the clothes look like they belong to starfox. great pic though

hi lupine!!!
awesome pic

Hmmm... Since you're asking... Maybe you in turn can tear down my last pic posted as a critique trade :)...

Here's what I see:

You could've worked the stars.
The inking technique wrinlkes and all is nice but it's not clean: it looks like it was low resolution and imported on a higher res background. It looses points on that.
The wrinkle shadows are pretty good but I think too strong...
And you could add a shade layer to darken the front.