Trying to work with a less sensitive Wacom and I'm not happy with it.

I liked the original Dragonball, Dragonball Z was...well...too long and full of: "AHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHH AHHHHHHH!" for like five episodes before they actually did anything. Cell Saga was atrociously long, except for some interesting funny stuff with Super Saiyan Goku and Gohan acting like ordinary people and breaking everything they touch because their too damned strong. Majin Buu was just as lengthy to where I think they could have cut out at least half of what they did because it was meaningless. And most of those episodes were supposed to happen within the course of a week, it seemed longer.

But since I've seen every episode, I have more appreciation for Dragonball Z Abridged, which cuts out like 10 of all that and gets down to the fight as well as being just awesomely funny and making a lot of meta and in jokes to the material.

Shenron is equally funny with lines like: "Oh, great, it's you guys again! Can't anyone else find these damned things?" or "Don't come cryin' to me when half your asses gets killed. Oh, who am I kidding, you will." or

Shenron: "Has it even been a year?!"

Oolong: "It's been one year, 2 months and..."

Shenron: "SHUT THE HELL UP!"

I'm waiting for the episode where they have Shenron finally snap and go Godzilla on East Town or something due to basically the same douchebags over and over calling upon him to fix their fuck ups.

I'm waiting for the fanfiction in which Shenron hunts down people who attempt to gather the Dragonballs for a wish. And then ends up killing them to prevent the wish from happening.

aw yeah that'd one hell of a fanfiction :D, especially since we'd get to learn more about Shenron and what hes like.

I attempted to write such a story once.

:o

Yes, I know.

What do you think of the image?

I think it's pretty good.

Since you're asking for more detailed critique...

- First impression looks good, this art has its own style, saturated and strong inking, it "pops" and definitely has a wow factor.

Detailed look,
- sketch rendition still looks good without any significant flaws
- I like the fire ashes flying rendition
- I would not have let the rays go in front of the dragon
- Hair strands render well for the first /quick look, but as an artist who drew this, I think it would bother me, and wloud have worked more the strands in the shadow to give a more realistic look to them and volume
- the shading of the scales on the neck doesn't create volume, it feels like the light is not where it should be, at first look it's fine but analisys tells me you've rendered more the front abd back scales areas as 2 tubes which it is not.

They're called Dragonballs. Yes, that's it. Thanx.