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Fix broken links, typos, and inconsistent formatting in the Style Guide for Flutter Repo.

Fixes 150164.

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swrenn commented Jun 13, 2024

My merge commit was unsigned, initially. I signed it and force-pushed the new commit.

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Now that people are much more likely to have this wiki page open in any number of different editors, it makes sense to group the paragraphs together (rather than having line breaks every 80 characters in some places, and no line breaks in others).

Overall I'm a huge fan of the reformatting & grammar fixing here—just had a few questions before we merge.

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swrenn commented Jun 13, 2024

@nate-thegrate, I pushed the changes you requested. Thanks for reviewing this PR so quickly.

This is my first Flutter PR. What's the proper etiquette for "Resolve conversation" button? Do I wait for the reviewer to press it?

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@nate-thegrate, I pushed the changes you requested. Thanks for reviewing this PR so quickly.

This is my first Flutter PR. What's the proper etiquette for "Resolve conversation" button? Do I wait for the reviewer to press it?

No problem!

As far as whether to click the "Resolve conversation" button, it isn't mentioned anywhere in the wiki's code review section. I think it makes sense to resolve a comment in your PR if it's been addressed or is no longer relevant—that way, the next person to review won't waste any time reading it.

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LGTM! 👍

Thanks for making this contribution!

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A large-scale reformatting like this should never be mixed with non-formatting changes, because it makes it impossible to effectively review the changes.

So if you'd like to pursue unwrapping all the paragraphs onto single giant lines, that should be its own PR. (Personally I think that's an unhelpful direction — I'd much prefer to move toward semantic line breaks, the same convention used in the other large Markdown files in the Flutter project. But others may have different reactions.)

Then the edits changing sentence case to title case, changing ### to #, splitting one item into two, changing "Designing an API" to "API design", and all the rest can be a separate PR. That way people can see each of those changes in order to review them.

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swrenn commented Jun 20, 2024

@gnprice, thanks for the recommendation. @nate-thegrate suggested the same on Discord.

I force-pushed a single commit for this PR with just the typo, grammar, and markdown changes. That was easier than reverting earlier commits, as I had made the whitespace changes first.

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I have to say: it's much, much easier to read the diffs this time around.

Thanks for putting in the work and for being receptive to feedback 👍

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Thanks, this diff is a lot more readable.

There are some typo and markup fixes here which are good. I think the stylistic changes in this PR generally aren't helpful, though. I'd be glad to see a revised version that focused just on the changes that are clear improvements.

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Sending a 3rd consecutive approval 👍

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swrenn commented Jun 26, 2024

Thanks, everyone, for the attention on this PR. I have reverted the edits and retained only the grammar and syntax changes. My impression reading this document is that it needs some love from a writer, but maybe that can happen in the future. I'm not a writer, anyway.

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swrenn commented Jun 26, 2024

Sending a 3rd consecutive approval 👍

Thanks, @nate-thegrate, for the support on this PR.

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LGTM

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