The Grand Starfall (Aro Original) (Niku Cobalt)
A song for Niku Cobalt, using his own lyrics and my backing music.
Although, please pardon the vocals, Im no singer by any means, but there was just no other way around it.
(Unless you wanted a Text-To-Speech song! :P)
So, enjoy! Tell me what you think!
(P.S Bright piano sounded best for this in my opinion, in case some of you were wondering.)
And also, I very slightly altered the lyrical runs and such for musical purposes. Sorry if you didn't want that! XP
I met you with darkness in your heart...
I was worried, from afar...
He didn't ever treat you right...
So I stayed up, and made you smile every night.
Chorus (Sing twice)-----------------------------------------------------------
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all...
(Small piano into next verse)-----------------------------------------------
Behind his back, we'd whisper, like the wind...
Fell in love, fell again...
No worries of his cheating, could touch you, at all,
Your beauty shone, like a grand starfall~
Chorus (Sing twice)-----------------------------------------------------------
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all
(Longer piano into next verse)---------------------------------------------
Now I'm fearful, in this night....
Because I'm the one, who made it right...
But he's the one, who's been there, in spite...
Of him making it wrong this whole time...
Chorus (Sing twice)-----------------------------------------------------------
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all
You'd be a hyprocrite to the cheater,
I know this choice... You aren't eager,
But I'll treat you better than him...
I'm... I'm fearful of losing you back to him...
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all
But I'll treat you better than him...
Just to prove Copyright:
Although, please pardon the vocals, Im no singer by any means, but there was just no other way around it.
(Unless you wanted a Text-To-Speech song! :P)
So, enjoy! Tell me what you think!
(P.S Bright piano sounded best for this in my opinion, in case some of you were wondering.)
And also, I very slightly altered the lyrical runs and such for musical purposes. Sorry if you didn't want that! XP
I met you with darkness in your heart...
I was worried, from afar...
He didn't ever treat you right...
So I stayed up, and made you smile every night.
Chorus (Sing twice)-----------------------------------------------------------
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all...
(Small piano into next verse)-----------------------------------------------
Behind his back, we'd whisper, like the wind...
Fell in love, fell again...
No worries of his cheating, could touch you, at all,
Your beauty shone, like a grand starfall~
Chorus (Sing twice)-----------------------------------------------------------
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all
(Longer piano into next verse)---------------------------------------------
Now I'm fearful, in this night....
Because I'm the one, who made it right...
But he's the one, who's been there, in spite...
Of him making it wrong this whole time...
Chorus (Sing twice)-----------------------------------------------------------
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all
You'd be a hyprocrite to the cheater,
I know this choice... You aren't eager,
But I'll treat you better than him...
I'm... I'm fearful of losing you back to him...
I said I'd love you, 'till the end...
I saw you, I'd fix and mend...
Stay with him, he'll hurt and you'll fall...
Go with me, and you leave it all
But I'll treat you better than him...
Just to prove Copyright:
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Great instrumentation! Bright piano was a good call. I think the standard Grand sound on most software and keyboard sound banks are a tad too morose.
The only piece of advice I have here would be on your singing. Energy is essential for good sound, especially at the extremes of range. I won't give a singing physiology lesson in your comment box, but energy in this case would be described as an increase in anything, whether it's power, volume, air, etc. Good muscle coordination also comes into play; it's just something to mess around with. That's about as vague as I can be without sending you on Google looking up vocal anatomy.
Was a nice touch though.
Yes, I was very shy on the mic because its studip quality and picks up EVERYTHING, but yeah, the vocals WERE quite dead at times.
I tried a polyphonic violin texture to fix that, but no.
thanks for listening!
I loved the violin. I'm glad you have it in there!
Keep cranking out!
That's what I have but with a usb adapter.
And I'm surprised at how the violin sounded. that cane from a keyboard! XP
thanks anyways, it was fun to make.
Since then... She's left me, for good. Turns out... There were a lot of lies. She wasn't with just one, or two... Or three.
I am sorry for taking so long to comment; it took me a lot to listen to a song dealing with her. It's... It's been really painful.
In the end, I appreciate what you did. I promised-- no matter what-- that this would be done for her. At least... I came through.
Thank you. Thank you.
I even got choked up on the lines "Fell in love, Fell again".
Its powerful man. Seriously. And btw, you WILL find some-one else. Beauty is internal.