Alfred Tennyson

by Peter Cash

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Alfred Tennyson (1809-1892)

by
Peter Cash

BIBLIOGRAPHY
ed. Christopher Ricks, The Poems of Tennyson, Longman 1969.
ed. Michael Millgate, Tennyson, OUP 1963.
Leone Ormond, Alfred Tennyson: A Literary Life, 1993.
Glennis Byron, Alfred Tennyson: Selected Poems, York Notes 2000.
The bibliography of this student guide is commended.
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W. H. Auden, Tennyson: An Introduction and a Selection, Doubleday 1946.

Boris Ford, The Pelican Guide to English Literature No 6, Penguin 1958.
J. D. Jump, Tennyson: The Critical Heritage, Routledge 1967.
R. P. Hewett, A Choice of Poets, Harrap 1968.
Frank Kermode, Selected Prose of T. S. Eliot, Faber 1975.
E. A. Francis, Tennyson, C20 Views, Prentice-Hall 1980.

FURTHER READING
William Wordsworth, Ode: Intimations of Immortality, 1807.
Charlotte Bronte, Jane Eyre, 1847.
Charles Dickens, Hard Times, 1854.
Robert Browning, Men and Women, 1855.
R. L. Stevenson, The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, 1886.
Thomas Hardy, Tess of the DUrbervilles, 1891.
John Fowles, The French Lieutenants Woman, 1969.
SCOPE OF TOPIC
Tennyson, with all his temperament and artistic skill, is deficient in intellectual power; and
no modern poet can make very much of his business unless he is pre-eminently strong in
this. This modern view, paying tribute to Tennysons artistic skill, but criticising his lack of
intellectual power, was expressed by Matthew Arnold in 1860.
To T. S. Eliot, it is perfectly clear that Tennyson is a great poet: He has three qualities
which are seldom found together except in the greatest poets: abundance, variety, and
complete competence. Writing in 1936, Eliot was certain about Tennyson to an extent which
has not been seen since.
In this Bookmark, one aim will be to focus just as A-Level examination questions have often
done on Tennysons variety. In his Collected Works, there is an extraordinary variety of
forms (rhyme-schemes, metres) and a bewildering variety of subject-matters. Partly because
he lived so long, Tennyson wrote too much much of it turgid and of questionable quality.
All of it was in the Parnassian style [= in accordance with nineteenth-century poetic diction]
to which his contemporary Gerard Manley Hopkins was objecting in his private letters.
Tennysons intellect, then, was more than equal to the business of versification; both T. S.
Eliot and W. H. Auden take the view that no poet in English has ever had a finer ear for
vowel sound. What Matthew Arnold means is that Tennysons work is without any unifying
theme. He means that Tennyson had little of his own to say and that he felt under pressure
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exerted, no doubt, by the successful novelists of the 1830s and 1840s to search among
the social issues of his day for imposing subjects, not all of them amenable to poetic
expression: for example, womens rights (as explored in The Princess in 1847). Arnold, if
you like, is arguing that Tennysons variety is a sign of his ultimate weakness. Not
unsympathetic to that argument, this Bookmark comments on 14 poems (including three
songs from The Princess) which illustrate the extent of Tennysons virtuosity. Tennysons
133-part elegy for Arthur Hallam In Memoriam (1850) is covered in the Longer Poems
series of English Association Bookmarks (No 4).
Upon Wordsworths death in 1850, Tennyson became Poet Laureate. During the second half
of his life, he was a national celebrity, his books of the 1850s selling as Beatles albums would
do in the 1960s. His fame spread, resulting in his (reluctant) ennoblement in 1883: Alfred, 1st
Baron Tennyson/Alfred, Lord Tennyson.

THE OWL (1830)

R. P. Hewett remarks that The Owl is a light and lively lyric, enlivened by an energetic
rhythm. The Owl (a song among Tennysons juvenilia) has the air of a Shakespearean
song, reminiscent especially of the song in Love's Labours Lost: When icicles hang by the
wall .... (Act V Scene 2). The subject of the song is a barn owl (tyto alba): although
Tennyson may be concerned to write a lively lyric, he is aiming to suggest that this owl,
perched in a church tower, is an alert, cunning and predatory force. The comment that the
poem is light and lively stems from Tennysons use of repetition: in both stanzas, there
recurs a line which is functional in the description of a cyclical activity. In the first stanza, the
repeated line And the whirring sail goes round enacts the incessant rotation of a
windmill; in the second, the line Twice or thrice his roundelay is mimetic of the continual
crowing of a cockerel. Although in this respect the song is not dissimilar to that raucous
French rondeau Frere Jacques, its purpose is to suggest that the eponymous owl is a bird
for all seasons, a raptor who keeps his wits about him and rarely sleeps.
In both stanzas, there is a simple contrast between innocent diurnal activities (such as cats
running home or merry milkmaids closing gates) and the sinister nocturnal activities of the
owl. There is an ominous undercurrent in the behaviour of the owl, something menacing
which Tennysons iambic chorus
Alone and warming his five wits
The white owl in the belfry sits
seeks to convey. This couplet implies that the white owl feels not only indifferent to all
other forms of activity, but also superior to all animals and humans who perform them.
There is a sense in which this owl, with his five wits, has extra-sensory perception and
seems to preside imperiously and vigilantly over the rural world. The Owl, then, is a poem
that singles out the barn owl (aka church owl) for special attention and seeks to suggest that
this creature is an omniscient President of the Countryside: in other words, the poem
reinforces the conventional image of a wise, old owl and pays tribute to his omnipotent
wisdom.
Rudimentary though this rhyme is, it exemplifies Tennysons complete
competence (Eliot).

MARIANA (1830)
It was the art-critic John Ruskin who in Modern Painters III (1856) coined the term
pathetic fallacy; he did so in order to criticise the growing tendency of both artists and
writers to ascribe human emotions to non-human phenomena. It was, so Ruskin argued, a
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fallacy to suggest (as Wordsworth and Tennyson regularly did) that human feelings could
seek and find a sympathetic response in their natural surroundings; such sentimentality, he

explained, created a falseness in our impressions of external things. Mariana is a poem

