The intro caught me as a bit iffy (the double bass was a little much before the snare and main melody kicked in I think), but otherwise it sounded very nice. There were a lot of things going on, and it's easy to get caught up in one and just float along with it for a while.

The ending was definitely interesting. You're a big fan of those dissonant intervals, aren't you? The ending started off with some power and grunt behind it, but then I felt like it kind of broke apart and ended in confusion (maybe that's what happens when your endeavor fails I guess...?) Still... with such a melodic song, I would've liked to see it end a little more orderly and either melodically or powerfully, but that could always just be me I guess.

All in all, nice job once again. I definitely enjoyed listening to it.