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The Naughty King [2]
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Imported from SF2 with no description.
12 years ago
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"She teased the king just as he did to her.She would gently touch Simbas balls with the tip of her tongue and then lick the rim of his massive tool."
I'm sure you meant Mufasa, not Simba. Also there some parts where you forgot to put a space, however as you can undoubtedly see from reading this review. I have no business trying to correct sentence structure. So over all. good job.
Thanks for the review.