which illustrates the impact of this fallacy on Tennysons work. In this poem, Tennyson aims
to describe the atmosphere of a place in order to convey the mood of a person. The place
which he describes is the moated grange to which Vincentio, the Duke of Vienna refers in
Act III Scene 2 of Shakespeares Measure for Measure (1604).
Tennysons eponymous heroine is a minor character in Shakespeares play. Mariana, jilted
fiance of Angelo, is spending her best days in a solitary confinement at this lonely location.
By his description of this Gothic building, Tennyson seeks to convey her dejected mood: as
Glennis Byron puts it, the poem is a description of an abandoned womans state of
consciousness. It is by the sound of each verse that Tennyson creates her mood of deep
despondency. His rhymes
With blackest moss the flower-pots
Were thickly crusted, one and all:
The rusted nails fell from the knots
That held the pear to the garden-wall.
The broken sheds looked sad and strange:
Uplifted was the clinking latch;
Weeded and worn the ancient thatch
Upon the lonely moated grange
are monosyllabic and monotonous and thus assist him in establishing a melancholy
atmosphere. Mariana is an exercise in the vocabulary of gloom. It is by a deft use of
adjectives that Tennyson colours this scene in dark hues. First, he uses superlatives (With
blackest moss, when thickest dark) in order to imply a state of deep depression; by using
the superlative forms of black and thick, he seeks to convey the dense gloom which hangs
over both the garden and Marianas prospects. Second, he uses a series of positive
adjectives ironically to convey this negative atmosphere. Most notably, the rusted nails and
the broken sheds suggest the effects of corrosion; other adjectives (sad, unlifted, weeded
and worn) are simple signs of neglect and deterioration. In short, Tennysons diction depicts
an environment of terminal decay.
It is by the sound of the chorus that Tennyson emphasises the bleak and desolate
environment in which Mariana spends her days. The monotonous refrain
She only said, My life is dreary,
He cometh not, she said;
She said, I am aweary, aweary,
I would that I were dead!
is repeated in order to suggest the monotony of Marianas life. Here, the dull rhymes
(said/dead) and the dour repetitions (She said; she said and aweary, aweary) give an
overwhelming impression of dreariness and weariness with the world; collectively, these
sound-effects establish the tedium of Marianas existence. So stagnant is her life that it has
ceased to be worth living.
Throughout the poem, Tennyson commits the pathetic fallacy: that is, he suggests
fallaciously and intentionally that the atmospheric conditions are in sym pathy with Marianas
disconsolate mood. In the second stanza, the flitting of the bats is a sinister detail that
enhances the Gothic atmosphere; it augments both the meteorological and spiritual gloom.
In the third stanza, Tennyson adds a further air of spookiness; it is eerie that Mariana should
hear an owl hoot as she awakes (waking she heard the night-fowl crow) and eerier still that
a cockerel should crow an hour ere light. It is almost as if there is a clandestine evil in the
grounds, something nasty in that broken wood-shed. In the fifth and sixth stanzas, Tennyson
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writes as if the grange is actually haunted: She saw the gusty shadow sway, The doors
upon their hinges creaked, Old faces glimmered thro the doors, Old footsteps trod the
upper floors. The place is in urgent need of a ghost-buster.
Throughout the poem, Tennysons strategy anticipates the technique of a film director: he
sets a scene and then lights it from different angles. In the third stanza, he emphasises how
it must feel for Mariana to dwell in such abject isolation:
without hope of change,
In sleep she seemed to walk forlorn,
Till cold winds woke the gray-eyed morn
About the lonely moated grange.
Because Mariana lives without hope of change, she is forlorn: that is, she is in despair. It is
therefore inevitable that cold winds should blow on the sound-track and that the personified
morn should shed little light; both aspects of her immediate surroundings communicate her
plight. Glennis Byron observes that Mariana appears fused with her setting. The pictorial
clarity of the setting reflects her dejection.
Eventually, Marianas despair grows to the point at which she contemplates suicide. In the
fifth stanza, the remorseless gray of the background (the glooming flats, the rounding
gray) evokes her suicidal mood:
The shadow of the poplar fell
Upon her bed, across her brow.
Marians life, then, is overcast by a grim shadow: literally, it is the shadow from the poplar
tree which casts her room into a premature darkness; metaphorically, it is the shadow of
Angelos rejection which lies over her and so Shakespeares play works disqualifies her
from becoming the bride of any other man. Doomed to die a maid, she has nothing to live
for. In this context, Mariana is a tragic figure. In the seventh and final stanza, Tennyson
emphasises her own awareness of her tragedy; she is portrayed as knowing what this period
of enforced seclusion has done to her. Her particular awareness that time (the slow clock
ticking) passes with an unnatural slowness for her causes both anguish and boredom; but
this is nothing compared to her sense that her personality has been altered by her
claustrophobic experience. Her cry of despair
Then, said she, I am very dreary,
He will not come, she said;
She wept, I am aweary, aweary,
O God, that I were dead!
is heightened and strengthened by the addition of very and the introduction of O God.
She realises that her sense of personal identity has been destroyed; her ordeal has left her
without the capacity either to enjoy her life (symbolised by that ironic sunbeam) or to fling
herself courageously into the moat (O God, that I were dead!) Strangers to Measure for
Measure may be glad to learn that God in the shape of Duke Vincentio, disguised as a friar
does finally intervene and re-unite her with Angelo.

ULYSSES (1833)
The central fact of Tennysons poetical career (if not of his life) was the sudden death of his
close friend Arthur Hallam on 15th September 1833. Hallam whom Tennyson had met
at Trinity College Cambridge in April 1829 died in Vienna of a brain haemorrhage (a
cerebral aneurysm); born on 1st February 1811, he was just twenty-two years of age.
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Tennyson learned of Hallams death two weeks later (on 1st October 1833): from that
moment, this early death became the central inspiration and preoccupation of his poetry. By
20th October 1833, Ulysses was complete.
Written (as it was) in the wake of Arthur Hallams sudden death, Ulysses according to
Tennysons letters is about the necessity of going forward and braving the struggle of life;
although it was written under the sense of loss, the poem is characterised by Tennysons
feeling that still life must be fought to the end. In order to explore this attitude, Tennyson
turns to his reading of classical literature. Despite his confession that the poem is about
myself, he leans for his inspiration upon the legend of Ulysses as Homer relates it in Book IX
of his Odyssey and as Dante re-tells it in Chapter XXVI of his Inferno; in order to express his
personal sense of loss and come to terms with his grief, Tennyson transforms himself into an
appropriately heroic figure and endeavours in this persona to shape his attitude towards
grief.
Ulysses is a dramatic monologue: as such, it reads like a speech from Act III of Hamlet or
Book II of Paradise Lost. The soliloquy takes the form of a retrospection; in the poem,
Ulysses, the great hero from the Trojan wars, is an old man who, having returned to Ithaca,
is looking back upon his odyssey and in his sleek old age (Odyssey, Book XI) trying to make
sense of human experience. It is Christopher Ricks who explains that Tennyson had read H.
F. Carys translation of Dante and points out that the speaker of the monologue finds himself
in a situation more recognisable to Dantes hero. In Inferno, Ulysses who once had in him
the zeal/T explore the world and search the ways of life has become tardy with age and
has been living on the Greek island of Ithaca for several years when the old desire to travel
the world takes hold of him again. Tennysons poem takes up the story from this point: that
is, the point at which Ulysses seeks to fire his companions with his renewed zeal for life. He
plans to drink/Life to the lees. Decoded, then, Ulysses speech is Tennysons attempt to
exhort himself into braving the struggle of life after/without Arthur Hallam.
Tennysons poem is complex because its blank verse attempts to monitor the thoughtprocesses of this injured individual: in other words, its iambic pentameters try to chart the
movement of a mind engaged in the agonising act of thinking over past events. In order to
capture his protagonists reflective mood, Tennyson must become subtle in his recourse to
syntactical parallelism and develop a complicated syntax. Consequently, the first sentence of
the poem It little profits that an idle king .... fails to complete itself and thus suggests
that Ulysses no longer finds life worth living. A series of negative adjectives (idle, still,
barren) reflects his mood of disenchantment. Ulysses is particularly disillusioned by his race,
for it consists of men and women who seem incapable of understanding what a great man he
has been: in short, he feels unappreciated [= unmotivated].
Tennysons use of mid-line colons and semi-colons indicates the complexity of Ulysses
thought. What is complex about Ulysses thought lies in his sustained attempt to arrive at a
sense of personal identity in his old age; through the difficult network of punctuation, he is to
be imagined as struggling to answer this question: Who am I now? For Ulysses old age,
we may safely read Tennysons bereavement. Decoded, Tennyson is asking himself who he
is without Hallam and how he can find the enthusiasm to rise out of his despondency, sail
again through the arch of experience and live the years that remain to him.
Into Ulysses myth (I cannot rest from travel) Tennyson encrypts his own ceaseless effort to
recover his equanimity in the aftermath of Hallams death. Ulysses fear is that he is merely
famous for having been famous: I am become a name. He is sensitive to the stigma that he
is a has-been because there is nothing in his present life that illuminates his past:
significantly, he is by a still hearth. He suspects himself of living on his past glories; he finds
it extremely dull to live a life of idle retirement and reflects that he is merely breathing, not
living: As tho to breathe were life. For this listless attitude, Ulysses/Tennyson admonishes
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In the event, he resolves to make the most of every hour that he has left before the eternal
silence. Such a resolution is in itself a heroic act; such heroism is entirely in keeping with
Ulysses reputation: in other words, he remains a hero in his attitude towards old age [= his
bereavement]. It would be vile if this gray spirit yearning in desire did not try its utmost to
follow knowledge like a sinking star: that is, to pursue virtue and knowledge high (as Dante
put it).
Ulysses turns to the consolation of his son in the hope that Telemachus will succeed where he
has failed: that is, in civilising such a savage race. He cheers himself up with the thought
that Telemachus may educate a rugged people and subdue them to the useful and the
good. In his old age, Ulysses looks out upon the dark broad seas, remembers the heroic
way in which he and his mariners (no fair-weather friends) contended with the varying
weather-conditions (the thunder and the sunshine) and decides that they can/should do so
again. He reflects that old age has its compensations: as a result, he resolves before he
dies to perform another work of noble note/ to seek a newer world. This quest (to sail
beyond the sunset) is yet another heroic deed because, even though all atmospheric
conditions are against him, he is determined to strive manfully/age with decorum; he wants
to grow old gracefully, if not zealously.
Ultimately, Ulysses comprehends that moral courage is the only truly adequate response to
human experience and will not give in to death: instead, he resolves to rage against the
dying of the light. He seems determined to undertake one last adventure, consoling himself
with the idea that he is what he is (that which we are, we are). He accepts that he and his
fellow sailors have been rendered physically weak, but refuses to let this frailty become an
excuse for moral weakness: To the dawn/Our poop we turned (Dante). Even though he is
old, there is no weakening of Ulysses will (strong in will). He/Tennyson has concluded that
life is to be lived to the full until death actually arrives; he will not yield to senility. At the
end of his monologue, Ulysses/Tennysons mood is a mood of heroic determination (to strive
.... and not to yield) totally in keeping with his character in his prime.

