I'm glad you like it, but I'm sorry to hear that it was a bit harsh. What points did you feel were harsh? Feedback is really appreciated in this line of work.

About 1:23 the thumping noise that starts just kind of makes my ears hurt a bit.

About 1:36 it switches to two main noises I can hear. The continuous kind of warbly one is just fine, but the sharp thumping is a little too sharp for my taste. The one that continues to near the end.

That same noise is present commonly throughout, and it starts okay, then is covered by other sounds, but toward the middle it starts to become too much for me. Listening a second time through in succession I notice it much more.

Then again, I have never been fond of loud or sharp noises, so I might not be the best person to take feedback from on this sort of music. *Shrugs*