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This document summarizes revisions made to a research proposal on assessing a proposed adapted physical activities module for students with disabilities. Key revisions included changing the title, merging similar paragraphs, revising the statement of problem and instruments to be used, clarifying the respondents, changing the procedure section to a narrative form, finalizing the instruments, and formatting the references according to APA style. The revised proposal was then approved by three panelists and an adviser.

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Angeles University Foundation

This document summarizes revisions made to a research proposal on assessing a proposed adapted physical activities module for students with disabilities. Key revisions included changing the title, merging similar paragraphs, revising the statement of problem and instruments to be used, clarifying the respondents, changing the procedure section to a narrative form, finalizing the instruments, and formatting the references according to APA style. The revised proposal was then approved by three panelists and an adviser.

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Angeles University Foundation

Angeles City
COLLEGE OF EDUCATION
Department of Physical Education

Group Leader and members:


Bernabe, Adrian V.
Malonzo, Jeffryl
Mungcal, Zsa
Martinez, Melody

Original title: identifying the health issues of the students as one of the
consideration………………….

Items for Revision Action Taken


Change title “Assessment of a The title of the study was change from
proposed adapted HOPE 1 module for “Assessment of a proposed adapted
students with disabilities” HOPE 1 module for students with
disabilities” to “A Proposed Adapted
Physical Activities For Health Optimizing
Physical Education 1”

Merge the paragraphs having the same Followed the order in organizing the
thoughts. You may use the order below in introduction as per panelist’s
organizing your Introduction: recommendation.
- importance of PE
- PE for disabled
- Literature on the participation of
students with disability in PE
- Purpose of the study –establish the
need for the module

Revise the statement of the problem The statement of the problem was
section. changed from designing a module to
designing a physical activities and how the
activities be assess by the experts.

Provide description for each instrument The description for each instrument
that will be used. Coherent to the changed into an informal interview and
research questions. structured questionnaire will be used in
gathering the data
Decide clearly on your respondents. Identified the specific target respondents
which are the selected HOPE-01 teacher
in Angeles City Pampanga.

The procedure part should be in Changed bullet form into narrative.


paragraph (narrative) form.

Change the questionnaire. Finalized the instruments to be used in the


study (informal interview and structured
questionnaire)

Provide the reference section APA 6 Followed the APA style in stating the
style. references.

Noted By:

_________________________
Adviser

Approved by:

___________________________ _____________________________ ___________________________

Panelist 1 Panelist 2 Panelist 3

DR. JONAR T. MARTIN


Professor

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