I like this. It's really well drawn and a very nice story. I hope for more to come. 5/5 and fav

Nice start.

interesting.
mostly i nevery read your stories. (sorry not my type of porn) but i have to say:
I'm a sucker for graphic novels and comic strips.
this so far looks good. but tip
leave out any descriptive text from the story. use thought bubbles instead. you have the bubbles why not use them to explain what is going on? you get like 50% more pages yes, however the longer and better is the more fans go crazy asking for more
that aside this is drawn well and has a fresh plot, that seems out of the typical sofurry plot line for a series. (tragic circumstance+fur+possible friends if in highschool or college+weird theme or fetish --> love--> more drama and romance bull --> climax--> happy ending
btw to diverge from the original plot but make this a non happy ending. i suggest a weird Japanese fairy tail esq ending. those are fun to create

very nice begining cant wate for the next part

WOW! this looks very good.

wow, that looks amazing!! i cant wait to finally see what kind of great story telling you can pull off with this ^^. great work dude :D

Nice GRay.

I wondered how this would look like when drawn. I'll be here for the next one for sure <(^_^)>

:-)

Me, too! I've nev er done a serious, non yiffy piece in the comic format, nor has Kitsu. Both of us were a little nervous. Glad to say I'm thrilled with how it turned out.

Me, too! I've nev er done a serious, non yiffy piece in the comic format, nor has Kitsu. Both of us were a little nervous. Glad to say I'm thrilled with how it turned out.

omfg furry oprah!!!... xD i didnt even realize who that was!! >:O xD. great work

*laughs* Really nice to see this and what a surprise! I saw it on someone's favorites! And yes, I did catch the third panel. Lovely work by Kitsu.

Thanks, Dasher. I just finished Tina II chapter 13. Now I can relax for a bit.....
How've you been, my friend? Haven't heard from you in a bit....

This story was so touching. Seeing it illustrated is going to be... magical? Wonderful? Delightful? Inspiring? Haunting? Sensation? I cannot find the right words.

Love this. Seem kinda sad though.

It is. It ends happily. Trust me.

you look adorable <3

Really? I do?
The shirt looks comfortable......

You never looked so good Gray!

Yer younger looking than the on-line pictures portray you. Even G -rated his art stands out as some of the best, and yer story is non-pareile, as always, beautiful pacing to the panels. You two work so well together.

You're gonna make me blush! I'm pleased, too. kits stepped up his game on this one, and it shows. I find him easy to work with, and I feel that he's really in tune with my writing. This is the forth or fith comic we've done, and the working relationship is really coming tgether.