Because the I can imagine a fight or a chase between that organization and him plus when I read it that organization gave me a weird feeling that it was really dangerous feel like their just going to manipulate him
You'll just have to wait and see in the upcoming chapter(s) :b
Plus, I purposefully meant to give it that nature. Doesn't it sound like a nice place though? Nice and friendly and cozy (and maybe perhaps EVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLL) MUAHAHAHHAA -cough cough- hahahahahahaha -cough-
Here's another comment at the end of this chapter I think you made it sound like he would decline the offer because Merlain said is this spencer guy going to be a problem
I'm constantly on sofurry so ill probably be watching for the next chapter to come out because I like this story probably only time I'm not on sofurry is when I sleep and soon school will be in the way to
lol yeah i know. i'll be a senior this year. sucks, doesn't it? oh well.
but yeah, i should be coming out with the next chapter(s) here in shorter time than that long break i had. i realize that i really need to press these chapters out quickly.
Wow. You done a great job with this short chapter. Not only did you bring attention of the CCG and Spencer, but you also made sure to add a few things that might be a bit of a problem later in the story (when Merlain thought that the fox looked sorta cute).
Also, I like the fact that you had added little links at the bottom of each chapter that leads the reader to the next chapter. Great job with this story so far Dragon! ^^
Plus, I purposefully meant to give it that nature. Doesn't it sound like a nice place though? Nice and friendly and cozy (and maybe perhaps EVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLL) MUAHAHAHHAA -cough cough- hahahahahahaha -cough-
wait, what?
but yeah, i should be coming out with the next chapter(s) here in shorter time than that long break i had. i realize that i really need to press these chapters out quickly.
Also, I like the fact that you had added little links at the bottom of each chapter that leads the reader to the next chapter. Great job with this story so far Dragon! ^^
keep reading on, and you never know ;3
Of course I won't know. :p *shrugs* Eh, at least that makes this story more interesting. :3
hopefully i'll be out with it soon enough!