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Redwall Haiku 3

This haiku describes a morning at Redwall Abbey.

Redwall is © by Brian Jacques, All rights reserved.
15 years ago
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A and J
@a-and-j 15 years ago
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Waiters set the plates
Friar cooked up the meal
Hares ate each morsel.
Foxpiper
@foxpiper 15 years ago
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Hares ate everything
All of the Redwallers starved
So much for breakfast
A and J
@a-and-j 15 years ago
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Rub it in, why don't ya?
Foxpiper
@foxpiper 15 years ago
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I just was writing
In response to your haiku
With another one
A and J
@a-and-j 15 years ago
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I know, but the skill and comedy was overpowering. Seriously, we need more poets like you here.
Foxpiper
@foxpiper 15 years ago
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If you think this was comical, you should read some renku.
A and J
@a-and-j 15 years ago
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Renku? Whazzat?
Foxpiper
@foxpiper 15 years ago
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Renku is a Japanese form of collaborative linked poetry. One poet writes the first line and another writes the second line. The first line is usually artistic while the second line is vulgar.
A and J
@a-and-j 15 years ago
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I can imagine the usefulness of this.

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In the calm morning
The abbey bells tolled softly
Redwallers awoke 

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