TITHONUS (1833)
What is life to me! If I die (which the Tennysons never do)
Emily Tennyson Letter of 12th July 1834
It is a strange feeling about those who are taken young that,
while we are getting old and dusty, they are as they were.
Benjamin Jowett Letter of 10th April 1859
Tithonus, too, was written in the after-shock of Arthur Hallams death in September 1833 at
the tender age of twenty-two. The history of its composition and publication are instructive;
conceived in one version as Tithon, revised into another version to which scholars are still
denied access, Tithonus saw the light of day only after W. M. Thackeray pressed the Poet
Laureate to contribute a poem to the Cornhill Magazine in 1860. Tennyson assigned the
poem to 1860 because he did not want to be thought to have dusted off a poem written
upwards of a quarter of a century ago.
As it was originally a pendent to Ulysses, Tithon is coloured by the grief that both
Tennyson and his sister Emily (Hallams fiance) felt at the time of his death a quarter of a
century ago. Emilys sentiment, expressed in her letter to her brother, touches immediately
upon his own ineluctable feeling that life without Hallam was not going to be worth living;
moreover, it raises the prospect that their lives (since Tennysons never die) are likely to
approach a condition of unendurability. While they are getting old and dusty, they will go
on remembering Arthur as the young man that he was. For this reason, M. J. Donahue

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(1949) airs the view that Tithonus is not so much a mask for Tennyson as a means by
which he examines the peculiar and individual nature of his own emotional injury.
In Tithonus, then, Tithonus is not a persona to the extent that Ulysses was; rather, he is a
witness to a condition (not dissimilar to immortality) which brings an unending misery. In this
poem, then, Tennyson endeavours to console himself with the idea that immortality might
not be a blessing. To this end, he presents the persona of the Greek youth Tithonus who,
beloved by the Goddess Aurora, received from her the gift of eternal life, but not eternal
youth; as a result, he grew old and infirm, but because he could not die was (according
to the myth) instead turned into a grasshopper.
Like Ulysses, Tithonus reads like a soliloquy from a Shakespearean play or a Book of
Paradise Lost; it is a dramatic monologue in which Tennyson brings to life this mythological
figure, endows him with a personal history and provides us with a psychological insight into
his character. At the same time, Tennyson is trying through this remote, mythological
persona to work out an answer to his own immediate grief/to find a self-supporting attitude
to Hallams death: in short, to find a consolation.
It transpires that Tithonus like Arthur Hallam was a handsome youth. Indeed, Tithonus
is a tragic figure because, although he need not fear death, he has to live every year of his
life feeling older and older. This being so, he is in an ironic relationship with his environment;
he exists in ironic relation to both the decaying woods (the woods decay) and the dying
swan (after many a summer dies the swan). The supreme irony is that Tithonus envies his
fellow creatures because he, unlike them, is deprived of the joy of dying.
The cruel irony for Tithonus is that immortality, as opposed to mortality, consumes him.
Rather than die, Tithonus is forced to endure the long, drawn-out and withering process of
ageing:
Me only cruel immortality
Consumes.
This being so, he is no longer a man, but a white-haired shadow: in other words, what is
cruel about immortality is that it has made him merely a gray shadow of the handsome
creature that he once was; what is cruel is that he can age, but not die. Given Hallams
early death, Tennysons consolation is that he would not have wished this fate upon his
friend. He should know: after all, it is an emotional condition approximate to the very anguish
which he himself is having to endure.
After the first ten lines of blank verse, Tithonus monologue takes the course of a reproach to
the Goddess Aurora for having seduced him with the prospect of eternal grandeur; rather like
King Midas of Phrygia, Tithonus reproaches the gods for having granted him a wish that has
rebounded on him. Aurora has granted him not immortal youth but immortal age; in this
oxymoron, we can hear him blame her for having landed him in this predicament; we may
moreover be also able to hear Tennyson chastise his own gods for taking Hallam young and
subjecting him to his own living death.
On reflection, Tithonus can see no reason why man should outstay his welcome on earth; on
second thoughts, he has no wish to vary from the kindly race of men and concludes that
death is meet for all. Decoded, Tennyson is expressing his understanding of human
mortality [namely, that man must die lest he be condemned to endure immortal age] and
hoping that, in return for this understanding, he will be granted relief from his pain: to be
exact, that this understanding will put his distress in a palliative context.
Tithonus/Tennysons wishful thinking takes the shape of a vision in which Aurora rather like
a veiled Bodicea arrives in her chariot (pulled by a wild team of horses) to restore his
mortality .... But no:

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The Gods themselves cannot recall their gifts.

Tithonus/Tennysons condition is irreversible: that is, he must continue to endure his grief
without respite/ for the foreseeable future even to the crack of doom. In this respect,
Tithonus is a notable expression of Victorian pessimism in that it fails to imagine a Benign
Deity/a Benevolent Creator who might intervene out of pity and spare him further torment.
For Tennyson, God is to be experienced only as a terrifying absence (J. Hillis Miller, 1963).
Tithonus picture of Auroras arrival is of course a metaphor for the break of day. Dawn (in
the form of Auroras chariot) arrives, but Tithonus is not in any condition to greet another day
with optimism, for he feels that, since those days far-off, he has lost the identity of a man
(if I be he that watched) and yearns in vivid language for his past existence when he could
feel his blood glow with the glow of the crimson sky.
By sharp contrast with Ulysses mood, Tithonus mood is one of despair; he has given up all
hope of returning to mortal life/to the ranks of happy men that have the power to die. In
the final verse-paragraph, he tries desperately to brave the struggle of life/to come to terms
with his fate among the rosy shadows. It culminates in a Keatsian plea for the simple ease
of death
Release me and restore me to the ground
which goes unanswered. The long lines of Tithonus blank verse pan the consciousness of
a man whose melancholy increases daily and whose envy of ordinary mortals (the happier
dead) becomes daily more acute. Ultimately, Tennysons iambic pentameters convey the
blank desolation that he shares with his forlorn protagonist.

BREAK, BREAK, BREAK .... (1834)

Given the frequency with which Tennyson visited the seaside-resort of Mablethorpe, it is no
surprise that Christopher Ricks assigns this poem to Spring 1834: that is, after Arthur
Hallams sudden death, but before the Tennysons left Somersby in Lincolnshire for Epping in
Surrey. The poem of four quatrains is both a lyric in that Tennyson gives voice to his
grief and an ode in that he addresses the sea directly:
Break, break, break,
On thy cold gray stones, O Sea!
From this imperative, it would seem that Tennyson has been staring at the North Sea and
encouraging the waves that break repeatedly over the cold gray stones: just as the literal
waves go on crashing over the stones, so the waves of grief/misery continue to whelm over
him. It is as if he is empathising with the stones, exhorting the waves to do their worst to
them at the same time as he bravely exhorts the waves of emotion to do their worst to him.
In the remorseless erosion of the stones, Tennyson finds a metaphor for the effect of his
bereavement upon his consciousness. In this process, he finds an objective correlative for
his otherwise-ineffable sorrow; it supplies him with a formula for his melancholy and thus
enables him to express thoughts which like Wordsworths in his Ode lie too deep for
tears.
Other features of the marine landscape Tennyson integrates casually into the second and
third quatrains. He selects three figures in order to forge poignant contrasts between them in
their vocal happiness and himself in his unutterable sorrow: all in life is well for the
fishermans boy who shouts playfully to his sister; all is equally well for the sailor lad who
sings to himself in his boat. In both cases, the boys joy is articulated at the ironic expense
of the melancholy poet who is staring silently out to sea and watching the stately ships
proceed to their haven under the hill. Tennyson himself can find no such port in a storm:
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But O for the touch of a vanished hand,

