One of the things that I’ve noticed about the rise of AI is that everything feels so wordy now. I’m sure it’s a byproduct of the popularity of ChatGPT and other LLMs that are designed for language. You’ve likely seen it too on websites that have paragraphs of text that feel unnecessary. Maybe you’re looking for an answer to a specific question. You could be trying to find a recipe or even a code block for a problem. What you find is a wall of text that feels pieced together by someone that doesn’t know how to write.
The Soul of Wit
I feel like the biggest issue with those overly word-filled answers comes down to the way that people feel about unnecessary exposition. AI is built to write things on a topic and fill out word count. Much like a student trying to pad out the page length for a required report, AI doesn’t know when to shut up. It specifically adds words that aren’t really required. I realize that there are modes of AI content creation that value being concise but those are the default.
I use AI quite a bit to summarize long articles, many of which I’m sure were created with AI-assistance in the first place. AI is quite adept at removing the unneeded pieces, likely because it knows where there are inserted in the first place. It took me a while to understand why this bothered me so much. What is it about having a computer spend way too much time explaining answers to you that feels wrong?
Then it hit me. It felt wrong because we already have a perfect example of what an intelligence should feel like when it answers you. It comes courtesy of Gene Roddenberry and sounds just like his wife Majel Barrett-Roddenberry. You’ve probably guessed that it’s the Starfleet computer system found on board every Federation starship. If you’ve watched any series since Next Generation you’ve heard the voice of the ship computer executing commands and providing information to the crew members, guests, and even holographic projections.
Why is the Star Trek computer a better example of AI behavior to me? In part because it provides information in the most concise manner possible. When the captain asks a question the answer is produced. No paragraphs necessary. No use of delve or convolutional needed. It produces the requested info promptly. Could you imagine a ship’s computer that drones on for three paragraphs before telling the first officer that the energy pulse is deadly and the shields need to be raised?
Quality Over Quantity
I’m sure you already know someone that thinks they know a lot about a subject and are more than happy to tell you about what they know. Do they tend to answer questions or explain concepts tersely? Or do they add in filler words and try to talk around tricky pieces in order to seem like they have more knowledge than they actually do? Can you tell the difference? I’m willing to be that you can.
That’s why GPT-style LLM content creation feels so soulless. We’re conditioned to appreciate precision. The longer someone goes on about something the more likely we are to either tune out or suspect it’s not an accurate answer. That’s actually a way that interrogators are trained to uncover falsehoods and lies. People stretching the truth are more likely to use more words in their statements.
There’s also more reasoning behind the padding. Think about how many ads are usually running on sites that have this kind of AI-generated content. Is it just a few? Or as many as possible inserted between every possible paragraph. It’s not unlike video sites like Youtube having ads inserted at certain points in the video. If you insert an additional ad in a video that is a minimum of twenty minutes how long do you think the average video is going to be for channels that rely on ad revenue? The actual substance of the content isn’t as important as getting those extra ad clicks.
Tom’s Take
It’s unlikely that my ramblings about ChatGPT is going to change things any time soon. I’d rather have the precision of Star Trek over the hollow content that creates yarns about family life before getting to the actual recipe. Maybe I’m in the minority. But I feel like my audience would prefer getting the results they want and doing away with the unnecessary pieces. Could this blog post have been a lot shorter and just said “Stop being so wordy”? Sure. But it’s long because it was written by a human.