Let’s build a garden.
Full of color, full of life.
Plants to harvest, piñatas to raise.
The white lined boundaries to show,
Where is safe for us to play.
We’ll start small, our experience shall bloom,
With little blue petals, as the night grows near.
The newly tended land,
Will attract black and white critters,
Before they cocoon to citizenize in color.
Oranges, reds, blues, and more.
It’s a childhood dream coming true.
Time for window shopping in the village.
Many stores to choose from.
Decorations, seeds, produce and tools.
There’s a shop to clothe your loved piñatas,
A coin trader to buy new species.
It’s time to buy mini homes within your land.
The piñata need privacy too,
They’ll dance for their eggs
When your garden provides,
All they could ever want.
We’ll watch this world unfold.
There are many secrets for us to discover,
But first, let’s stay to listen.
Listen to the history of this island.
The island that makes our garden possible.
A tale of a family and the troubles they face,
How the father found success.
Now here we are to further the story,
With the piñata and life we grow.
Written by: Fane Star
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The Fantasy Garden - medium poem
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Here's a stupid little poem for a stupid little game. Haha. I'm partially obsessed with the game Viva Piñata, a cute game about building a garden to support the local piñata wildlife. It's obviously geared towards children and there's even a t.v. show about it, but it's fun if you like cute things and having a customizable gaming experience. This was fun to write though. This was written on 12/26/2016.
Written by me, Fane Star.
Written by me, Fane Star.
9 years ago
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"With the piñata and life we grow"
To me, a pinata is a work of art that you sacrifice to pieces, in order to get to the "within"
You have to deconstruct the established, in order to build.
you have to "kill your darlings" in order to grow.
- which is a big deal for writers.
It's not a "stupid little poem". I have a feeling you're a greater poet than you think.
I don't think I can express in words how much your comments mean to me.
I love the view you gave of a piñata. You provide a very beautiful point that I didn't have in mind while I was writting this. Maybe that's part of the reason why I love the game and felt the need to write about it. Maybe deep down I felt similarly and wanted to portray it. :D