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design-proposal(ip-address-claims): rewrite the prose as plain technical statements
A reading pass over the proposal and both decision records, with no
change of substance. Every sentence now names a component, says what it
does, and gives the consequence in a sentence of its own. Evaluative
asides, closing restatements, and reassurances that the rule already
implied are deleted. A fact that was derived in several sections is now
stated once in the section that owns it and referenced from the others.
The document is a third shorter with no fact removed.
Signed-off-by: Timofei Larkin <[email protected]>
Assisted-by: LLM1 parent 00add5a commit 82cd418
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