And the sound of a voice that is still.
He remains in turmoil, preoccupied with the loss of his friend whom he recalls here (as he
does in In Memoriam) by reference to the touch of his hand and the sound of his voice; this
is the hand/That can be clasped no more [Part VII] and it becomes the mnemonic by which
his loss is to be measured and mourned.
At the start of the fourth quatrain, Tennysons aim in repeating his imperative (Break, break,
break) is not to engage in helpless gesturing (Robin Mayhead) but once again to enact
rhythmically the breaking of the waves upon the crags. On this occasion, though, he uses
this lament to depict not the remorseless flow of his grief, but the continuous flow of life.
Ruefully, he observes that it carries on regardless both of Hallams death and of his own
distraught reaction to it. For this reason, he tries in the last lines to come to terms with the
irretrievability of his loss: that is, to accept with calm that the day when he last felt Hallams
tender hand/last heard his voice will never come back to him.

THE LOTOS-EATERS (1842)

First published in 1832, this poem in its revised version of 1842 relies for its context upon
the abrupt death of Arthur Hallam in September 1833. Originally, Tennyson had gone for his
inspiration to Homers Odyssey Book IX:
We set foot on the land of the Lotus-eaters who eat a flowery food .... So they
[Odysseus men] went straightaway and mingled with the Lotus-eaters and the
Lotus-eaters did not plan death for my comrades, but gave them of the lotus to
taste. And whosoever of them ate of the honey-sweet fruit of the lotus had no
longer any wish to bring back word or to return, but there they were fain to abide
among the lotus-eaters, feeding on the lotus and forgetful of their homeward way.
These men, therefore, I brought back perforce to the ships, weeping.
In the immediate wake of Hallams death, it ceases to be merely the literary re-working of a
Greek myth and becomes in addition an exploration of a state of consciousness: to be exact,
Tennyson finds himself suddenly interested in a frame of mind in which a man may be able to
assuage the pain of bereavement. It is instructive that there exists a copy of the 1832 poem
in Arthur Hallams handwriting (held by the University of Hawaii of all places); it therefore
makes natural sense that Tennyson should have returned to this manuscript in his endeavour
to come to terms with his friends death.
Tennyson had read Washington Irvings Columbus (1828) and had been impressed by the
description there of the idyllic life on Haiti. This description gives him the idea that there may
indeed exist on earth
a land
In which it seemed always afternoon.
In his grief, it is attractive to Tennyson that there may be a condition of existence in which
there is neither morning nor night: in other words, afternoon becomes a metaphor for a
state in which men can avoid extremes (neither pleasure nor pain) and dwell in a permanent
state of equanimity. Furthermore, always afternoon becomes an emblem of a timeless
condition of existence in which men need no longer fear their rapid movement towards death.
The Lotus-Eaters is a descriptive poem in that Tennysons energy goes primarily into simple
descriptions of this land in which the languid air induces in Odysseus mariners a trance-like
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state (a weary dream) that creates the impression of a paradise. Decoded, this paradise (a
land of streams) is a state of mind in which Tennyson need experience no extremes of
feeling; he is prepared to sacrifice pleasure if it means that he can staunch the flow of pain.
The climate of the land is temperate: with its wavering lights and shadows, it represents the
compromise condition towards which Tennyson aspires:
A land where all things always seemed the same!
The exclamation-mark indicates how devoutly he wishes for this consummation.
The musical movement of the rhymed iambic pentameters suggests the lull in activity for
which Odysseus comrades have been longing. It is at this vulnerable point that the natives
greet them:
Dark faces pale against that rosy flame,
The mild-eyed melancholy Lotos-eaters came.
They offer them branches .... of that enchanted stem; as a result, whoso did receive of
them/And taste fell deep-asleep .... yet all awake. The oxymoron indicates that Odysseus
men have entered an indeterminate state of existence. Having eaten the flowery food, they
no longer cherish the wish to return to the alien shores of the real world where youth grows
pale and spectre-thin and dies (Keats) or, as in Hallams case, not even that. After tasting
the honey-sweet fruit of the lotus, they enter a condition of forgetfulness; forcibly reminded
of the real world where comrades die, they will return to their ships weeping (Homer).
In this respect, the mariners circumstances replicate Tennysons own. For this reason, he
in his own poem shares their longing to go on living a life in which both food and feeling
are bland. Like them, he wishes to remain
upon the yellow sand
Between the sun and moon upon the shore.
Like Ferdinand (in The Tempest), Odysseus men have come unto these yellow sands and
in their enervated condition been tempted to stay there, enjoying the mellow
atmosphere: between the sun (morning) and moon (night). They feel too weary [an
adjective used three times in eight words] for active engagement in the world beyond the
wandering fields of barren foam [a Parnassian metonym for the ocean which echoes the loss
of their desire to roam] and declare that they will return no more.
It is in the Choric Song (which follows) that the mariners further declare that There is no joy
but calm and express their preference for a life of dreamful ease. With these sentiments,
Tennyson may be thought to associate himself. Given the pain that it causes, he wants no
more to do with the business of living in the real world where but to think is to be full of
sorrow (Keats); he, too, is thrice-weary of personal involvement with the Fatherland and
would rather withdraw to a remote dream-land where he can rest from toil. In this way
prospers F. R. Leavis idea that, in Victorian poetry, the actual world (alien shores) exists
for the sole purpose of being ignored.

THE LADY OF SHALOTT (1842)

In this poem, Tennysons aim is to .... Because the poem is The Lady of Shalott, the
sentence is unusually difficult to finish. Composing her summary of the poem, Glennis Byron
writes: Many critics have seen this as a poem about .... Some critics consider the poem an
expression of .... She tells us in turn what Post-Structuralist critics think, what Feminist
critics have suggested and how Marxist critics have read the poem, concluding: Perhaps it is
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because the poem invites so many different readings that it has enjoyed a long popular
appeal. Her vague vocabulary many [unnamed] critics, some [unnamed] critics,
perhaps, so many gives the game away: here is a poem which, in spite of its long-lasting
fame, defies confident exegesis.
It may therefore be helpful to inquire what Tennyson himself thought the poem was about.
Originally, he claimed that the source for The Lady of Shalott was an Italian novella of
1321 entitled La Donna di Scalotta (LXXXII in the collection Cento Novelle Antiche): Shalott
was a softer sound than Scalott. Christopher Ricks, however, notes that Tennysons
narrative is true to this source only in respect of the Ladys funeral voyage and he proceeds
to quote what Tennyson had to say when it was pointed out to him that his narrative owes
more to the story of Elaine, the daughter of Bernard of Astolat, who features in Sir Thomas
Malorys Morte dArthur (1470): I doubt whether I should ever have put it in that shape if I
had been then aware of the Maid of Astolat in Mort Arthur and The Lady of Shalott is
evidently the Elaine of the Morte d Arthur, but I do not think that I had ever heard of the
latter when I wrote the former.
The earliest known version of this story is La Mort Le Roi Artu (c. 1237): in this version, La
Demoiselle dEscalot dies of unrequited love for Sir Lancelot and drifts down a river to
Camelot in a boat; it is recognizably this story that both Malory and Tennyson (360 years
later) adapt to their own purposes. Given that nineteenth-century poets were exceptionally
competitive versifiers, it can be argued that Tennysons aim in The Lady of Shalott is
simply to tell this tale of unrequited love in an ambitious and original verse-form. In short,
the poem is primarily a literary exercise.
Even so, Ricks observes that Tennyson adds to the tale five significant details: the island, the
mirror, the woven tapestry, the curse and the song. Debate among critics is then renewed
when it is supposed that, in Tennysons re-telling, the tale is allegorical: that the events have
a meaning/signify a moral concern. Referring to the Lady, Tennyson himself explained that
the new-born love for something, for someone in the wide world from which she
has been so long secluded, takes her out of the region of shadows into that of
realities.
The source for this quotation is Hallam Tennysons memoir of his father, published in 1897:
are we, however, any the wiser? Can we now place upon the events of the poem any
construction which goes beyond conjecture? Probably not. It may nevertheless be worth
speculating that Tennyson had not remained unmoved by the mortality rate of Victorian
women; it may not have escaped his notice that his female contemporaries tended to die not
just prematurely, but young. Foremost among the realities which the Lady of Shalott
encounters is the reality of death.
Two eminent Victorian women give point to this speculation. When we think of Charlotte
Bronte, we think of Haworth Parsonage, her sisters and Jane Eyre (1847); we do not
perhaps know that, upon finally marrying a clergyman at the age of 38, she died within the
year, almost certainly from the dehydrating effects of severe morning sickness. When we
think of Mrs Beeton, author in 1861 of Mrs Beeton's Book of Household Management, a
guide to all aspects of running a household in Victorian Britain and subsequently a bible of
good house-keeping, we perhaps think in view of her subject-matter of an elderly matron,
passing on her acquired wisdom to younger wives. In fact, Isabella Beeton (1836-1865) did
not live to see her 29th Birthday and this was because, after giving birth to her fourth child,
she died from puerperal fever, caused by a septic infection of her genital passage, contracted
from her husband Samuel, a respectable publisher, but also a frequenter of brothels. To the
extent that they yield their innocence and become fatally involved in the world, they are both
Ladies of Shalott.

