This is the second time in as many pages that you've broken the fourth wall. For me .. this jolts me back out of the story's immersion and doesn't help with maintaining interest.

I like the 4th wall breaking since this is a lampoon of games.

Hmmm after I look at this, I remembered on FinalFantasy for the GameBoy xDD
Good work :D

Can you please poke fun at how characters can still be killed when the game mechanics allow resurrection? That has always ticked me off about fantasy games.

I like how it looks, but I shouldn't judge a comic by its cover alone. I sometimes worry I'll be able to see what jokes are coming ahead of time, as will some others, as I've played a lot of games.

I mean, I'm going to call it and guess you'll do a "Leeeeerrrrrroooooooyyyy Jeeeeennnnnkkkkinnns!" parody, or something about how with female characters the less the armour covers the more protective it is, which I will forecast will lead to our protagonist sleeping with them.

I can't see yet how any of the X-rated content you say will appear tie into this or add to the plot. Do I like furry porn? In general, yes, but I do not see it as an absolute necessity for inclusion. In Behind the Lens I felt it was relevant and added to the story and characters.

Maybe I shouldn't judge before it all happens, but this is my opinion, and you can take it or leave it as you wish, much like with everyone else's.

Hah! Maybe in Anime the average age is 16-18 but 23? Pffft please kid. Ooooh just realized how sexy J'rar is, and once again loving the complete disregard for the 4th wall here XD

hehe i love this X3 arguing with the speech bubbles is adorable ^^

This feels like story that you let develop before reading through, so let them put our 4-5 before trying to decipher it. I'm probably wrong but that is my approach. Drawings look fantastic as usual for you guys.

Ignore the guy saying that the fourth wall is something to stay away from--it's a fun approach, and while I can understand his annoyance if it was going to be permanent, it's pretty amusing right now. And can everyone else hear the narrator? I have Bastion's narrator stuck in my head.

I'm really liking the breaking of the 4th wall and with only the main character able to hear the voice, it makes me think of the Will Ferrel movie 'Stranger Than Fiction'. What kind of quest will the narrator have J'rar do, I wonder (perhaps fight off some bandits wreaking havoc, or perhaps explore a cave for treasure....typical quests :P)?

Haha, I think it's going great so far. I love the humor in it, and hooray for birdies! Keep it up guys!

hes cute

lol typical rpg start XD bed.. adventure?... boss fight !?!?! win... bed

Yes Mr. Awesome Hybrid you, a journey to...Save the universe from...THE THIEVES OF PIE!