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Forgotten Dreams
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This Pice I wrote just for you to listen too ^^ I hope that you enjoy it.
17 years ago
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5 Likes
You stuck to one set of instruments throughout, and the melody was at times dissonant with the chord structure. The drumbeat could have used a bit more variation, and the bass drum at the beginning was far too long.
Now good things.
It has a decent backbone for the main chord structure, even though it's only one main chord structure that you have. None of the instruments were particularly unpleasant per se. The melody was, for the most part, nice to listen to, and it had a charming feel to it as a whole. I'm gonna say 3 out of 5 for this one.