Screenplay Notes
15 commandments
Theme is paramount! DRAMA is CONFLICT Structure is everything A screenplay: a story told with pictures SHOW, DONT TELL Raise the stakes Make the characters 3-dimensional
15 commandments
Action is character Foreshadow or payoff Suspense, surprise, reversals, twists Scenes: Come in late, leave early Action lines: Short controlled bursts Use dialogue only as a last resort Dont write subtext WRITING is RE-WRITING
Premise format
(name, age, physical, psychological), who (defining characteristic)__________ wants ____________(characters goal in the story)__________ However____(the central conflict/obstacle and the
turning point)__________________. Finally
_______(how has the character changed)______
CHARACTER
People are what they do, not what they saytherefore CHARACTER IS ACTION! Make character 3D 1. Physical---how they look
2. Sociological---how they live
3. Psychological---how they behave
Syd Fields Character Template
Good film characters need: 1. A dramatic need---what the character really wants in the film 2. Point of View (POV)---the way they see the world 3. Change---example: from loser to winner, introvert to extrovert 4. Attitude
Character Arc
Central questions: What does my character want? Inner (story) goal:_______________________ Outer (plot) goal:________________________ How do they change in the story?____________ The points at which we see them changing:_______________
What will they stand to gain or lose? What are the stakes?_________________
What is their pyrrhic victory?____________________