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The Lady of Shalott is a poem of four Parts. Both Part I and Part II comprise four stanzas;
Part III comprises five stanzas; and Part IV comprises six stanzas. Each stanza is of nine
lines, each rhyming aaabcccb; such are the symmetries between these original stanzas that
the b-rhyme between the fifth line and the ninth line is always Camelot/of Shalott; whereas
the a-lines and the c-lines are always in iambic tetrameter, the b-lines are always trimeters.
Given these mathematical correspondences between the stanzas, no attempt at exegesis [=
at decoding the Arthurian narrative] should forget that Tennyson may simply be
demonstrating his technical expertise/exhibiting his virtuosity. Quite ostentatiously, The
Lady of Shalott is a work of art.
In Part I, Tennyson is concerned simply to set the scene. The setting is an eyot: that is, an
islet in the mid-stream of a river (a feature not mentioned in the source-material). The
introduction of this eyot is designed to indicate that the Lady of Shalott is isolated. It should
always be borne in mind that Tennyson, in his re-telling of this prose romance, may be
primarily concerned to give the kind of reading-pleasure that an exact correspondent
recurrence of accent and sound are calculated to excite (S. T. Coleridge, Biographia
Literaria, Chapter XIV); audibly, he delights in meeting his contracts with his schemes of
rhyme and metre. At the same time, Part I insists on the Ladys alienation and isolation from
the world in which slow horses pull heavy barges and reapers pile up sheaves of barley.
The function of the island in the river is to imbower her: that is, seclude her from industrial
and agricultural life. The rhetorical questions of the third stanza (But who ...?) suggest that
nobody has actually seen her, even at the casement of her gray tower. Indeed, the Ladys
existence is known only to the reapers of the bearded barley who hear a song which she
sings, breaking the silence.
In Part II, it becomes clear that something other than mere story-telling is going on. To the
original narrative, Tennyson adds three features which ask for interpretation:
There she weaves by night and day
A magic web with colours gay.
She has heard a whisper say,
A curse is on her if she stay
To look down to Camelot ....
And moving thro a mirror clear
That hangs before her all the year,
Shadows of the world appear.
First, the Lady of Shalott is weaving a tapestry (a magic web into which, as we shall see, the
colours of the outside world are woven); second, she is aware that a curse is on her
(though she knows not what it may be); and third, she is looking as weavers did at a
mirror in which images (shadows) of the bustling activity in the outside world are reflected.
Consistent with her confinement in a tower, the Ladys contact with the outside is not direct,
but mediated through the mirror. In this mirror, a Chaucerian range of characters appears:
surly village-churls, red cloaks of market girls, a troop of damsels, an abbot, a curly
shepherd-lad, a long-haired page in crimson clad, knights riding two by two. Here is an
entire cross-section of mediaeval life with which she is involved only at a distance/indirectly.
Accordingly, Tennyson informs us that she has no loyal knight and true. It is this
information that prepares us for the finale of Part II:
Or when the moon was overhead,
Came two young lovers lately wed;
I am half sick of shadows, said
The Lady of Shalott.
Here, the dramatic picture is of the Lady of Shalott throwing down her weaving in frustration
and declaring that she has had enough of doing things by halves: whilst she is still young,
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she wants to quit the region of shadows and become fully involved in the bright life of
Camelot. Put another way, the girl wants her piece of the romantic action. In the original
version of 1832, Tennyson wrote that She lives with little joy or fear: in other words, Shalott
is a colourless lotus-land (gray) in which a damsel cannot feel any fits of passion, cannot
experience any extremes of emotion. She has, however, been warned:
For often thro the silent nights
A funeral, with plumes and lights
And music, went to Camelot.
There is a proleptic irony at the Ladys expense, for the world [= Camelot] which she wants
so badly to join is the mortal world in which there is often a funeral.
Part III Tennyson dedicates to a description of the dazzling figure of Sir Lancelot. Ricks
observes that, for the Ladys reaction to bold Sir Lancelot, Tennyson is deeply indebted to
Edmund Spensers The Faerie Queene (1596): in particular, he has in mind Book III, Canto
II, Stanzas 17-25 in which the chaste Britomart first catches sight of the comely knight
Arthegall in a looking glasse/a mirrhour fayre. Spensers Stanzas 24 and 25 are devoted to
a description of Arthegall; in keeping with that image, Tennysons Lancelot likewise sports a
shield on which there is the emblem of St George, patron saint of England: a red cross on a
yellow field. Sir Lancelot cuts a dashing figure: on his horses bridle, gems glitter and bells
ring merrily; from the belt across his shoulder, a mighty silver bugle hangs; from his horses
saddle, jewels shine thick; from his helmet, a feather plumes upwards like a burning flame.
For this glamorous figure, Tennysons final simile is a bearded meteor, trailing light. He is
no shadow, but a brilliant reality. The spectacle is enough to turn any maidens head: no
sooner have his broad clear brow and his coal-black curls headed her way and flashed into
the crystal mirror than the Lady of Shalott an embodiment of chastity, purity conceives a
natural longing to lose her maidenhead. The final stanza of Part III is memorable for the
dramatic clarity of its rapid statements:
She left the web, she left the loom,
She made three paces through the room,
She saw the water-lily bloom,
She saw the helmet and the plume,
She looked down to Camelot.
The imagery of the helmet and the plume is not so much an innuendo as an encoding of
phallic promise. Now that she has experienced the excitement of sexual desire, the Lady of
Shalott has lost patience with her virginity; she no longer wants to weave life, but to live it.
At the same time, she is aware of the dangers that lost virginity entails; she understands that
she participates in the living world at her peril. The violent cracking of the mirror signifies the
Ladys recognition that, in leaving Shalott, she is seriously tempting Fate:
Out flew the web and floated wide;
The mirror cracked from side to side;
The curse is come upon me, cried
The Lady of Shalott.
In Tennyson, the curse is not likely to be the the curse of menstruation though it happens
to be related to it. The post-pubescent/nubile damsel has been warned of the power of
sexual longing; it is something with which women are cursed in that it leads to heart-break,
infection and death. Consequently, she has taken the advice to keep herself to herself; she
has remained sequestered in the tower, filtering her knowledge of Camelot through glass, for
fear that, if she looks directly on the world, then its actual vibrancy will seduce her. To this
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Tale) is a siren song: once he catches her eye, the curse of sexual yearning comes upon her
and she is effectively doomed.

