
10 • Communicates information relevant to the task with expansion of key points and ideas 7 • Some variation of grammatical structures, occasional complex structure
11 • Effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest and give convincing personal 8 • Produces frequently extended sentences, well linked together
12 opinions • Generally accurate language and structures, including successful references to past,
• Frequent examples of creative language use to express individual thoughts and ideas; a present and future events; occasionally errors occur that hinder clarity of communication
variety of vocabulary and expression, some examples of uncommon language
• Appropriate use of register and style throughout with minimal inconsistency

QUESTION 2 (130–150 WORDS) – 28 MARKS

COMMUNICATION AND CONTENT* LINGUISTIC KNOWLEDGE AND ACCURACY*
1 • Communicates occasionally detailed information relevant to the task with occasionally 1 • Uses a variety of mainly straightforward grammatical structures, occasional examples of
2 effective development of key points and ideas 2 repetitive complex language
3 • Some effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest/convince 3 • Occasional sequences of fluent writing, occasionally extended, well-linked sentences
4 • Occasional examples of creative use of language to express individual thoughts, ideas and • Straightforward grammatical structures are largely accurate with occasional accurate use
points of view, occasional justification; variety of mainly common, familiar language, of complex language, some successful references to past, present and future events but
occasional examples of uncommon language some ambiguity; errors occur that sometimes hinder clarity of communication
• Appropriate use of register and style with the occasional inconsistency
5 • Communicates some detailed information relevant to the task, frequently effective 4 • Some variation of grammatical structures, including some repetitive instances of complex
6 development of key points and ideas 5 language
7 • Frequently effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest/convince 6 • Prolonged sequences of fluent writing, some extended, well-linked sentences
8 • Examples of creative use of language to express some individual thoughts, ideas and • Generally accurate language and structures, frequently successful references to past,
points of view, some justified; some variation of vocabulary and expression with some present and future events, occasional ambiguity; errors occur that occasionally hinder
examples of uncommon language clarity of communication
• Appropriate use of register and style with few inconsistencies
9 • Communicates detailed information relevant to the task, with mostly effective 7 • Uses a variety of grammatical structures, including some different examples of complex
10 development of key points and ideas 8 language
11 • Mostly effective adaptation of language, to narrate, inform, interest/convince 9 • Predominantly fluent response; frequent extended sentences, mostly well linked
12 • Creative use of language to express a range of individual thoughts, ideas and points of • Mostly accurate language and structures, mostly successful references to past, present
view, most of which are justified; variety of vocabulary and expression, frequent examples and future events; errors occur but they rarely hinder clarity of communication
of uncommon language
• Predominantly appropriate use of register and style
13 • Communicates detailed information relevant to the task, with consistently effective 10 • Uses a wide variety of grammatical structures, including complex language
14 development of key points and ideas 11 • Fluent response throughout with extended, well-linked sentences
15 • Consistently effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest/convince 12 • Consistently accurate language and structures, consistently successful references to past,
16 • Creative use of language to express and fully justify a wide range of individual thoughts, present and future events; any errors do not hinder the clarity of the communication
ideas and points of view; wide variety of vocabulary and expression, many examples of
uncommon language
• Consistent use of appropriate register and style throughout

QUESTION 3 (TRANSLATION) – 12 MARKS

MARKED HOLISTICALLY (STUDENT’S RESPONSE ACROSS WHOLE PARAGRAPH SHOULD BE CONSIDERED)*
1 • Meaning of some individual words or phrases is conveyed; frequent omissions/incorrectly communicated words and phrases/mother-tongue interference
2 • Some straightforward structures are accurate but regular errors prevent meaning of individual phrases/sentences being conveyed
3
4 • The meaning of the passage is partially communicated, some words and phrases are omitted/incorrectly communicated
5 • Language and structures are accurate in some phrases and sentences but some errors prevent meaning being conveyed
6
7 • The meaning of the passage is mostly communicated, occasional words are omitted/incorrectly communicated
8 • Mostly accurate language and structures; errors occur that occasionally hinder clarity and in rare instances prevent meaning being conveyed
9
10 • The meaning of the passage is fully communicated
11 • Consistently accurate language and structures, any errors do not hinder clarity
12

*For additional guidance on the mark scheme, please see the Sample Assessment Materials.