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robrichard · benjie · web-flow · commit c99e323de1d2 · 2025-01-10T12:00:46.000-05:00
Co-authored-by: Benjie &lt;benjie@jemjie.com&gt;
diff --git a/spec/Section 7 -- Response.md b/spec/Section 7 -- Response.md
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ If an error can be associated to a particular field in the GraphQL result, it
 must contain an entry with the key `path` that details the path of the response
 field which experienced the error. This allows clients to identify whether a
 `null` result is intentional or caused by a runtime error. The value of this
-entry is described in the [Path](#sec-Path) section.
+_path entry_ is described in the [Path](#sec-Path) section.
 
 For example, if fetching one of the friends' names fails in the following
 operation:
@@ -240,15 +240,17 @@ discouraged.
 
 ### Path
 
-:: A _path entry_ allows for the association with a particular field reached
-during GraphQL execution. The value for this entry must be a list of path
-segments starting at the root of the response and ending with the field to be
-associated with. Path segments that represent fields must be strings, and path
-segments that represent list indices must be 0-indexed integers. If a path
-segment is associated with an aliased field it must use the aliased name, since
-it represents a path in the response, not in the request.
+:: A _path entry_ is an entry within an _error result_ that allows for
+association with a particular field reached during GraphQL execution.
 
-When the _path entry_ is present on an "Error result", it identifies the
+The value for a _path entry_ must be a list of path segments starting at the
+root of the response and ending with the field to be associated with. Path
+segments that represent fields must be strings, and path segments that represent
+list indices must be 0-indexed integers. If a path segment is associated with an
+aliased field it must use the aliased name, since it represents a path in the
+response, not in the request.
+
+When the _path entry_ is present on an _error result_, it identifies the
 response field which experienced the error.
 
 ## Serialization Format
