Ballad of Broken Love (Like a Fool)
I will let you down...
10 years ago
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Wow..
Thank you so much! My heart and soul went into this piece.
I hope it reaches her.
Unfortunately, I just improvised around set chords I wrote, but I CAN provide the recorded MIDI file!
I would be remiss as a singer if I didn't say you are pitchy during the song, and for me it takes away from the song.
Now that's done.
This is a song which aside from one negative, is a flawless masterpiece.
The music is simply heart rending. From the first few seconds the sense of fragility is captured perfectly.
The words, which are truly brilliant paints a stunning, vivid, moving, watercolor animation in my head.
If you were to practice the vocals a bit and get the pitch down, I could hear a soft string quartet in the back ground.
I may get a lot of flak for my comments on your vocals, but I only mention them because I see SO MUCH POTENTIAL.
Don't stop making music, whatever you do.
And also a shame that this song no longer means anything to me. Oh well.
More music soon, my vocals have improved
I look forward to hearing them. ^.^