It is instructive that Book III of The Fairie Queene is entitled Chastity. Like Ulysses
faithful wife Penelope, the Lady of Shalott had substituted weaving for living and loving; she
had tried, but failed to substitute art for life. What has happened in Part III is that Sir
Lancelot has passed by her casement without looking up; as a result, she is to be imagined at
her casement looking after her knight in shining armour as he rides obliviously towards
Camelot. In Part IV, the Lady, robed in snowy white, leaves her island in the stream,
boards a boat (on which she inscribes her name) and floats in stormy weather towards
Camelot, singing her mournful song and duly dying en route. She dies a poetic death. The
stately movement of the iambic verse conducts her downwards; on her way, autumn leaves
specifically from weeping willow-trees begin to fall, inspiring pity for her. Her inscription on
the prow becomes her epitaph: in effect, Here lies one who gave up her innocence/gave
herself to a man.
Dead on arrival, the Lady attracts sympathy from all classes of Camelot society: knight and
burgher, lord and dame come out upon the wharfs to receive her. The palace itself falls
silent .... It is tragic that the Lady looked down to Camelot [= engaged with the realities of
the world] only to be disappointed: upon conceiving an affection for Lancelot, she discovered
to her chagrin that it was not requited or, rather, not reciprocated in the same terms.
According to this view, it is significant that Tennyson gives the final words of the poem to the
Lancelot-figure:
But Lancelot mused a little space;
He said, She has a lovely face;
God in his mercy lend her grace,
The Lady of Shalott.
In effect, he is the Ladys widower. Although he is not unappreciative of her beauty, he is
quite uncomprehending of the journey on which she felt impelled to embark her maiden
voyage, as it were; as a consequence, he rewards her ultimate sacrifice with a superficial
compliment and a quick blessing. The complacent judgement which his words pass on her
beauty is an indicator of his own obliviousness to her actual plight.
Victorian poetry admits implicitly that the actual world is alien, recalcitrant and unpoetical
and that no protest is worth making except the protest of withdrawal, wrote F. R. Leavis in
1932. Following this famous lead, Leone Ormond believes that Tennyson introduced the
Arthurian material as a valid setting for the study of the artist and the dangers of personal
isolation; she is arguing that the Ladys isolation is a metaphor for the withdrawal from the
world that the artist/writer finds necessary for his art. Since this is a poem about which it
does not do to sound too authoritative, the two other options remain. First, the narrative
may be altogether without a double meaning. In this connection, it is worth noting that the
cancelled version of the second stanza of Part IV (1832) goes like this:
Though the squally eastwind keenly
Blew, with folded arms serenely
By the water stood the queenly
Lady of Shalott
The exact correspondence between two adverbs and an unlikely adjective encourages the
idea that Tennyson is essentially a wordsmith whose main interest is in rhyming. The second
interpretation (as detailed above) will appeal more directly to the Feminist critics who are
exercised by the Victorian treatment of women.

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THE EAGLE (1851)

In this short poem, Tennysons aim is to convey the cosmic stature of the golden eagle. In
the first tercet of iambic tetrameter, both the assonance (clasps the crag) and the alliteration
(crag with crooked hands) serve to dramatise the awesome might of the bird. At once,
Tennyson's pronouns (he, him) personify the bird; his talons become hands. In
Tennysons cosmology, it is the altitude at which this bird of prey lives (close to the sun)
which then gives him a semi-divine status; literally, he belongs to a higher dimension.
Consistent with this superior image, the azure world (a grand metonym for the blue sky)
obediently encircles him, supplies him with the vast background against which he stands, an
imperious shape, surveying it from his eyrie.
In both tercets, Tennysons rhymes
(hands/lands/stands) are simple monosyllables designed to endow this raptor with an
emphatic grandeur.
In the second tercet, Tennyson enlarges the scale of this aquiline figure still further: beneath
him, the sea loses its lustre and appears wrinkled; it crawls subserviently, is diminished.
From his Olympian vantage-point, his supreme position, the eagle watches and then
descends upon his prey as if he is an elemental force. In Tennysons mythology, he is little
less than god-like; aptly, the simile like a thunderbolt compares him to the God, Jove.

THE SPLENDOUR FALLS (1853)

R. P. Hewett (A Choice of Poets, 1968) comments that, above all, Tennyson was a devoted
craftsman of poetic effect and had an exquisite ear and that this can act negatively in hiding
poverty of thought or feeling, but is at its best a source of great strength. The Splendour
Falls added in 1853 to a very long, discursive poem entitled The Princess, first published
in 1847 is a case in point. In this song, Tennysons aim is not to set out an argument nor
give shape to a thought, but to create an atmosphere. So eerie is this atmosphere that it
might surround a castle in an ancient fairy-story:
The splendour falls on castle walls
And snowy summits old in story ....
Tennysons simple adjectives (snowy, wild, far, yon) are designed to suggest that this
splendid castle exists in majestic seclusion/that it belongs to another, poetical world. From his
unfolding description, it appears that the bleak landscape is to be located, if not on Irish
moorland, then in Elfland itself:
O sweet and far from cliff and scar
The horns of Elfland faintly blowing!
Blow, let us hear the purple glens replying:
Blow, bugle; answer, echoes, dying, dying, dying.
By this point of the song, it is also clear that the sound of Tennysons verse is to be primarily
instrumental in creating this atmosphere of splendid isolation: so empty and remote is this
landscape that echoes may be readily imagined resounding across it. Indeed, Tennysons
chorus repeats twice the present participle dying in order to give the melancholy impression
either of a bugle-sound fading away (that is, a last post for a lost past) or perhaps of a
forlorn imperative that receives neither reply nor echo (that is, a cry for recognition in the
universe that sadly goes unanswered).
On this first reading, The Splendour Falls articulates Tennysons longing for an age of
Arthurian chivalry or mediaeval romance; he is yearning for the splendour of Britains
heroic/romantic past and listening out for echoes of it; on this reading, the tone of the song
is little more than sentimental nostalgia. On the second reading, that imperative blow is
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issued in the frantic hope that it will produce a response: that out of the silence will ring an
echo to prove that Elfland exists and extends a welcome to him. On this reading, that
repeated participle serves only to give the impression that this hope is forlorn: that no buglehorns blow out of Elfland and long though the poet may listen no echoes will answer it
back. Consequently, the final image of the poem is of the poet stranded in his solitariness on
the edge of an existentialist void.

TEARS, IDLE TEARS (1853)

Tears, Idle Tears is a second song which was added to The Princess in 1853. It is an
attempt by Tennyson to explain to himself why there are occasions on which tears suddenly
gather to the eyes. The eponymous tears are idle: that is, they well up involuntarily, spring
into his eyes unbidden. Why, Tennyson wonders, should this be? The answer lies in the
biographical background to the poem: apparently, he was moved to write it upon a visit to
Tintern Abbey on the banks of the River Wye in Herefordshire:
This song came to me on the yellowing autumn-tide at Tintern Abbey, full
for me of its bygone memories. It is the sense of the abiding in the transient.
Significantly, Arthur Hallam (1811-1833) is buried nearby; he was interred at Clevedon on 3rd
January 1834. Idle though Tennysons tears may appear, it is therefore likely that he does
know ... what they mean; they mean that he continues to miss and mourn his friend. This
biographical note explains that oxymoron some divine despair: even though he is in despair
because Hallam is dead, his despair is divine in that Hallams memory invokes it. It is in
looking on the happy Autumn-fields that he remembers him; from In Memoriam, we know
that Tennyson associates Somersbys autumnal hues (leaves that redden to the fall) with
Hallams sudden death of which he learned on 1st October 1833. What Tennyson is
remembering are things past: indeed, he borrows his chorus-line for each of the four verses
from these lines in which Robert Southey (1774-1843) reflects upon his lost youth:
Its idle hopes are oer,
Yet age remembers with a sigh
The days that are no more.
The title of Southeys poem is Remembrance.
The wider importance of Tears, Idle Tears lies in Tennysons attempt to understand the
power of nostalgia. He attributes human affection for bygone memories (the days that are
no more) to our sense of the abiding in the transient: that is, to our awareness that the
glories of this world pass inevitably away (sic transit gloria mundi ). In homage to
Wordsworths Ode, he expresses here his own appreciation of the speed at which shades of
the prison house begin to close/Upon the growing boy. It is at the thought of human
transience that Tennyson grows lachrymose: although they remain fresh in his memory, the
days of his youth are no more. No sooner has he borne witness to the first beam glittering
on a sail than he is watching red sails in the sunset.
In Tears, Idle Tears, Tennyson meditates on Death in Life; to this meditation, the tempo
of the blank verse lends a poise. In the third verse, he likens this strange sensation to two
phenomena: 1] in dark summer dawns, hearing the earliest pipe of half-awakened birds;
2] on ones death-bed, seeing how the casement slowly grows a glimmering square. By
these images, he attributes his sad state not to a sentimental longing for the past, but to a
living sense of mortality. Whenever bird-song, first light or a recollection of first love
lightens his darkening consciousness, he weeps tears which because there is a profound
reason for them are not so idle after all.

