As promised, I have removed this chapter after a week.
Chapter 3
I know I promised to not upload anymore chapters of my novel, but I have decided to show just one more due to the introduction of a new character. I will be taking this chapter down in one week.
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One noble, a stag, takes great care with his slaves, though they remain slaves for the time being, until he and another nobleman -- a wolf who was formerly a slave and was freed by the stag -- managed to bring down the tyranny of the royal family.
So, that is along similar lines, and I very much like how well your characters can fight and defend on another. It is an interesting and enjoyable storyline. :)
Now, a few things i noticed.
I overreacted back there... I *get* not mean to yell at you
Did?
Due to my phone being weird, i cant copy past the others... But there were a couple similar things in the sword training section. That would make up most of the things I noticed.
All in all, i really wish more would be released, but I understand. Keep up the excellent work, and please don't leave your pony story behind!