Voiceover 1
Original: Manila, the capital of the Philippines, rich with wealthy cultures of local and
foreign people and a strong foundation of history
Edited: This is Manila, the capital of the Philippines, rich with local and foreign
culture, built by strong foundation of history and modernization
Voiceover 2
Original: People from all across the nation gather together to form a city which is
the light of the society. But beyond its midst, problems of different roots occur.
Problems whose beginning are unfathomable and possibly incurable. People choose
to tolerate and live on with life without any regard of how such problems might
affect ones life, ones society and ones nation.
Edited: This is Manilas people, the light of the society. They come from all across
the nation and have formed this city. But beyond its midst, problems of different
roots occur. Problems whose beginnings we will try to uncover and cure, even
though it seems impossible. Let us not be those people who choose to tolerate
these problems and live on with life without any regard on how these problems may
affect ourselves, the society, and the nation.
Personal (Nics) 1
Original: I am Nicole Francisco, your reporter today exposing to you the social
problems of todays generation and solving them in the process
Edited: I am Nicole Francisco and I invite you to come with me as I expose one of
the leading social problems of today generation: Child labor
Child Labor Facts
**Facts here
Personal (Nics) 2
From our travels, we have encountered a few children who happened to be victims
of child labor <insert interview>
Voiceover 4
Original: We, simple students from the University of Santo Tomas have provided a
simple solution to this social problem of child labor. Child labor has made children
feel like the bread winner of the family if they have one. However, simple acts, our
simple solution can and will make them children again.
Edited: We, simple students from the University of Santo Tomas believe that no one
should take the childhood of these children away from them. They should not be
working just to provide the needs of their family. They should be living their
childhood just like any ordinary child would playing, having fun, and of course
nourishing their minds through education. Our simple solution to this complex
problem is a simple act of giving and we hope it goes a long way.
Personal (Nics) 3
Original: Children deserve to have the chance of education. So we decided to give
out educational resources and materials which could provide them the opportunity
of leaning, the chance of rubbing knowledge into their minds, and the capability of
contributing to the nations progress once theyve grown up into wiser individuals.
Edited: Every children deserves education. And for that, we have provided them
with a handful of educational resources which will be greatly useful to them as they
take their educational journey. Because through education, they can be a lot more.
They can be better versions of themselves which in the future, would contribute
greatly to the progress of the society.
END
Original: We devised a solution for this social problem child labor. Not everyone
has taken a step into the improvement of every childs future. Every street is their
house. Every corner, their kitchen. Every sidewalk, their living room. Every
pavement, their bedroom. But with our help, with our cooperation, we can make a
difference. We can make them feel loved and cared for. We can make our nation,
the Philippines, their home.
Edited: As proactive members of the society, we have chosen to take a step into
helping these children improve their current situation every street is their house,
every corner, their kitchen, every sidewalk, their living room, and every pavement,
their bedroom. We can make a difference. We can make these children feel loved or
at least cared for. We can make our nation, the Philippines, a better home for them.
