i'll admit the face is not the best thing for me to draw, but i'm still trying. if you don't mind, what is it you see that's wrong with the face? i know there are tings to work on, but i don't know what.

You see, from my perspective, I see that the muzzle is sideways, when its front should be showing, even if slightly. Plus, there's no "space" between it and the forehead. Also, you could always use some nice reference pictures (preferrably, ones that are similar to the position you desire), it often happens a lot.
There is this slight curve that separates the forehead from the muzzle, pretty much like our noses (unless it's a Bull Terrier, heh). Another observation is that the ears might be too close to each other.
Basically, just some structural details. I believe that is all.

ok, thank you so much! i knew it wasn't looking right but i never knew what was wrong with it

You're welcome! I look forward to your sucess as an artist