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NOW SLEEPS THE CRIMSON PETAL (1853)

Like The Splendour Falls and Tears, Idle Tears, this song is also extracted from The
Princess. Here, as there, Tennyson seeks by the musical effects of his verse to create the
atmosphere of a romantic place; in this sense, his song with its dense cluster of crepuscular
images is just a song at twilight. Here, the setting is such as may be found at either
Harrington Hall or Well Vale in Tennysons own Lincolnshire; in these formal and ornamental
settings, conditions if the final imperatives of the song are to be believed are entirely
propitious for the consummation of a relationship between the poet and his 'dearest'. Both
the time (dusk) and the place (a landscaped garden) are perfectly right for them to plight
their troths.
Now Sleeps the Crimson Petal conforms immaculately to the nineteenth-century concept
of the poetical. Ultimately, the fourteen-line song is unlike a sonnet because, being purely
descriptive, it does not expand an argument; instead, it makes an anaphoric use of language
purely for the musical pleasure that this pattern of repetition gives. In fact, the song takes
the form of a ghazal. For this Persian form of verse, it has
the requisite number of couplets, the repetition of a single final word at short
intervals to produce what is tantamount to rhyme .... and the standard images and
ornaments of the Persian love-poem: roses, lilies, peacocks, the stars, the cypress.
John Killham
To Tennyson, the appeal of this form lies primarily in the scope that it allows him for the
systematic organisation of sentence-structures. Indeed, seven sentences pursue an identical
grammatical construction: that is, adverb + present-tense verb + article + adjective + noun.
So rigid is his adherence to this formula (Now + subject and predicate self-consciously
inverted) that the setting up of this network of syntactical parallels

Now sleeps the crimson petal ....

Nor waves the cypress ....
Nor winks the gold fin ....
Now droops the milkwhite peacock ....
Now lies the Earth ....
Now slides the silent meteor ....
Now folds the lily .... "
itself becomes the supreme achievement of the exercise; such is Tennysons fondness for
syntactical parallels that he takes additional delight in ensuring that his line-endings (with
me/to me/unto me/in me/in me) rhyme in the silent discipline of the ghazal. It is of
almost secondary importance that this design (preposition + me) produces a harmonious
texture which may in turn suggest a harmony between the poet and the person for whom he
intends himself.
It is to this euphonious pattern of syntactical parallels that the sense-impressions of the
summer night are subjugated. Exotic though it may be, each natural feature the rosepetal, the cypress-tree, the goldfish, the peacock, the star, the lily is not so much required
to express or become an emblem of the poets passion as simply to find a fit position in one
of the fourteen lines.

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THE CHARGE OF THE LIGHT BRIGADE (1854)

The Charge of the Light Brigade (first published in The Examiner on 9th December, 1854)
is one of the most famous and memorable poems in the English language. This fame it owes
both to the catastrophic event which it commemorates and to the dactyllic rhythm (borrowed
from Thomas Chattertons Song to Aella) which enacts this event for us.
The charge of the Light Brigade (which took place in the Crimea on 25th October, 1854) is a
catastrophe that has gone down in the annals of military history. Misunderstanding an order,
Lord Cardigan led a cavalry brigade (of 607 horse and hero) in a charge of one-and-half
miles against Russian artillery. According to the poet himself, The Charge was written (on
2nd December) after he had read a report of this disaster in The Times for 13th November
which referred to some hideous blunder.
The Charge of the Light Brigade celebrates Victorian values: in particular, it eulogises and
sentimentalises both the rigid discipline and the sheer bravery of the six hundred British
soldiers who rode into the valley of Death (as the soldiers themselves called it). Given that
these sabre-rattling horsemen were out-numbered, out-manoeuvred and out-gunned, it is
politically expedient that Tennyson in his description of this massacre should place the
emphasis not upon the blunder, but upon the heroic feats of the cavalrymen whose
obedience to orders sent them charging to their certain deaths. In this context, it is worth
noting that the Victoria Cross (that rarest of military honours) is awarded for valour on active
service.
That Tennysons poem should have out-lasted the era for which it was written says much for
his virtues as a poet: in particular, for his fine ear (T. S. Eliot). The drama of the poem
stems directly and uniquely from Tennysons control of rhyme and rhythm. From the outset,
the beat of his dactyls
Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred
is designed to monitor the galloping advance of the 2,428 hooves towards the Russian guns
one-and-a-half miles (half a league) away; its systematic repetitions are metrically calculated
to drum up a thunderous excitement. Nowhere is this technique more effective than in the
second stanza where the thoughts racing through the mens minds are assimilated into the
pounding of the hoof-beats:
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
Captured here is that unquestioning acceptance of authority upon which Great Britain based
its military discipline and ran its empire. Concealed by that contraction (theirs) is the brutal
attitude of the British class-structure to the men in the ranks: that 'their [duty i]s' not to
answer back, but to take for granted the divine wisdom of the orders issued by their superior
officers. It would be pleasing to think that Tennyson (Their [place i]s not to reason why) is
being ironic at the expense of Lord Cardigan and Lord Raglans ideas of themselves;
unfortunately, it is more likely that he is endorsing this crass structure and simply praising the
dead men for following their stupid orders.
In fact, Tennysons aim is to stir up patriotic fervour/reinforce public support for British
participation in the Crimean War (1854-1856). Nowhere are his strategic repetitions of
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monosyllabic rhymes and emphatic rhythms more dynamic than in the fifth stanza where the
intensity of the action
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volleyed and thundered
gives way to the solemnity of a body-count: not/Not the six hundred.
modulation of the phrasing

The dramatic

They that had fought so well

Came thro the jaws of Death,
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred
takes the casualties into horrifying account. In effect, these lines are no more than a
simple re-working of the third stanza conducted in the bloody aftermath of the wild charge;
the difference lies in the fatal change of tense from past historic (Boldly they rode so well) to
pluperfect (They that had fought so well). The sentiment upon which the poem rests
Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred!
reminds Queen Victorias subjects that it is glorious to die for ones country and insists that
they honour the Light Brigade for its nobility in having carried out this kamikaze charge. It
would take another seventy years before this piety Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori
would be exposed as a hypocritical piece of Victorian propaganda.

ODE ON THE DEATH OF THE DUKE OF WELLINGTON (1852)

Upon Wordsworths death in 1850, Tennyson became Poet Laureate. This position which
required him to pronounce in verse upon public events he took with due seriousness: in
effect, he was working in the tradition of the epic poets (such as Homer and Virgil) whose
function was to record in verse the birth of their nations. It is worth noting that Homer ( The
Iliad) and Virgil (The Aeneid) were the first people to record the histories of the Greek and
Roman nations; in this line, it became the Poet Laureates duty to mark significant
developments in the life of his own nation.
Arthur Wellesley, First Duke of Wellington, conqueror of Napoleon at Waterloo 1815 and
British Prime Minister 1828-1830, died at the age of eighty-three on 14th September 1852.
Newly appointed Poet Laureate, Tennyson felt that it was incumbent upon him to pen an ode
that did justice to the heroic status of this soldier firm and statesman pure. So protracted
were the discussions of Wellingtons funeral that it did not take place until 18th November
for which occasion Tennyson had ready the nine parts of his poem.
In accordance with his role, Tennyson writes an ode that pays lavish tribute to the Duke of
Wellingtons contribution to national life. In effect, it is a public elegy for a national hero:
Where shall we lay the man whom we deplore?
Here, in streaming Londons central roar.

