END OF CHAPTER ONE, THANK YOU FOR BEING HERE SO FAR!!!!
Yesterday was my birthday and so this timing is very nice for me. I'm gonna take a break to finish working on some things for the Heartbeat Highschool TTRPG, and then I'll be back with some cool character info pages and maybe a call for character QnA stuff. Please look forward to it!
In the meantime, your support on Patreon would mean the world to me if you've enjoyed the ride so far. I will definitely need the money while I continue writing chapter two and get it ready to the point that I can start sharing things about it on Patreon and then start producing pages...!
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The stranger stares into the darkness beyond the wall that the torch sits upon. He speaks again, wincing as if chastised.
STRANGER: ...Well, no, there was no guarantee that she'dβ But she DID. If she hadn't, I wouldn't be here right now reporting on it, I'd still be after her for proof.
He pauses.
STRANGER: I AM dedicated.
A moment of silence, the focus entirely on the inky abyss beyond the torchlight.
STRANGER: I'll see to it.
With that, he flips his cloak back and retreats. Behind him, the view has pulled back enough to reveal a mural on the same wall as the torch. At first it is blurry, the focus entirely on the stranger as he leaves. In the next panel, with the stranger gone, the mural is now in focus to reveal a woman with animal ears, entangled by a pattern that interlocks across her body. She appears to be crying, arms held out wide in front of a planetary background. Beyond the torch, in the darkness that the stranger was speaking into, there are two sets of glowing eyes, both low to the ground.
End Chapter One
CHAPTER ONE WORD COUNT
Total: 2653
1. Nathan (996)
2. Alex (711)
3. Ray (412)
4. Leigh (230)
5. Chris (171)
6. Stranger (92)
7. Eli (24)
8. Woman noticing fire (8)
9. Man noticing fire (6)
10. Person shouting βfireβ (3)
Omg thank you for such fun insight!! I always enjoy your posts when I see them around
ooh can't wait to see all the lore play out~ πβ¨
i'm curious what the portal abilities fall under tho! (is it some sort of fire since it turns into one eventually hehe? ππ₯)
GREAT QUESTION, that portal sure is strange!! πππ
Hope this project isn't dead. Got referred from the Nora Blue AUniverse author and love this already.
Iris-Grimoire
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26th Jul 2025, 1:58 PM
evil purple is also evil magenta and evil light pink...