Changeset 1186041

Timestamp:

06/23/2015 08:45:04 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

Filtr8

Message:

Description change 4

Location:

filtr8-magazine/trunk

Files:

• readme.txt (modified) (2 diffs)
• screenshot-1.png (modified) (previous)

filtr8-magazine/trunk/readme.txt

@@ -8 +8 @@
 License URI: http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html
 
-Effortlessly discover, publish and share amazing stories and news to make your visitors stay longer and come back more often
+Add to your web site a stunning magazine with amazing news, images and stories, highly relevant to your business.
 
 == Description ==
 
-Add to your web site a stunning magazine with amazing news, images and stories, highly relevant to your business. Drive traffic, improve conversion, delight your visitors!
+Effortlessly discover, publish and share amazing stories and news to make your visitors stay longer and come back more often. 
+Drive traffic to your website, improve your conversion rate, and delight your visitors!
 
 With [Filtr8](http://filtr8.com/ "Welcome to Filtr8") you become a publisher of engaging magazine about the latest news, developments and insights in your business area. 
@@ -20 +21 @@
 establishing thought leadership and getting new leads for your business.
 
-Your audience will love it. 
+And your audience will love it.
 
 == Screenshots ==