文章结构—写作技巧 页码,1/1
THE MIDDLE EASTERN BAZAAR
Structural and stylistic analysis&Writing Technique
Section I: ( paras. 1, 2) General atmosphere
Topic Sentence: The Middle Eastern...takes you ...years.
ancientness, backwardness, primitiveness
harmonious, liveliness, self-sufficient, simple, not sophisticated, active,
vigorous, healthy
Section II (One of the peculiarities) the cloth market
Section III (One of the most picturesque) the coppersmith market and
etc.
Section IV (Perhaps the most unforgettable) the mill where linseed oil is
made
TYPE of Writing: Description: A description is painting a picture in words
of a person, place, object, or scene.
a description essay is generally developed through sensory details, or the
impressions of one’s senses --- sight, hearing, taste, smell and touch. The
writer generally chooses those that help to bring out the dominant
characteristic or outstanding quality of the person or thing described.
1. From Macro to Micro
2. words appealing to senses: light & heat, sound & movement, and
smell & colour.
3 nouns, adjectives and even adverbs used as verbs: thread, round,
narrow, price, live, tower and dwarf.
4. words imitating sounds: onomatopoeia.
5. stressful and impressive sentence structures:
the one I am thinking of particularly…
one of the peculiarities …
one of the most picturesque and impressive parts …
the most unforgettable thing in the bazaar,…
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