Shoot 1 - P29
Sorry for the slightly later than usual post today. Life got in the way a little bit when we were supposed to place the text on the page ^^;
But here we have cheap, corny dialog for the scene. The misspellings are intention, just so it's clear ;P Looks like Tenzer is going to be robbed! D: but robbed of what!?
Keep watching to find out ;P
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But here we have cheap, corny dialog for the scene. The misspellings are intention, just so it's clear ;P Looks like Tenzer is going to be robbed! D: but robbed of what!?
Keep watching to find out ;P
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I dare you not to....
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The leading into it will make it that much better :3
.... I genuinely don't have much more to add- I'm speechless. I mean, it's good work, but the combination of the worst lines this side of the original Resident Evil game and the vibrant, high-calibre artwork makes my jaw hit the floor in astonishment. Still, I have got to give Tod credit for trying his best to talk like what I assume to be the Team Fortress 2 Engineer
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Ah, just take it with a grain of salt. I'm being a bit fussy, but I still like your comic strips, Mydnyte. Oh, and credit to Easyspark and Lightdevil, too. Tell them I said hello or something. *laughs jokingly and pats you on the back*
We're glad you enjoy it though :)
If the dialogue is that realistic, then, and I cannot believe I'm saying this, I don't think I ever want to watch porn again.
(You realise I was only having a bit of a joke in my previous comment, right? I don't know why I bother saying useless bits of trivia, anecdotes and irrelevant Youtube links. Figure out how my mind and my psyche work, and I'll recommend you for a Nobel Prize.)
You'll have to forgive me for my views, as I am a bit of a Grammar Nazi. I hate bad English, but maybe that has to do with the fact I grew up in a large English-speaking community. I don't expect Shakespearean prose, but I try to have a good command of the English language.
I have origins of two of the largest English-speaking countries in the world, so I have no excuse not to speak/type in a coherent, comprehensible manner. I hope you understand. While I know it's bad dialogue on purpose, it is still a pet peeve of mine.
You see, Tod is the type of person who will 'get into character' and make it cheesy/corny or what have you. Tenzer just plays along with the gig. Each character's writing, speech, mannerisms and also spelling is a reflection of how they talk. if there IS a misspelling, and it's on purpose, look at it by individual phonemes and sound the word out to get a better understanding of how they talk.
It goes without saying we appreciate when stuff IS caught by our readers that we miss, but sometimes the bad grammar and spelling is meant. Look at people in the real world, and how many of them actually have great grammar? xD This comic is just the same :P each person's grammar will be different than the next. :)
On a side note...not all porns are THAT bad lol there are SOME that are just so corny though...
Suprise Butt-Sexxins!!!! Yea!
Except his butt cherry to be popped.
evilest bunneh is off of donnie darko tho
nothing beats that *shudders*
BUT, regardless, I can't wait to see him try!
Hell, in Michigan it's not considered rape if the 'victim' keeps their shoes on.
How wrong is that?