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Here, in Part II, he signals that the man whose death they deplore [= bewail, lament] is to
be buried in St Pauls Cathedral where both those he wrought for and those he fought for
can come to pay their respects. Robin Mayhead considers that this occasional poem is
exceptional: one of Tennysons finest performances. Here, however, the poem is already in
trouble with that contrived rhyme between wrought for (hideously poetic) and fought for.
In Part III, his versification struggles through more monosyllabic rhymes towards this anticlimax:
.... And let the mournful martial music blow;
The last great Englishman is low.
Dirge has become doggerel: that is, verse that plods towards conclusions in which usage
(low) is not fit for the dignified purpose of commemorating its subject: the last great
Englishman. At these points, Tennysons diction can be heard straining for decorum.
During Part VIII, Tennysons Ode becomes in effect an Ode to Duty'. In keeping with his
public role, he proceeds to celebrate those Victorian values that the Duke of Wellington
conspicuously embodied. Using archaic personification, he portrays the Iron Duke (the everloyal iron leader) as a fortunate individual
on whom from both her open hands
Lavish Honour showered all her stars
And affluent Fortune emptied all her horn
but for whom nothing was more important than service of the state (saves or serves the
state). The Ode is Victorian propaganda. Running throughout Part VIII is a chorus
Not once or twice in our rough island-story
The path of duty was the way to glory
in which Tennyson contrives by means of litotes (Not once or twice ....) to draw attention
to the supreme virtues of an English gentleman: duty, self-sacrifice. As Tennyson constructs
his story, Wellington became a great man because he managed to deaden love of self, keep
to the straight-and-narrow mountain-path and scale the toppling crags of Duty; that way
so the moral of the story goes lies glory. For these pious reasons, Wellington is a great
example not only to Victorian Englishmen, but also to men of every land.
In Part IX, Tennyson does his duty and offers to a bereaved nation the consolation that came
from the religious certainties of the age. Even though he is composing an elegy
For one upon whose hand and heart and brain
Once the weight and fate of Europe hung,
he is not dismayed because he recognises that a mans mortal achievements must be viewed
in a wider context even when, like Wellingtons, they happen to be unique in the annals of
military and political history. For this reason, Wellingtons funeral should paradoxically be
a festival of rejoicing:
Uplifted high in heart and hope are we,
Until we doubt not that for one so true
There must be other nobler work to do
Than when he fought at Waterloo.
Even as we are resting assured that God must have other nobler work for Wellington to do,
Tennysons statement (Than when he fought at Waterloo) is plunging helplessly into bathos.
To the dire end, his Ode struggles for felicity of expression:

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Hush, the Dead March wails in the peoples ears:

The dark crowd moves, and there are sobs and tears:
The black earth yawns: the mortal disappears ....
His rhymes for ears betray him into further phrases of doggerel: either rhythmically (and
there are sobs and tears) or visually (the mortal disappears), his wording conjures up trite
pictures of the scene for which its apparent grandeur has not prepared us. After the sound
of the Funeral March, he invites us to listen to people blowing their noses in their hankies;
after the grave opens, he writes as if Wellingtons corpse is part of some conjuring-trick. The
effect is comic. Even in conclusion, Tennysons rhyme for weave him produces
.... And in the vast cathedral leave him.
God accept him, Christ receive him.
It is as if the dark crowd has had enough of Wellington and suddenly cleared off.

CROSSING THE BAR (1889)

For now we see through a glass, darkly; but then face to face.
Corinthians Chapter 1 Verse 8
Tennyson was an eminent Victorian; he was a pillar of the Victorian establishment in that he
espoused the religious and social values of his age. Crossing the Bar (written three years
before his death) is a religious poem in that it seeks to perfect an attitude to his imminent
death in terms of his Christian faith. It is no surprise to learn that he wrote it at the age of
80 to mark his recovery from a serious illness in May 1889.
By 1889, Tennyson was living at Aldworth on the Isle of Wight; it was while crossing the
Solent in October 1889 that Crossing the Bar was begun and finished.
For an
understanding of its strange title, it is necessary to know that a bar is a sand-bank at the
mouth of harbour or estuary [Concise OED] and that it is used in Tennysons poetic diction to
mean that point at which the open sea ('the boundless deep') begins. Given this usage, it
becomes evident that in his traditional imagination the open sea is a metaphor for eternal life
after death: that, in crossing the bar, he is dying.
Indeed, Tennysons metaphors in this poem are all traditional. At sunset, he hears one
clear call: although call is a nautical term appropriate to this setting, its metaphorical
significance here is as a call from God. In this poem, Tennysons aim is to signal his
readiness to answer this call: when he puts out to sea, he asks that there be no tidal
resistance (no moaning) but an absolute calm on the boundless deep. He has come to
terms with his imminent crossing to the other side; both metaphor (put out to sea) and
euphemistic metonym (boundless deep) are used to illustrate this calm awareness that he
has embarked on the ship of death.
In the third quatrain, Tennyson continues to illustrate his equanimity by traditional means. At
twilight, he hears the evening bell ring across the harbour: And after that the dark! In
effect, that exclamation-mark welcomes the dark. Looking forward to his night-crossing, he
extends the metaphor of embarkation: because he is happy to die, he requests that there be
no idle tears when I embark.
In the final quatrain, Tennyson accounts for this happiness at the bourn of death. Lest a
ship run aground, it was necessary that a pilot come aboard and steer it out to sea; in this
conceit, Tennyson envisages that God is the pilot (my Pilot/that Divine and Unseen Who is
always guiding us) who is steering his ship clear of the the sand-bank (the bar) at
Aldworths harbour-mouth: The pilot has been on board all the while, but in the dark I have
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not seen him, explained Tennyson to his son. His composure (expressed by his control of
four iambic metres) emanates from his Christian hope that, as St Pauls Letter to the
Corinthians promises, he will shortly meet his Maker face to face.
One of Tennysons final wishes concerned this poem:
Mind you put Crossing the Bar at the end of all editions of my poems.

APPENDIX
Peter Cash
SOMERSBY
In what sense these five buildings
contribute to English life
is any ingenuous tourists guess.
The approach may be through landscape
that an exhaustive elegy
embodies in metonymy,
but here in the muddy, midwinter Wolds
youre not in any spot that ever
even in Victorias reign
had much to do with history.
No matter when you come, theres never
anybody about.
These days, the bridge
which bumps across the narrow brook
is of an anachronistic brick;
even then, that rivulet, that tinkling rill,
inspired no more than doggerel.
What it bequeaths to posterity
is not romantic, not even twee.
From here, you can ramble or rev uphill.
Ramble in summer, as many do,
youre in a pastoral fiction.
From the larches, a linnet sings;
its mellifluous rhythms
mock the moated grange.
Like Cambridge choirs, bees and gnats
rehearse inevitable murmurings.
Drive in midwinter, as we have done,
the sky remains in folds.
The Rectory hides behind its hedge.
The greenstone church irrelevant squats
asleep on its slope-top;
only thickets of snowdrops fist
through the graveyard grass.
We twist
an iron ring and struggle in.
The thirteen pews take shape.
How dark and strange!
Finally, we purchase
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bland postcards of this picturesqueness

and sign the book in cold biro.
Even then, thered have been little to spy
beneath the haggard cedar-limbs;
these days, theres less ....
Why, then, may we be seen,
malingering up this lane,
listening out for a sonorous voice
that dully addressed a century
in an archaic diction
the code of legends and hymns?
It isnt our idea of erudite fun.
Stand too long and look,
an east-wind leaps and bites;
crows complain across the field.
We loiter, then, without intent
to understand this world?
Not quite:
above the brook,
we seek an inspiration
where the language of the nation
was perfected to death;
its terminal ornateness
brought a kind of greatness,
brings us to this bend:
not so you might think to mourn,
but to take in a place of birth,
contact a muse more suited to refine
than to invent ....
Somersby, we like to note, is not a dead-end;
three roads meander out.
Somersby is one of sixteen poems in Peter Cashs LINCOLNSHIRE CHURCHES, published
by Shoestring Press of Nottingham in 1998. Among the others are Bag Enderby and
Harrington, places also closely connected with Tennyson.
Peter Cash was Head of English Studies at Newcastle-under-Lyme School in Staffordshire
1985-2009. Like Alfred Tennyson, he was born and bred in East Lincolnshire.

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